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Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 02:12 PM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

This was awesome!

I'm glad that Bella kicked the crap out of Tanya! She did deserve it!

I have no idea what Bella said to Kate. My guess would be she asked for advice on how to take down Tanya. My other other guess would be that Bella told Tanya to back off and of course everything is ok in the Cullen house. :D I don't know what Bella got everyone for Christmas but I'm sure it's good!

Please, please update soon? I can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 02:04 PM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

I'm sure you will tell us what Bella talked about with Kate and what she whisphered in T's ear.

I'm so glad Bella kicked ass!!

I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 01:42 PM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

Good God could Edward just get over the "oh I'm such a gentleman" already. Bella just needs to up the seduction tactics so he can't say no. LOL :)

Author's Response:

Oh, she does next chapter, just wait.

Reviewer: jamdowner (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 12:56 PM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

I am thoroughly enjoying this.  Great story.

Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:51 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

Wow Bella kicking Tanya's ass was awesome! I imagined a little bit more in my head ( u know shield and everything I pictured like tanya was blown away without even been touched by her!)

Anyway I love it as always amd I still think that Eddie needs to grow some balls already!

Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:48 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

I'm interested to see what happens when they get back to the house lol. I can't imagine Tanya being in a very festive mood after getting her ass handed to her in front of everyone. Hilarious.

Reviewer: angmclure (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:46 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

Loved it.  So glad Bella put Tanya in her place.  Can't wait to see how it all plays out.  There are so many different things that can happen.  I can't wait for them to further their relationship but think it would be more entertaining to make them work for it more.  Like Edward could have set up a romantic spot and just as they get settled someone comes along and spoils the mood.  Can't wait to see how it goes.

Reviewer: esce (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:22 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

yes very good should be interesting 'cause usually Tanya has no concept of enough

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:20 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

Loved everything about the chapter.  I thought what happen with Tanya was going to be a little more involved (unless you're not done with her yet), Gosh I hope not!  I love that rivarly.  I can't wait to find out all the answers to the questions in your notes!



Author's Response:

Nope, not quite done with her yet.

Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:11 AM · On: 3: Whys of Amber

Like the note passing in Biology, and her connection to Jasper.  Also understand more about Bella now  You kept a lot of the canon elements of her change, and added a bit more.  She is a fascinating character.

 

Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:08 AM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations

Fascinating - Bella was changed by Maria and has already made friends with Rose & Alice.  Sounds like she needed soem girlfriends, and I like how your Rose is not quite so uptight.

Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:06 AM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?

Just found this stsory this morning and am fascinated.  I thought at first Bella might be a hybrid but the mystery deepens with no heartbeat and cool skin, but no vampire scent.  And the car - At first I wondered, "why a Mitsubishi?" then it hit me, duh, it's a Eclipse.  Clever!

Liz

 



Author's Response:

LOL, actually I realized the Eclipse thing after I had selected it, I picked it because it was rated 1 of the fastest cars in 09.

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:06 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

love it.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 10:49 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

This was a great chapter!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 10:37 AM · On: 8: Hot n Cold

I can't wait for Tanya to get hers~!

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 10:29 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

Great chapter, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: ash0507 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 10:22 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

Love this! I adore a strong Bella that knows what she wants and not afraid to go after it!

Reviewer: zmom (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 10:07 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

Love it!!  I can't wait to see what happens next.  This really is a great story.

Reviewer: BellasMommy (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 10:05 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

HELL YEAH!!!!!  Tanya finally gets her ass kicked!!!!!

Reviewer: ashkan00dle (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 10:04 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

bella probably said something like 'next time i'll fuckin' finish it.' or something awesomely menacing like that lol. idk what she got the cullens for christmas ; everything BETTER be cool in the cullen household, and bella probably asked permission from kate to beat the shit outta tanya, or at least warn her that may happen.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 09:52 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

Well, I am THRILLED that Bella kicked Tanya's ass!!!! I HATE that big HO Tanya!!!!!

I'm wondering if Kate is on Bella's side, since Tanya has emabarrassed Kate a lot over the years?

Can't wait to find out what Bella whispered to Tanya...maybe along the lines of "I'll rip you to shreds and burn the pieces if you don't leave Edward alone"?



Author's Response:

LOL, something like that.

Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 09:38 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

Great chapter. Ready for more.

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 09:08 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

I think she asked Kate if she could beat up Tanya. maybe she whispered that everyone knew edward was bella? not sure. just love the story and need more, update soon!

Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 08:58 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

GO Bella!!! Someone needed to put her in her place.  I want to know what she whispered to her though. I hope Bella isn't just playing games with Edward, and that she REALLY wants him.



Author's Response:

You'll find out next chapter what Bella said to Tanya. ^.^

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 08:45 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

'she's a keeper' made me laugh so hard I woke up my husband^_^

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