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Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Nightingale

I"m crying. 1:30 in the morning and I'm sitting here in tears over this.
They were SO close to having they're happily ever after. Bella was barely whole for a matter of minutes before that OLD FUCKER had to open her wretched bitter mouth! Ugh, I'd bitch slap the old geezer, really, I would.

Esme and Carlisle must have been so angry and Edward! omg, my heart hurts.

What you two done to me? *sob*

Ellie and Tammy, you two got some 'splaining to do!

But, right now I need tissues, And my blankie *hiccup* :'(

 

Lee <3



Author's Response:

Your blankie or Chubward's?  We hear that his makes folks feel better....

 

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Reviewer: Demize (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Nightingale

This chapter is an emotional rollercoster for edward. I hope that bella will give him a chance to fight for them and fight hrer inner demons for the sake of them two!!



Author's Response:

We hope so too!  It's going to be *so* tempting for both of them to go back to their old ways of coping....

 

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Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Hallelujah

*THUD* My fav song partnered with that awesome lemony goodness and how in love they are. *swoon*
I'm glad that at least they got their moment. It should have happened a long time ago but *sigh* It wasn't the right time.

I.am.died.

LOVED IT!

Lee



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the citrus fruit!  Like the song, it's bittersweet, as you will shortly learn....

 

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Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 07:26 PM · On: As Time Goes By

Aw *sniff* Edward is so aware of everything little thing that goes on with Bella.
The way he just knew that something happened on her walk down the aisle was beautiful. And then she finally opened up to him when he pulled her aside.
I loved that bit.

Such a good chap bb's!

Lee



Author's Response:

They know each other better than anyone will ever know them.  They just need to learn to talk more...

 

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Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 07:10 PM · On: I'd come for you

OMG, LOVED the beginning! Lol, Poor Edward couldn't handle the sight of Bella touching herself, that was hilarious.
And I think Bella did an A+ job on her first try ;)

I don't want her to leave though :(
What will happen to the blankie?...he'll be all alone lol.

Fantastic ending, She said she loved him! And in front of other people!
Big step for brokella.
Amazing.

Lee



Author's Response:

Brokella is trying so hard, but there is so much to deal with.  Poor blankie!  Who will cuddle him???

 

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Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Nightingale

The differences between a man's reaction to an event vs the female's reaction to the same event are far apart.  Edward and Bella both enjoyed each other.  Edward wanted to finish their exploration and time together below in their room.   Bella had been fighting her mental demons all the time she was in Edward's arms and being loved by him as she was loving him.  In her mind, she knows Edward loves her, adores her, and wants her.  But all the remarks made by the men at Renee's plus the blow up at prom with Edward, she has been believing she isn't worthy enough for Edward with her self talk.  She was happy with Edward after the gazebo on the roof and both were laughing and giggling on their way to Edward's reserved room.  Good old Aunt Betsy in her drunken rantings made an evil comment about Bella not being good enough for Edward and trying to trap Edward so she could be in the family.  All of her comments are far from the truth as Bella has been a member of their family from the beginning.  Just because Aunt Betsy may be blood relative, she's not part of the family because no one likes her.  While Bella won her place in the family by her kindness and her loving spirit years and years ago.  I hope Bella realized when Carlisle and Esme were angry was not at Bella heading to a hotel room with Edward, but at the crude and cruel remarks made by Aunt Betsy.  I am surprised Edward didn't just tell her where to fly off on her broomstick.  But he was more concerned about the fearful expression on Bella's face.  Edward knew he needed to get to her to calm her down and to again state what Aunt Betsy said is garbage.  I personally want to break her jaw.  Hopefully once her jaw is wired shut for 6 weeks, she'd learn to think before she opens her offensive mouth.  Drinking her meals through a straw for all that time would be semi-adequate punishment.  She's the aunt every family wishes would get lost somewhere to be never heard from again.  So now Bella has told Edward she has to leave him.  She needs to overcome the vocal demon voices in her head.  She needs to believe that she is a worthy person and all the negative talk she has heard over and over the years is false.  She needs to fix and heal her broken pieces together. Edward she believes he needs to fix himself as well. They can only do that separatedly.  But at least this time the communication avenues should be open to text message, call on the phone, send emails, send letters.  They would be able to stay in contact with each other during their healing process.  If they are going to start from the beginning communication is important in establishing any type of relationship.  Both have admitted to loving only one person in all their lives and that is each other.  So looking forward to how their last night together in Edward's bed is handled and to the pain of separating across the country from the other.  Working through their problems and working towards the other for a healthy, life lasting, and loving relationship forever.



