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Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 12:16 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
Very cute - I love how excited Edward is. Don't remember if I posted a comment to this chapter yet or not. I got interrupted before... Anywho....
I like their notes back and forth. Very cute!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 12:06 PM · On: 6: Hunting We Will Go
just read through the chaps and am in love
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 11:29 AM · On: 6: Hunting We Will Go
Poor Bella. Edward is such an Andy from 40 Year Old Virgin!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 11:05 AM · On: 6: Hunting We Will Go
this chapter was literally a roller coaster
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 10:41 AM · On: 6: Hunting We Will Go
great chapter
looking forward to Edward to man up
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 09:32 AM · On: 6: Hunting We Will Go
:*( somehow she needs reminding that he knows what others are thinking and lol i can only handle one of the angst ridden vamps. LOL lighten him up LOL let bella be angst for a while let Edward find out what he's been like for the last 80 yrs. Love this story Update asap pleaseeeeeee
Barb
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 07:44 AM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
Wow - a vegan vampire and Maria . Well you just made that all kinds of interesting!! Great chapter!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 07:35 AM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
Fun chapter - i'm excited to know where you're going...
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 07:34 AM · On: 6: Hunting We Will Go
geez, I think I was hearing Katy Perry's Hot'n'Cold in my head as I read most of the chapter :)
Looking forward to seeing B&E actually sort this out next time hehe
Author's Response: LOL, me too. That's what the title almost was - Hot n Cold. But I believe I have that reserved for elsewhere.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 06:54 AM · On: 6: Hunting We Will Go
*laughing* Well, this Bella has her freak-out moments, too, huh? Oh, good. Hate for them to disappear entirely. :)
I think it's so cute that she enjoys the whole family vibe, even if it is overwhelming. I love how Jasper is with her. It must be such a joy for him to have Little Sister of his own like this.
And wow... Bella jumps Edward! GREAT surprise!
This is an enjoyable story! I look forward to the forthcoming chapters!
Reviewer: irishekl (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 05:15 AM · On: 6: Hunting We Will Go
I am really enjoying your story!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: RaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 05:06 AM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
Edward's human reactions are hilarious!
Reviewer: RaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 04:56 AM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
It's easy to picture the three of them like this.. you've spun a believable AU!
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 07:21 AM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
okay, i just have to ask, how did you get bella and edwards handwriting? awesome story!
Author's Response: They're images.
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 12:34 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
No - but u saying that gave me an idea =] thanks
NIAIS
Author's Response: Hope it works, wish I knew what the problem was though, totally. Good luck.
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 12:22 PM · On: 5: Monster Mash
hmmm - this is far too wide for my screen - having trouble reading it - is anyone else? like is it a glitch with the story or my computer?
NIAIS
Author's Response: It looked fine to me, I just looked. My resolution is 1280x1024 though. Have you had this problem with any of the other chapters?
Reviewer: Muze (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:09 AM · On: 5: Monster Mash
This is so fun! Look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Becca0823 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:56 PM · On: 5: Monster Mash
Absolutely love the story so far and also love the pics included makes it so easy to really see it in my head.
Reviewer: Muze (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:33 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
I like it so far. Its very interesting.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 01:27 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
i completely agree with you on that one about carlisles past also i thought ok thats nice but too much anyway i really enjoy this story please update soon.
Reviewer: Puppylve234 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 12:08 PM · On: 5: Monster Mash
Please Please write again soon I beg you!!!
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 09:02 PM · On: 5: Monster Mash
thats exactly how i pictured bellas vamp costume. lol anyway i love edward in this story. please update soon.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:39 PM · On: 4: A Past Revisited
i liked this chapter up until the point where bella started telling her story, way too much detail and seemed like mostly fluff, anyway once she finished the story seemed to flow again. sorry if that sounds rude but just saying how i felt about it. anyway wonder what the problem is about this month. need more edward and bella flirting.
Author's Response: LOL, that was how I felt reading Carlisle's past in twilight...at least mine wasn't as long as his. Sorry they won't be a couple really soon but things do get heated.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:25 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
awww i love how excited he is for her to be visiting and its nice to have such an interesting twist. i hope esme loves her and that she and edward become a couple right away.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 07:46 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
her car is ugly but i like the story hopefully she'll warm up to him soon.
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