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Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:18 PM · On: Nightingale
OMFG! BAWLING HERE!! FUCKING AUNT BEULAH BIOTCH FROM HELL!! WOW! CANNOT WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU HAVE IN STORE FOR THESE TWO AND HOW THEY CAN BOTH GET BETTER SO THEY CAN BE TOGETHER. I AM STILL SO UPSET WITH EDWARD AND WHAT HE DID TO HER ALL THOSE YEARS AGO. HE IS PAYING THE PRICE NOW AND POOR BELLA IS SO MESSED UP. GAH! MY HEART GOES OUT TO HER. I RAN THE EMOTIONAL ROLLERCOASTER WHITH THIS CHAPTER AND YOU GIRLS DID A BEAUTIFUL JOB. LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE
Author's Response: It is such a painful chapter and we know it hurts. But we will make it okay in the end.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: mamajo76 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Nightingale
wow she is fifty shades of crazy in the head
Author's Response: She's not really crazy - but she is pretty severly scarred.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Belindella (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Nightingale
GAH! How sad! And how beautifully written. I wish I could write like that! I was entranced by the whole chapter and was right there with bella, feeling her pain. Wonderful job!
Author's Response: *hugs* We appreciate it darlin! Your writing is lovely!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Nightingale
OMG!! * tears fall as I look for something to throw* Oh why did that evil bitch of an aunt have to ruin this for them. Aaaahhh I cried with them as Bella was asking him to let her go!! Oh the heartache!! Please udate soon so that I won't be crying to long.
Author's Response: It's going to get harder before it is easier, but don't worry, we're HEA girls.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Nightingale
Freakin Aunt Betsy. What is her problem with bella? I wouldn't be opposed to her accidently falling down the stairs. Their last night, *tears*
Author's Response: Aunt Betsy has her own level of hell reserved!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: SHUbaby5182 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Nightingale
guh. ok i think i'm broken now too!! please update soon :( im so sad
Author's Response: We broke ourselves! We broke everything!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Fragile
Wow it was very hot and they did not even have sex. I can't wait for if they do.
Author's Response: We'll find out:)
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Reviewer: Belindella (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Hallelujah
Holy cow, that was fantastic! Me needs a little action after THAT! He's so adorably sweet to her!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Hallelujah
HOLY SHIT LADIES!! THAT WAS FANFRICKINGTABULOUS AND I NEED A DRINK AFTER THAT!!!! WOW!!!!!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Nightingale
Well, shit.
Things are still wonky for these two and now she's going to leave?
Grrr...
Author's Response: She has to. They just mask each other's symptoms. Allow them to sort of put a bandaid on them but never deal. So one of them needs to leave and, right now, she's the one strong enough to do it.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jbscarolina (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Nightingale
:(
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Reviewer: treymaine (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Nightingale
So beautiful to start, to the abyss with the heartfail at the end. Nicely written (even if I cried like a baby at the end of the chapter)
Author's Response: We are so glad you enjoyed it (even despite the heartfail).
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: eclipsy84 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Nightingale
Awesome chapter. Thank you for not taking the easy way. As much as it sucks, Bella is making the right choice. Edward started his healing by going to therapy, now it's Bella's turn.
Author's Response: *hugs you for understanding*
We are trying to keep somewhat close to reality. We know it stinks, but we had to do this.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:37 PM · On: Nightingale
Wow. While I hate the fact that they have to be away from each other, I can completely understand. They can't fix each other. They can patch the hurt, but patches are only tentative. At least they have each other's love to help buoy them through this time alone. Great job. :)
Author's Response: *hugs you for understanding why*
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Nightingale
you better be hiding and get to fixing this shithole you just wrote
Author's Response: We're working on it, slowly but surely....
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Reviewer: b00ks4u (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Nightingale
Tears. Lots of them. I'm glad you have chosen this route. It's better this way. They truly need to heal. I'd love a one shot with esme and Carlisle with the old bat!
Author's Response: LOL! Watching Big Daddy C hold Esme back from knocking Aunt Betsy's lights out?
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Nightingale
therre is alot of back and forth in this one ... made me dizzy LMAO it was an awesome chapter and I can't wait for the next one ... I see a few sad Chapters coming up next though, which sucks but I'm sure it has to happen for HEA....
love you guys!!
Author's Response: She's very back and forth - her mind sprints from 'okay' to 'hot mess'. Yeah, next few are NOT pretty.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Nightingale
Yes I have a thought. Although I strongly suspected this was coming, you really should hide. And don't think that white flag is going to save you. ;)
But realistically, if Bella hasn't begun to heal in all these years, going back to the same situation -- where she's alone and it's easy to avoid facing everything -- isn't going to help. I realize that now she want to heal, and that's a big first step, but it will take more changes than that. Some MAJOR therapy is in that woman's future.
Author's Response: They both definitely need more help than they have received thus far.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Nightingale
I want to beat the shit out of that old lady. What a sorry drunk old bitch. I would've loved to hear what Esme said to her. As much as my heart is breaking for them I think it's right that they have fix themselves before they can really be together. I can't stand to see Edward cry because it makes me cry. Good chapter.
Author's Response: *hugs you for understanding*
It's a horrible, ugly thing, but this really did have to happen.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: bellangel5 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Nightingale
*SNIFF SNIFF* why?! it's not fair i say :(
Author's Response: It may not be fair, but it is necessary. Try to keep the faith!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Flowergirl82 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Nightingale
I´m so mad right now. You have NO idea! I´m mad at Aunt Betsy for being such a stupit b****! I´m mad at Bella for being so broken, I´m mad at Edward for having dont this to here. I´m mad at Renee and all the men that did that to her.... but mostly I´m mad because she is right. *sigh*
Both Bella and Edward need to face their demons and fix themselves before they can finally be together. I just hope it won´t take too long.
Thank you so much for this incredible story. It´s just... great!
But please... PLEASE!!!! Don´t make me wait too long. It´s time for Bella to heal and to come home for good.
Author's Response: It's not just Bella that needs some work, trust us. But don't worry, we're both HEA girls. Hang in there!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EmmettsGirl89 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Nightingale
*shakes fist* fucking aunt betsey!!!!!
im freakin out, please update soon!
Author's Response: Hang in there. Next chapter in queue.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:42 PM · On: Nightingale
Awww, poor Brokella and Chubward *tear*.
*sad sigh* but I knew it wasn't going to be all fluffy and ranbows straight off the bat. I mean, come on, this is the two of you we're talking about here! You fabulous ladies are the best writers I have ever had the pleasure of befriending. Seriously.
I'ma cut Aunt Betsie up though, juss sayin'. Cause, well, you know the bitch deserves it.
It was awesome, bbs!!!
For reals.
I can't wait to see what else you've got planned for us.
Oh, and the razorblades were more like minor pin-pricks.
I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Ily both,
Author's Response: *hugs you tight*
What would we do without your belief in us? Plus you know our MO and it'll be okay in the end.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: missy85 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Nightingale
Oh, so sad. But FINALLY bella figures out she needs to get some real help- and so does edward. Im looking forward to their HEA, and glad we're one step closer to it
Author's Response: It was difficult, we know, but this had to happen. They need to get better before they get together.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Nightingale
Oh sweet baby Jesus. So sad. So beautiful. So effing right. Gah! I love this. Hard.
Author's Response: *hugs* We are so appreciative of your support! Hang in there with us!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
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