Author's Response:

You make wonderful points.  It all does come down to communication with these two.  The lack of it is what destroyed them to begin with, and if they are ever to be fixed, they will need to start doing much better on this front.

 

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Reviewer: katcullem77 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:46 PM · On: 1997-New kid

So great.



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YAY!  We're glad you're enjoying it!

 

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Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:21 PM · On: 1998 - The Dance

so sweet.  So very sweet.

Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Fragile

Dear Edward, you should total your next volvo (cause we know you're gonna drive one forever now since it saved your life) cause the hot tub action was HAWT! *thud* ;)

I'm glad B is stepping back anymore. She may not be able to move forward at this point but she's making a serious effort. And she loves him!

Amazing!

Lee <3



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Bella is putting herself on the line and trying so hard....

 

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Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 04:17 PM · On: 1997-New kid

Oh gosh, they're adorable!  What a happy pair.  Can't wait to see what happens.



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We wish we could tell you their future was that happy as well...

 

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Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Losing My Religion

OMFG! This chap is tied with the last one.
EPIC shit ladies, really I could not stop laughing and the images of a drunk CARLISLE and CHARLIE had me dying!

Esp when they were singing! LMAO!

Carlisle is hilarious when he's drunk. I'm sure Esme had a good night once he got home LOL. BTW, technically his drunk ass JUMPED out of the car, he didn't fall, the car was still in motion! OMFG! that almost made me fall out my chair.

EEP! E was caught fondling the blankie in the shower! loved it!

GREAT CHAP!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Lee

Reviewer: katcullem77 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 02:57 PM · On: Prologue

I saw this rec'cd at The Fictionators. Can't wait to see where this is going.



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We appreciate you giving the story a try and hope you enjoy it!

 

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Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 02:13 PM · On: Banana Pancakes

Ladies I am SO sorry that I'm behind on my reviews!
I read this awhile ago and I'm now getting to review, plus I had to read it over cause *sniff* This was where MY PARKA was discussed! LOL!!

Gah, The blankie...also I forgot to mention that I NOW look at bananas in a different light, the skin always reminds me of Chubward's blankie! *THUD*

OMFG! Love pony, Heaven pole, tit-tays, I AM CRACKING my shit up again!
This was prob my fav chap out of all! lol.

And damn, when E keeps giving B these little kisses *swoon*
I may need to borrow Dr Cullen ;)

Love ya El & Tam!

Lee <3



Author's Response:

We had fun with the body parts naming:)  LOL!

Dr Chubward is at your service.  We hear he knows his way around an... examination.

 

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Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Two is Better than One

Aw, B helped Emmett plan a party for Edward's bday :D
So sweet!
AHAHA! I LOVED how Edward got back at Aunt Bitchy..er.. I mean Betty *cough* ;)

And we got more kisses!. Edward is finally really understanding how much what he said affected Bella. She wore a one piece swimsuit and a sarong at the pool that was only littered with her very close friends and practically her family.
There weren't any strangers there. *sigh*

I'm happy that she is trying. loved the ending.

 

Lee



Author's Response:

Bella is a hot mess.  Then again, Chubward is too:( 

 

She is definitely trying though.

