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Reviewer: Iwant2sparkle (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:53 PM · On: Nightingale

Duuuuuudes....that was not what I was expecting!  Lol.  I understand though.  I'll be clutching my heart while I wait on the next chapter.  But I have doubts that it'll be any better.



Author's Response:

It seems a lot of folks were not expecting it, but it did have to happen.  Alas, it is going to get worse before it gets better.  But it WILL get better.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Nightingale

well that came out of NO WHERE!!!! :)



Author's Response:

It took a lot of folks off guard, or so it seems.  Alas, it had to happen.

 

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Reviewer: twimom220 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Nightingale

damn it they were so close. but bella is right they need to work shit out first.



Author's Response:

So close, but yet, so far.

 

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Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:11 PM · On: Nightingale

Wow that was so heartbraking :( Poor Bella and Edward. I so wish things could be fixed just like that, but thats not how the real world works..I really enjoyed this chapter because it gave a huge look into to Bellas mind and what she is constantly thinking. Thank you both so much for the update! I was so happy to see that there was a new chapter :) Cant wait for the next one!! <333



Author's Response:

Bella's mind is a very confused place to be.  So in love and at peace with that, but so tortured in every other way.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: montannaleigh (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Nightingale

EEEK!!!  I want to kill that stupid old lady. but Bella is right. they need to get it together before they can actually BE together. awesome chapter :)



Author's Response:

*hugs you for understanding*

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Nightingale

oh fer fuck's SAKE!!!!

I'm gonna cut that old bitch's offing tongue out. 

FER FUCK'S SAKE!!!!

Gah! I don't know who the hell to smack first. I'm going to bed!



Author's Response:

Lil bit frustrated, hunh?  LOL!

 

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Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Nightingale

OMFG....this chapter was many shades of fucked up!!!!!! so she's leaving him just to what work on herself? and they are just gonna wait? UGH this is killing me! but i love you guys and will be patient....



Author's Response:

It's painful, but it has to happen.  They tend to bury their personal issues around each other, enabling each other to cover it up and not deal.  If they kept on like this, eventually, it would blow up in their faces in a far far bigger way.

So, off they go...

Have faith!  You know we're HEA girls at heart!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: steph3697 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Nightingale

i'm a social work major idk if that will help you guys but its alot like counseling. i might help but then again i'm  still working on my ba.



Author's Response:

We so appreciate you offering!  We will definitely contact you if we need additional help!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Nightingale

Don't have to wave the white flag, this had to be done. It was incredible how they came to that conclusion, I was crying likea a baby. I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

*hugs you for understanding*

We know it's not easy, but it has to be done.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Deex (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:38 PM · On: Nightingale

Fuck... nearly made me weep like a baby!!!  So sad... I hope it doesn't take too long to sort themselves out...

I totally like that you referenced NLT in there too!!!  Kudo's dude!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  I didn't even noticed I did that!  Tee hee.

 

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Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Nightingale

Oh my God...this one just ripped my heart out!  I wanna beat Aunt Betsy with her walker (if she has one)...what a vapid bitch. Not to mention she friggon cockblocked us. Damn...so close!

 This is def what needs to happen though.  They need to heal themselves first before they can be together.  I hope they don't have to be  apart for long.  Great chpater ladies!



Author's Response:

There is a level of hell just for Aunt Betsy and relatives like her.  What an awful hag!

But you're right.  It did need to happen, sad as it is.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: youdazzleme (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:04 PM · On: Nightingale

Knew this was coming but it didn't make it any easier to read. :(

I hope that we get to see Bella go to therapy when she gets back and see her get some peace. 



Author's Response:

We know it hurt.  But it really did have to happen.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: LauraMO (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Nightingale

Aaaaahhhhh!!!!   This one gets the nomination for "Makes you want to throw the computer!"  Kill off Aunt Betsy and let's get Bella & Edward back on track ASAP!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Yeah, we sort of made things hard.  Aunt Betsy should get her own circle of hell....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:48 PM · On: Nightingale

I will be PMing both of you my address so that you can drop Aunt Betsy off at my house and I can give her the beating she so richly deserves. Drunk, bitchy, old, whatever, NO ONE deserves that, not at least our little broken Bella.

At the A/N at the top you mention making Edward fat then chiselled, breaking Bella and then having to fix her. PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY I need you to fix her!!! The angst in this story is killing me softly!!! (In only the best way, mind you.) ; )

I really REALLY hope they get it together, I need lemons and happiness and white dresses and Edward and Bella together forever. Something has to brighten my highly sarcastic life!!!

