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Reviewer: twilightelle99 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Goodbye My Lover

Can't wait for more! I just started reading this last night & have been reading every chance I've had! Congratulations on being pregnant! Take care of yourself

Author's Response:

We are so glad you're enjoying it!

Thanks for the well-wishes on Tater Tot #2!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Goodbye My Lover

u guys are killing me....too much sadness, not enough tissues

 

want and need more...please continue

Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Goodbye My Lover

u guys are killing me.....too much sadness....not enough tissues

need more....more.....please



Author's Response:

More is now up!  Although I'm not sure if it makes things better or worse....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: BrightEyes (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Goodbye My Lover

My heart was breaking right along with Bella. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Poor thing needs a hug, doesn't she?

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 11:19 AM · On: Goodbye My Lover

I made it through and didn't even break down. :) I just love Charlie.



Author's Response:

Charlie is the bee's knees!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Goodbye My Lover

Hey it was a greatchap and good to see bellas side



Author's Response:

We thought it important that folks saw that this was not a decision Bella took lightly nor was it one she *wanted* to make.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Gnaea (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 09:07 AM · On: Goodbye My Lover

Thanks for giving warnings before each chapter. :)

I'm going to be honest. I skipped this chapter. Yeah, I'm a total wimp!!! Doh!!

Keep updating and I will wait for the better times because right now its a bit too much Angst for my liking but thats cool. Better times are coming I suppose.



Author's Response:

There will be better times, but they have a little way to go.  Please try and give the chapter a try.  It's hopeful at the end and at least the second half is important to the progression of the story.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: TwiDi812 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 09:05 AM · On: Goodbye My Lover

I really thought she was going to turn that car around and go back to him. Very hard chapter to read, sooooo sad!

Really hoping that the next chapter starts the healing to get them back together.

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Not quite yet, but we're definitely getting there.  You'll shortly see!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Goodbye My Lover

It was a little tough, but bbs, I can handle anything as long as I know that there's a HEA in the future!

It was beautiful, Ellie!

Fantastic job, sweetness'!

Can't wait to see how things get better from here!

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 07:30 AM · On: Goodbye My Lover

It was a little tough, but bbs, I can handle anything as long as I know that there's a HEA in the future!

It was beautiful, Ellie!

Fantastic job, sweetness'!

Can't wait to see how things get better from here!

Author's Response:

*hugs* We appreciate it, darlin'!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Goodbye My Lover

Wow that was rough. Poor Bella. I can't wait to find out what esle happend to her and when they both start recieving help. Cuz I can't take anymore, they need to be loving each other.



Author's Response:

Bella has a lot of baggage.  Mostly emotional, but many times, that is worse....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 03:39 AM · On: Goodbye My Lover

God. What are you doing to us. Get Bella some prozac stat!



Author's Response:

I think more than meds, she needs someone to help her sort out her thinking....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Pyejammies (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 01:10 AM · On: Goodbye My Lover

I knew that Edward was really alright but you had me worried there.  I did think he was going to hop on a plane and arrive at her door but you avoided that cliche.  Now I'm hopeful for a bit of cheer in the next chappie.  Great stuff.  Happy Easter.



Author's Response:

We are not big on cliches.  Definitely, we are aiming for realism...

 

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Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 01:02 AM · On: Goodbye My Lover

My heart breaks for Bella.



Author's Response:

She is most definitely in a lot of pain.

 

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Reviewer: the_other_cullen_girl (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 12:04 AM · On: Goodbye My Lover

rhis is great, but she is going back... right? right!?!



Author's Response:

There will be a happy ending... eventually;)

 

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Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Goodbye My Lover

STUPID!

When the fuck is "Auntie" and Jacob going to get the true asskicking they deserve?

And Bella? Well that girl should've been seeing a psychiatrist ever since she fucking left. That's all I have to say!



Author's Response:

She did seek help at least once, alas, it didn't do much to help.  That and she had very little motivation to move forward.  Maybe now she does....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: eifeltwr (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 11:04 PM · On: Goodbye My Lover

Wow... entense chapter.  Very nicely written!  I can't wait for what happens next!

Please keep it up!

*eifeltwr*



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  Next chapter is now up!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 10:32 PM · On: Goodbye My Lover

She IS a nutcase, bless her heart!

WHY oh why did she wait so freakin' long to deal with these issues??? it's not like she didn't KNOW she was whacked...christ, Bella, be the drama queen already...

and I'm sorry, but Edward has a vagina. :)

 and happy belated birthday and happy pregnancy!!! :)  mazeltov!



Author's Response:

She did try to deal with them before, but, as unfortunately happens to a lot of folks, got help that didn't... help.  Someone slapped her on meds that didn't work and she didn't know, nor did she have a reason, to pursue any other options.  Not an excuse, but it happens all the time.

I appreciate the well-wishes on Tater Tot #2!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lyleslove (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Goodbye My Lover

Wow, fantastic chapter, yet again... This thing is just so... moving.  Oh, and can you guys finally let her open the damn thing that Edward sent her forever ago?!  I'm so overwhelmingly curious!  Congrats again on the baby, Ellie :) <3



Author's Response:

Ah, the box.  That'll be addressed in the next chapter.  Again.  LOL!

I appreciate the well-wishes on Tater Tot #2!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Goodbye My Lover

Awwww Omg that was soo heartbraking! :( Poor Bella wow that was so sad. Im so glad Edward called her though. Gosh that was rough to read but I loved they way you guys wrote it! Thanks soo much for the amazing update! Cant wait for more! :)



Author's Response:

It was a rough chapter.  Bella is in a really tough place.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Goodbye My Lover

Welllll....  nothing like slowly peeling a band aid off and feeling the pull on every little hair.  OUCH.

I recommend Bella setting one goal for herself tomorrow: call her therapist.



Author's Response:

IT's definitely worlds of ouch....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Goodbye My Lover

love love love - was shopping with isabel grace when this update came in - we both squealed in the dressing room at Ann Taylor Loft. No lie. Can't wait for more :) Update when you can.



Author's Response:

LOL!  I hope you guys had a blast!  And Chubward was in the dressing room of Ann Taylor with you?  Kinky;)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:19 PM · On: Goodbye My Lover

That was really good. I think that was the most we've heard from Charlie ever lol. 



Author's Response:

LOL!  This was definitely an epic rant coming from Charlie!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Goodbye My Lover

First off, CONGRATULATIONS!!!  Secondly, god this chapter was so hard.  I thought it was hard from EPOV but this one was just as bad.  I loved it and I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks, darlin!

This was a tough one.  Neither one of them is in a good place.  Bella is definitely a hot mess.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: chtx (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Goodbye My Lover

I just want you guys to fix her...and fast!  I feel so bad for your Bella and I am not sure that I have enough kleenex!  Thanks for updating.



Author's Response:

She is a mess, but we do intend on fixing her.  It's just going to be a little rough....

 

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