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Reviewer: Irishone (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:44 AM · On: Nightingale

Major heartfail! Aunt Betsey needs to stumble her drunk ass off of a bridge!! Can't wait for the next update and secretly hoping that there's a lemon nearby for chubward & bella



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Eventually, we'll make things right.  Alas, the next several chapters will be rough ones....

 

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Reviewer: DingoesAteMyBaby (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Nightingale

...Oh, you did not just do that! ...*growls while I look around for my knife sharpener*

I can't wait till you fix this mess! And Auntie B better suffer the consequenses for her foul mouth! Give her enough Laxative to poop her evil brain out!

 

Okay...That said, I'm really in to this story and think you're doing a great job!

Happy writing

D. Mai



Author's Response:

*hugs you*  We know it hurts and that Aunt Betsy needs her own circle of hell, but it had to happen :(  We'll make it better... eventually.

 

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Reviewer: beansprout (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Nightingale

cute... how long are you going to hide behind that whatever furniture you're hiding..

in total honesty this chapter has it good.. so don't you hide there and make us readers happy on the next update? OK? lol... (>_<)



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*hugs you for understanding*

The next few chapters will still be painful, but we WILL make it right in the end.

 

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Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:55 AM · On: Nightingale

You better hide...how could you?

You made me believe the good times were here...*tear rolls down right cheek*

Aunt Betsy needs a kick in her ass...blue haired witch.

They were so close...I don't even have the words to express my disppointment...*sigh*



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We're so sorry!  It had to be done, painful as it was :(

 

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Reviewer: 1ljreader (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 08:50 AM · On: Nightingale

Bella's right, they do need to work on thier issues. Not sure if leaving will help her though.She has no support back home. And poor Edward. I fear this is going to hurt him more than her. His worst nightmare come true, Bella leaves him yet again :(..    great ending in this chapter.



Author's Response:

You will definitely have a good idea how this effects poor Chubward from the next chapter....

 

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Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Nightingale

Can I shoot his Aunt? It was getting so good and she interrupted but I think you did a good job. Cause that is what would happen in real life.

GREAT JOB can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Painful as it is, we are trying to keep it as close to reality as we can...

 

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Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Nightingale

Jesus...I'm beginning to wonder about your mental health with the level of angst...between this story and Not Like This...holy crap man...it's insane...



Author's Response:

LOL!  And the funny part is, I'm pretty snarky and overly bouncy in real life (well, except when I'm exhausted).  Let's just say I had my share of pain in the past and I can draw from there....

 

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Reviewer: subaclan_03 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Prologue

Only the Prologue and my heart is beating and aching for more.... can't wait to read the rest! Housework is definitely taking a backseat this week!!!



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We really hope you enjoy the read!

 

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Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:24 PM · On: Nightingale

Mmmm... thoughts.  Well, my primary one is that while I agree that it would be prudent for Bella and Edward to deal with their issues on their own, I don't know that I agree with Bella going back to her home to do so. 

Clearly, she doesn't have much of a support structure there.  And she needs one.  Furthermore, I think that she also needs access to someone who knew her mother, and she certainly doesn't have that at her home.

I don't know.  I am concerned about Bella.  Her coping mechanism is withdrawl, and I don't know how she'll do alone.  I think she's going to need some tangible reminders to help her continue to fight all the distortions in her mind.

Good luck - I think you're going to need it!



Author's Response:

All great points.  Keep in mind, even Charlie didn't really know Renee that well - at least not adult Renee.  It is going to be *very* hard for Bella to do this alone, but it is possible.  We shall see how she does (and Chubward as well).

 

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Reviewer: jenejes (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Nightingale

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE kill that fucking aunt betsy, or i will! old hag!

 

okay, on that note, I wish we could have heard what Esme had to say, that would have been awesome!



Author's Response:

Maybe there will be an outtake or we can put it up for one of the auctions....

 

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Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Nightingale

Someone needs to take the drunken bitter harpy aunt out to the shed and take the willow stick to her until she can be human!



Author's Response:

There is a circle of hell reserved for her and all our relatives like her.

 

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