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Reviewer: drema (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 08:33 AM · On: I'd come for you

That was beautiful! I don't want her to go, but I can see where it might be necessary and that just ticks me off. Anyway, I guess more of whatever they need to complete the slow burn to their HEA. Maybe if everyone else can share, help Bella see an untarnished view of what they had from others, idk, does that make sense?

Author's Response:

I get what you're saying... No matter what happens, try to have faith.  We know what we are doing (we think).

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: carebear (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 08:29 AM · On: I'd come for you

ARRGHHH...I am chomping at the bit to see what happens after the wedding!  I LOVED Jacob in this chapter...I like to believe in the potential of people and he surely did step up as a man...well played!



Author's Response:

Neither Tammy nor I find people unredeemable.  Jacob needed to man up and he did....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 07:54 AM · On: I'd come for you

Wow Bella's really coming out of her shell! She's gotten pretty bold!

Way to go Jacob for stepping up & apologizing! An old boyfriend from hs reached out to me & apologized for hurting me & crushing my self-esteem recently & now we chat almost daily.



Author's Response:

Isnt' it amazing how much a heartfelt apology, even if delayed, can do?

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: KimmieB (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 05:20 AM · On: I'd come for you

That was amazing.  I loved how Bella is starting to come out of her shell.  It also appears that talking to Jake and him apologizing has created a major break through for Bella and Edward.  I also cannot wait to find out about Jasper's plan.  Bella has to stay.  They have come way too far to throw it all away now!!!  I cannot wait to see what happens over the next two days!



Author's Response:

We shall all see what happens and why.  Just hang in there:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: VampinGina (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 03:55 AM · On: I'd come for you

Reconciliation is good thing. Now some progress and how to get her to stay. Think it will be a little easier now.  Update soon.



Author's Response:

Ah, but is anything truly easy with these two?

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 03:24 AM · On: Prologue

That would work cuz he has to get her used to her nakedness and convince her she's stimulating hehe plus he needs to worship her repeatedly preferably with his tongue gotta prime her for the. Main event!

Author's Response:

LOL!  There will be... proper preparations....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 03:00 AM · On: I'd come for you

More of? Bella nsd edward in their bubble preferably naked in bed!!!

Author's Response:

We may have to write that in.....naked Sunday or something.  Gah!

Reviewer: dellatwi (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 02:57 AM · On: I'd come for you

Cheers!!! I stomped on crickets. that was awesome bella needs some release though lol and to be able to be ok when edwards seedy past comes up again

Author's Response:

She needs something, that's for sure......Her POV is up next for the wedding.....are you curious?

Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 02:37 AM · On: I'd come for you

i want bella to man up and go for what she wants!! let the inner tiger out!!



Author's Response:

Rawr!  Thank you so much for your review.

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 02:22 AM · On: I'd come for you

That was the hottest handjob ever!

There's always something you say in every chapter that captures my fancy and in this one is when Edward uses the word headway because my mind did go there.  I'm just a perv at heart.

Jacob's apology was surprising and necessary and the forgiveness of it set them free.  I hope this is a huge turning point for Bella.  I don't want her to return home.  I'd love for her to stay in Forks.  She's getting a do-over.  Edward too, but especially for Bella to not be that frightened, self-doubting girl anymore.



Author's Response:

Snickers......how bout the chapter title "I'd come for you"   lol!

This was a very pivotal chapter for all characters in order for them to move forward  Keep with us for the wedding up next.

Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 02:21 AM · On: I'd come for you

Wow Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:55 PM · On: I'd come for you

Started off hot and heavy and ended sweet. Nice balance! Still waiting for the raunchy monkey sex though lol



Author's Response:

Raunchy monkey sex.....let me just write that down for later....winks...

Reviewer: bbbluez (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:33 PM · On: I'd come for you

Awww! Loved this chapter! Hopefully she stays!

Author's Response:

Poor Bella has some big choices to make in the upcoming chapters!  Stay with us for the wedding up next!

Reviewer: MrsHannahCullen (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:58 PM · On: I'd come for you

You hear cheers definately!

