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Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 05:05 PM · On: 11: You Got Me What?!
The gifts were perfect! The cd for Tanya was hilarious but maybe a bit cruel. Love that Bella isn't afraid of showing how possessive she is even if I think it wasn't necessary to embarrass Tanya in front of everyone on christmas day.
Thank you for including all the pictures. It's great to have a real visual of the amazing costumes and gifts.
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 12:44 PM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
***sigh***
That was hot, romantic and funny all at once!
"If this was his idea of punishment, I wonder what else I could do to get in trouble" - Oh, yes! That's my kind of punishment!!! I love, love, love when Edward is playful, teasing and possessive!
Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 12:36 PM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery
Oh I really really love this update. The truth will set you free! I love what Bella did to Tanya, the bitch deserved it (I so don't like the girl). I love how you explained the venom bond, Jasper's reaction when he learned that Edward and Bella were married is wonderful. I have to wonder how long it will be before Bella does something to Emmet for calling Edward Ed or Eddie when she hates those names with a pasion. Alice's reaction to the elopement is wonderful. Again I love this wonderful story and I eagerly awiat the next installment.
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 09:34 AM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?
Bella took Tanya down physically!!! Love that! The families thoughts and comments were perfect!
Edward, ever the gentleman. He better come up with something really good...
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 09:13 AM · On: 8: Hot n Cold
Damn, Edward! You stupid, stupid man! To go a whole month without even talking to Bella and never consider that she might get the wrong idea! How dense can you get??!!
Nice come-back though, with the hands over head thing and pressing Bella up against the wall... Sexy!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 08:52 AM · On: 7: Snow Angel
Holy cow, that was an amazing chapter!
I love protective Jasper!!! He may be a bit overprotective, but that's okay - it's Jasper! I love Jasper!
I'm not exactly mad at Edward. I get a bit furious sometimes, but then I remember that this is all new to him and that he has a lot of issues.
Why, oh why, does Tanya have to show up? Okay, it makes for a good story and I'm looking forward to reading the up-coming events, but... I don't think she'll just befriend Bella and be fine with Edwards feelings. Have a bad feeling...
Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 08:29 AM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery
I just love it! :)
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:45 AM · On: 6: Hunting We Will Go
Aww, young love! So confusing and so sweet! You're doing an amazing job of depicting it!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:26 AM · On: 5: Monster Mash
An absolutely adorable and hilarious chapter! Love all of the costumes (especially Emmetts dress!). Love when when the Cullen's are mocking Edward!!!
Bella is quite the vixen! Love that she's teasing Edward and driving him slowly insane...
Reviewer: Twilighter001 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:18 AM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery
please finish this! I really want to read more! :)
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 06:59 AM · On: 4: A Past Revisited
Edward did not like Alice being possessive of Bella! Wonder if he even knows why...
Bella's story of her change was heartbreaking, interesting, different and suprising. Like Jasper said - Maria has certainly changed. She was not at all as I had pictured her, I actually liked her - did not expect that! Love that Bella is so confident and knows what she wants and isn't afraid of going after it.
I'm guessing Bella just got roped in to going to the prom?
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 06:26 AM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
Oh, Edward has no idea what's happening to him... This is so good!!!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 11:50 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
The chapter was not slow. It was full of information and emotions.
Love that Bella and Jasper are sort of brother and sister! I always love the connection between them (not in a romantic way).
Interesting ability Bella has. Can't wait to see where your taking this story.
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 11:32 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
Very intriguing! So many questions raised. Definitely continuing reading!
Reviewer: alecjanes (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 11:52 AM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery
ooooh whats in the bag i want to know
Reviewer: carbella02 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 11:34 PM · On: 5: Monster Mash
Love it!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 05:05 PM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery
Lol u made me laugh so hard with this chapter.
What a weird gift to have..... very confusing. But could come in handy.
Can't wait for more...
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 06:32 PM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery
so exciting..damn that tanya won't take no for an answer!!
Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 04:59 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
I like your Bella Rose and Alice! :)
Reviewer: FAMaggiolo (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 01:28 PM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery
Loving the story, so entertaining, I love the banter between everyone. Cant wait to see where you take this.
Update soon.
Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 12:38 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
Brilliant plot bunny! :)
Reviewer: FAMaggiolo (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 03:27 AM · On: 10: Didn't See That Coming
Ok I have been loving this story, but why is it in most stories, Alice always crashes in at the wrong moment and then comments "You'll thank me for this later".
If it was me I would say yeah here let me thank you now. Then I would smack her over the head and slam the door in her face and say bugger off.
But there is reason to your madness and I shall find that out soon.
Thank you for writing a fantastic story, truly enjoying it and cant stop reading chapter after chapter.
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 12:54 AM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery
I WANNA KNOW WHAT'S IN THE BAG, PLEASE UPDATE REAL SOON!! :)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 07:13 PM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery
loved it! I hate Tanya too! More torture all around!
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 06:54 PM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery
LOL I bet it was a naughty nightie! Or some sex toy?
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