Great chapter! Can't wait for more!!

Post again soon!!!

Holy Crow what a chap!

Tanya can't be finished you could stil return with James and Victoria and Tanya!  heheheh  Can't wait for more I loved how Jasper reacted ever the protective brother!

I'm kinda disappointed that she can only use the power once.

haha I quite enjoyed that chapter! For some reason Bella's proportional-limited Powers had me immediately thinking of various role-playing and dungeons & dragons type games where you get the one-time spells to use :)

Jasper's reaction was good fun, even though Edward nearly got himself in a lot of trouble for not asking first. Interesting idea connecting the venom with friendship bonds... it seems quite logical considering a lot of vampire-lore has the sire-bond as a means for the sire to control their progeny to a certain extent. Not quite as strong as the Alpha-commands of the wolf pack, but still a noticeable compulsion.

Looking forward to more :)

Oh and as for Edward's bag... it's either some items he wants to surprise Bella with later, or... it's something he wants to "surprise" her with "later"? Or I could be completely wrong hehe

Ohh that bitch Tanya just can't take a hint...I sure hope there is at least one more cat fight in which Tanya finally learns to keep her hands off Edward. It won't be pretty for her otherwise. I just love Bella's abilities they are just to cool. I am happy for the outcome in which the family now knows and accepts the decisions Edward and Bella made.

Ahh I have such a wicked mind... whatever is in the bag has me thinking dirty thoughts. LOL I can't wait to see what you actually have coming out of that bag.

wow do i hate tanya she is a bitch ya u could of tortured her more but watev
ya everything was good w/ jasper and venom bond
i like bella's power i just wish she was able two keep the powers she gets
no ideas wat so ever but probably something dirty
loved it
until next time

omg!! this story is amazing please please finish!!

so neat

I absolutely love this story and the pictures that you've added make all the more better.  They really give me an idea of what things look like.  I'm having a really tough time finding you on twitter though.  I do have a question...what is the font that you used for Tanya's handwriting.  It's really a very nice font.  I can't wait to read more.

 

Thanks

 

just one quick question how can te car be from 2009 when it is dec oct 2008?

Author's Response:

LOL, the next year model ie:2009 start production in September/october of the previous year ie:2008. You'll be able to buy 2011 cars this september. I wanted the car to be brand new and only a few months old. My husband is a car NUT and he confirmed this fact for me.

This is a wonderful story so far. I am rather eager to see what happens next. A vegan vamp, I love that.

Hurrah for another chapter! As much as I love all your stories this is definately my favourite.

I'm glad the secret is out, although the do kinda deserve what's coming to them even if I do understand why they did it.

Please update again soon!