What a cute chapter! I just love these versions of Bella and Edward :)



Author's Response:

Thnak you so much for your support!  It is much appreciated!

Reviewer: mnment (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:41 PM · On: I'd come for you

Can you hear it?  There it is again.  That sweat, soft voice of Marvin Gaye.  "Let's get it on, sugar.  Let's get it on."    I usually am not into song fic, but I just hear it in the background.  "Givin' yourself to me can never by wrong if the love is true."  I am going to go home and key that up and rope me some husband.  Thanks you two.  I know he would thank you as well ;-).



Author's Response:

I like it....I think I may be hearing "Sexual Healing" too.   LMAO!  Hope you had fun with the hubs! xo

Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 09:28 PM · On: I'd come for you

awww wow that was a great chapter!! <333 wow well it definitely was a good morning for Edward and Bella lol I loved how you wrote that, it was very realistic and so sweet. I loooooooove this story so much!! i cant wait for the next chapter! :) Thanks soo much for the update <3



Author's Response:

Gah!  Thanks so much!  Glad you liked Edward's happy wake up call!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:23 PM · On: I'd come for you

Touch. Feel. 

Taste. Savor.

Embrace. Consume.

I love you. I love you. I love you.

You never know what a soft, soothing slumber will awaken you to.

It's your Heaven. And her name is Bella. 

And damnit, she just gave you a 'saucy smirk'. Life is good.

But hold on dear Edward, it's going to get great.

There is hope for you yet.



Author's Response:

Wow!  Isabel, you make me shiver with your reviews.  Finally a light at the end of the tunnel for these two as they take baby steps forward and meet in the middle.  BPOV is up next and there is more progress.....just stay with us......

 

Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 07:54 PM · On: I'd come for you

Rah rah rah! Nice touch having Jacob fess up and begin the chain of forgiveness and moving forward.



Author's Response:

Forgiveness is key!  Now our characters can move forward and heal.....BPOV is up next!

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 07:28 PM · On: I'd come for you

Wow! awesome chapter. I would like to see Bella get off please LOL really tho, super hot and I love the end with Jake. it was a long time coming, to say the least.



Author's Response:

Bella's turn is coming...snickers....I just said coming......

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: edwardsvolvo (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 07:11 PM · On: I'd come for you

more hot lovin' please!!! Bring Sexward back!!!



Author's Response:

Mmmmmm, Sexward!  He may be around sooner than you think.....

Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 07:08 PM · On: I'd come for you

I keep telling myself that they're making progress, but it sure is slow!  I know, I know, it's not really slow.  I'm just impatient!  Actually, I'm also convinced that Bella's going back home.  Dunno, why, but I just think she's going to end up there.  The real question for me is what will happen once she gets home??



Author's Response:

Well, I can't give away the plot, but stick with us.  These two are on the mend but will need time before they are truly healed.  BPOV is up next and when you get into her head you may understand more....

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 07:07 PM · On: I'd come for you

wow. First of all, EPOV's are always stupendous. Then we get a little lemonade at the beginning --- and now love??? ahhh. Fantastic. Cheers all around!



Author's Response:

TYSM!  I am so pleased that you enjoyed EPOV.  BPOV is up next and is absolutely fantastic as well.  Stick with us!

Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 07:05 PM · On: I'd come for you

That was so beyond fantastic!  Bella's progress with Edward physically was awesome.  I love her curiousity and, so far, she isn't letting her head get in the way too much.

As for the Jacob thing?  That was so great.  I feel like Bella and Edward both needed that moment to help overcome some of their own shit.  I just REALLY hope Bella stays!



Author's Response:

The physical progress and their reactions to one another was so much fun to write! 

Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: annette90210 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 07:05 PM · On: I'd come for you

That was wonderful I loved it. I like how they didnt just jump into sex like a lot of characters do. Great writing!!!  Thank you.



Author's Response:

No, thank you for reading and reviewing and for understanding that we want this to be realistic.....cockblocks and all!

Reviewer: annette90210 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 06:34 PM · On: Fragile

God ladies that was so hott and sexy.  Oh bella, embrace your inner sexy self.  It is ok, girlfriend.  Now, go touch that blankie!!

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