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Reviews For Hidden
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 12:10 AM · On: 5: Monster Mash

ok that lunch scene was friggin amazing XD

Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 11:24 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber

lol cold shoulder, no pun intended right

 

Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 10:56 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations

lol vegan

Alice jumped up and hugged me tightly around the neck. “I have a sister-in-law!”-oh that's priceless XD

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 05:33 AM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

Wow great story and I luv how u put pics at the end can't wait for next chapter

Reviewer: glsmith56 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 02:13 PM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

ok here's your review. It's good and I need you to hurry and post more. Write...write...write!



Author's Response:

Oh hahaha, bout time you reviewed.

Reviewer: KristenM82 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 09:40 PM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

I love this story...hurry with the next chapter!:)

Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 12:09 PM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

OOO I laughed...Edward's family is funny and Tayna is such a blockhead!

Reviewer: MizLysa (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 10:51 PM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming

i absolutely love this story. its amazingly addictive! but i gotta ask, at the bottom of chapter 12 is some wedding bands...i love them and i was wondering if perhaps you knew what site those are from. im engaged so yeah



Author's Response:

This took some time, I had to look back in my web history in october. The site is www.loveweddingbands.com they have several gorgious rings in platinum. Here is the link to the set I used in Hidden.

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 09:02 PM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

Sorry this review is late. Im catching up on all the twilighted fanfics that iv missed for the past two weeks, I loved this chapter, i cant wait for the next one ;) i have twitter aswell @LittleMo78

Reviewer: sugarmuffins69 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 08:49 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber

Awesome so far love the vegan vampire very clever!

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 07:57 AM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

Awsome story so far...But if the family takes away their privacy when they find out, I'm all for Bella and Edward running away together....Because that would show that the family has NO respect for them..And I alredy think that the family(especially Alice) has NO respect for their privacy..

Reviewer: RosieKiss85 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 02:11 AM · On: 3: Whys of Amber

i'd have to say, so far i'm highly enjoying it  =)

Reviewer: NaWiSi (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 10:14 PM · On: 11: You Got Me What?!

i forgot to tell u that i was hysterical when emmet gave kate the oven mitts.i am trul enjoing this story and will check all ur stories when im done reading.

 

and i think i would take a chocolat covered carlisle with a handfull of sprrinkled edward chips all covered with jasper flavored whipped creme

Reviewer: ilive4music (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 05:29 PM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

Good chapter but I have a question. Other the family finding out about their secret is there going to be another conflict? What I mean is, is Tanya going to cause more problems later? Just curious.

Author's Response:

I'll say only 1 word for that question...YES.

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 02:47 PM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

AWSOME CHAPTER!!!!

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 07:04 PM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

Lol Awesome Update!!!

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Reviewer: NenaTH (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:16 PM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

hihihi i cant wait to read alice´s reaction when she finds out they eloped XD ,, loved the chapter and cant wait for the next one!

Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 04:17 PM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

Somehow I think it will be Jasper - brotherly intuition

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 03:43 PM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

loved it...I think Tanya should be forced to watch lol



Author's Response:

Yeah your #600! And what would Tanya be forced to watch? lol.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 03:20 PM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

Oh those two are lucky they've gotten away with what they have so far. i about chocked on Jasper's comment, I think he will be the one to put two and two together first...lol...I can't wait to see how the family reacts. I have way to many scenarios running thru my heard to put just one down. I can't wait to see how you bring the truth about.

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 12:35 PM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

It would be hilarious if mink and jess walked in on them when trying to find their own hiding place and then letting slip at school....could be humerous!!!



Author's Response:

LOL Oh that would be funny, I might have to use that.

Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:17 AM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

loved it!! i dnt want the others to find out they'll spoil everything!! but i reckon it shud b jasper who finds out 1st mayb catches them at it and attempts to beat the crap outta him only for bella to tell him to get his hands off her husband! lol sumthin fun like that! well keep up the amazeing wrk can't wait 4 next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thats a really good idea, but no, its not Jasper...you'll find out in chapter 15 who learns first, I promise.

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:13 AM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

couple weeks at the most

alice

mad upset but happy

no privacy what so ever

loved it

welluntil next time

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 09:56 AM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

funnnnnnnyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!! I love that they are tormenting the family!!!!

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 09:01 AM · On: 13: Secret Between Lovers

love it of course

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