Fabulously stunning chapter as always!



Author's Response:

We know that it's painful and NOT what anyone *wanted* to happen, but it *needed* to.  Don't worry, though, we are both HEA girls, so have faith!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Sophie_2003 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Nightingale

mmmmm. Seriously? Not sure about this one.

I love your writing, both of you, and I love your stories, but it seems like this impending separation is a bit much - to me at least. I guess I am not familiar enough with mental illness or whatnot, but this just seems to me like she is running away again. And Edward is a saint, because I would just imagine he wants to throw his arms up in the air and say "I give up".

Still, beautiful writing, and I will stay along for the ride.



Author's Response:

We are sorry you feel that way.  Part of her may be feeling like she needs to run, I don't doubt that, but fixing herself, away from Edward who is an enabler to her, is something she needs to do.  We're consulting with several mental health professionals and have been told that we are on the right track (although we do have to adjust for both time frames and to keep the story from stalling, so there is a certain amount of artistic license).

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Nightingale

Ellie (and Tammy)...this is heartbreaking.  I know you don't need me to tell you that!  However, I think that it's a realistic way for B/E to move forward and 'fix' themselves first before fixing each other.  I just wish it wasn't instigated through such a harsh manner!  (Should have known it would be Aunt Betsy again!)

I loved that Bella was panicking but at the same time she saw it so clearly--and she realized that she needs help, even if she knows those other voices are 'wrong'.  And I love that she realizes they BOTH need help and have been avoiding the big issues.

Great job!

--Melanie



Author's Response:

Bella really isn't crazy.  Most of the time she's completely rational and sane - her negative self talk, however, has taken on a life of its own.  They need to do this in order to heal properly.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: shawndray (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Nightingale

Noooo! Gosh. Cliff hanger dude. I really love this story. But jeez I want them together!

Author's Response:

Alas, if we had gotten them together now, it would of collapsed royally. 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Nightingale

.............(speechless)



Author's Response:

 

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Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Nightingale

This chapter was gut wrenching but in my eyes it had to happen. I am so happy that Bella and Edward talked. She was being extremely mature when she said that they both had to fix themselves and be in a "better place". It was heart breaking but it had to happen. I am so damn proud of Bella. 

I know the path to true love is never easy and I trust in you two. 

Also, the almost sexin' was was really hot but I can only imagine how passionate and loving it will be when both of them emerge from this stronger than ever before.

Thank you for sharing this story with us.



Author's Response:

*hugs you for understanding*  It's ugly and painful, but it had to happen.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Nightingale

ok something is seriously worng with bella. as in something in the mind? is she some sort of schizo?? hearing voices and all in her head. is that why yuou guys asked for a psychiatrist? i hope bella sees one. she realizes now that she can't get rid of voices in her head and that is seriously fucked up. and i do not get her logic on why she needed to stay away. :(



Author's Response:

No, she is not a schizo.  The "voices" are her own internal monologue - her own negative self-talk, not foreign voices.  She has PTSD, not schizophrenia.

She will be seeking treatment.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Nightingale

Ok 1st of all the Aunt needs to die LOL. And I can see why Bella is leaving but I just want you to let it be a happy at the end. I hope Bella don't go back and never talk to Edward are come back. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

We are both HEA girls, so don't worry too much.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kmfroggi (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Nightingale

wow. that aunt has some total hate for bella, what is up with that??!!  they were so close, but she's right, they arent right, her especially! i hate to see her go, but it'll be good for her.  great chapter



Author's Response:

I think she has hate for everyone.  She's just one of those spiteful old hags.  Were it not Bella, it would be someone else.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: teamedwardfan (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Nightingale

God, that was heartbreaking.  Stupid fucking Aunt whoever the hell she is.  As hard as it was to read, it was an amazing chapter!

Reviewer: teamedwardfan (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Nightingale

God, that was heartbreaking.  Stupid fucking Aunt whoever the hell she is.  As hard as it was to read, it was an amazing chapter!



Author's Response:

We know it was painful (it hurt to write!) but we had to do it:(

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: amieforshort (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Nightingale

Such a well written almost consumated lemon, lol.  I really like this chapter, I am glad that Bella is starting to see that she is letting these inner demons control too much.  Someone needs to bitch slap the aunt.  I'm just saying.....

Thanks for sharing your story with us, I look forward to your next update.



Author's Response:

*hugs you for understanding why we went this route*

And yes, there is a special circle of hell for relatives like Aunt Betsy!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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