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Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 04:35 PM · On: 7: Snow Angel
Arrrggghhh clockblocker!!!!! I wanted the kiss to happen!!!
heheheh loved this chapter too. I love how brotherly Jasper is with Bella :)
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 04:25 PM · On: 6: Hunting We Will Go
Interesting, I wonder if the feeding together just intensified the bonds between them.
Another great chapter, but again, watch with the typos...
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 04:13 PM · On: 5: Monster Mash
LOl this was hilarious! WTG Bella for the vampire costume :)
Thanks too for psoting photos of the costumes.
Still loving it, I'm moving on ...
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 03:59 PM · On: 4: A Past Revisited
ver well done. I liked the background you gave to Bella. I love how strong she was being changed.
And I love Alice's comments :) I'm sure Edward was the one that growled right? And is it Feb? A Valentines dance??
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 03:33 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
LOl still loving this. I love how much edward is attracted to Bella on so many different levels.
If you don't some constructive criticism? Watch your words. Sometimes you say is instead of as or if, these are things spellcheck won't catch. Also your use of to and too.
And in one chapter you have Bella telling Alice she is 18 and in this one she tells Edward she is 17.
Please don't be mad at me for telling you that... just tyring to help out. K I'm moving on ....
Author's Response: Lol, nope, Bella said she was 'Almost 18', meaning she was still 17. Changed in August=birthday in September. I'm not really surprised I had spelling errors at the beginning of this story, since then I have been checking my chapter 3+ times before I submit them than I reread them 2 more times before submitting them for validation.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 03:06 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
LOL I like the dynamics between Rose, Alice and Bella. I'm so glad they get along well.
Can't wait for the rest of the Cullens to meet Bella. I love her talent.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 02:39 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
Very interesting beginning. Can't wait for more. So glad I just found this story so I can just move on.
I like yoru style of writing.
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 02:27 PM · On: 15: Mine Forever
damn tanya...poor alice for not getting to organise the wedding and ooo powerful bella!!!
Reviewer: Sweetpea123 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 01:09 PM · On: 15: Mine Forever
WEll, is Bella channeling Jane, perchance? I like the bitchy Bella, but I do wish Edward will for once and for all be able to man up and successfully get rid of Tanya himself. This was a fun, romantic, spicy, naughty, lemony, chapter--and I love the alphabet game, you sent it to us just in time for Valentine's Day--thanks!!
Reviewer: louisianagirl900 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 12:32 PM · On: 15: Mine Forever
I like your story...but the Cullens are so annoying in it. It seems that Alice actually set up Bella and Edward to run into Tanya...did she do that just so she can find out there secret...if so...that sucks!
I'm surprised to see how the Cullens are dealing with the news of their marriage. Their response is so selfish... It might be time for Edward and Bella to go it alone for a while. It's a little ridiculous that the family expects him to deal with Tanya with the way she acts.
Interested to see where you take this next.
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 07:59 AM · On: 15: Mine Forever
Wow wow wow you go girl don't let Tanya near youur man if he didn't want her in decades why would he want her now that he found someone? How dence is she What is that ability Bella exhibited.
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 07:10 AM · On: 15: Mine Forever
opps there is one pissed off Vampire family in forks right now!!!! I can't wait to see what the electrecution this was about!
Reviewer: AubreyRose (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:41 AM · On: 15: Mine Forever
Fabulous story, please post more soon!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 04:25 AM · On: 15: Mine Forever
oh the Cullens will get over it
Bella's powers ... maybe she is a sponge
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 01:42 AM · On: 15: Mine Forever
I am ok with the Cullens fury if you torture Tanya a bit more.... PLease? Thanks! Love ya!
Reviewer: HyphenAnn (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 01:28 AM · On: 15: Mine Forever
I'm so glAd bell kicked her ass! Woohoo go B!
Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 12:01 AM · On: 15: Mine Forever
HAHA! TO HELL WITH TANYA! LET'S SEE HER GET SOME MORE!
Nothing makes me giggle more than Tanya being owned
Bravo
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 10:37 PM · On: 15: Mine Forever
omg that was amaing tanya so deserves though cant wait for the next chapter
well until next time
Reviewer: Elisabethe (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 10:10 PM · On: 5: Monster Mash
ohh halloween not valentines shucks i was wrong
Reviewer: insanecellist (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 10:02 PM · On: 15: Mine Forever
oh maaaaaaaaan! Too short for my liking. And no. Tanya deserves WAAAY worse than that! Especially cause she ruined their plans and now alice is all upset! Evil skank needs her head cut off and buried for like a week or something.
Reviewer: Elisabethe (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 09:55 PM · On: 4: A Past Revisited
hahaha is the litlle pixie up to something......wait when isn't she? it must be valentines day on to chapter 5!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 09:03 PM · On: 15: Mine Forever
*SNORK* No offense but Tanya got what she deserved. I can't wait! The cat's out of the bag and I can't wait to see what happens in the aftermath of it all.
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 09:02 PM · On: 15: Mine Forever
Great chapter! While the family has the right to wish they were there, it was Edward & Bella's day, so they don't have the right to be that angry with them. Tanya needed a good shock to her system. She obviously doesn't have a clue and can't take a hint. I don't know what Bella's power thing was, but it sure came in handy. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: Elisabethe (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 08:34 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
Awwe I just foud this story, and I absolutely love it! I can't promise I will comment on all 15 chapter, but I will comment on all the ones that really make me giddy! On to chapter three for me.
Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 07:43 PM · On: 15: Mine Forever
Oh Alice, get over it. Their life, their choice.
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