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Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 08:11 PM · On: 17: It's None of Your Business

Nice to see Edward's perverted side.  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: twi-hard4ever (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 10:10 PM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery

LOVE IT!!!when r u going to finish it??!!



Author's Response:

Chapter 17 is currently waiting to be validated and as soon as its out chapter 18 will go off to my beta.

Reviewer: Ashapea (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 06:29 PM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery

Please please please update SOON!!!!!!

Reviewer: Stardust (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 01:30 PM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery

bondage kit......lol

Reviewer: twi-hard4ever (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 08:56 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations

HAHA lovin it so far!but cant wait for dark sun!!the third one following full moon!!!u r a FANTASTIC writer!!!

Reviewer: JenGlasgow (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 03:22 PM · On: 11: You Got Me What?!

The Cullen crest necklace is beautiful!!  I'd buy that!

Reviewer: Shiftyless (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 06:02 PM · On: 12: It's a Secret

so very awesome everything is

Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:54 PM · On: 5: Monster Mash

I like that you have pictures of the halloween costumes!

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Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:37 PM · On: 4: A Past Revisited

Lillian works great, ironically, my great grandma was named Lillian and she was born around that time. haha

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Reviewer: VampireinBetsey (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:02 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations

I loved Bella hanging out with Rose and Alice. I'm interested to see how you show her numerous powers and skills throughout the story. I like how you expanded the meaning of what it is to be a shield.

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Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 01:31 PM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery

Hmmm, what *is*in that bag????

 

 

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 01:12 PM · On: 15: Mine Forever

Sorry I'm late in my reading...

 

Thanks for updating!!!

Reviewer: bitme (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 11:27 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?

please add to this story i love it.



Author's Response:

YAY! Your 800th reviewer! As soon as Full Moon is finished I will be adding. Don't worry, none of my stories will go undone.

Reviewer: BandE4eva (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 07:26 PM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery

Are you planning on finishing this story?? I hope so!! :)



Author's Response:

I am! I focusing on finishing Full Moon. Due to where my poll is at the moment, it looks like this is the next to be finished, but don't quote me on it.

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 05:10 PM · On: 7: Snow Angel

Nice almost kiss!  ;D  Adored the bit with the purring.  Very apropos for Bella.  I'm in the same camp as Bella right now.  Peeved at the blocking! lol  :D

Thanks!

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 04:55 PM · On: 6: Hunting We Will Go

Good job on her feelings when he rejected her.  Very powerful.  Had me sucked in.  I really feel for her in the end.  It's exactly what the typical girl would think/feel.

Jas is in for quite the roller coater ride, eh?  :D

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 04:41 PM · On: 5: Monster Mash

Tee hee jealous Edward shows himself!  Liked the bit from Jas!

Thanks!

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 12:07 AM · On: 4: A Past Revisited

Naw, her back story was nice.  I twould explain how she changed but basically stayed the same. I probably would have played up the nearly seen sparkling in the headlights or something to make that a bit stronger, but otherwise it flowed nicely.  Could sense Bella's pain and her parents' without wallowing in angstville. 

Giggling at E (I'm sure) growling at A saying B was hers!  Pretty sure it's Prom and Bella's not any more interested in it now that she was in canon. tee hee!

Still having fun!  Thanks!!!



Author's Response:

I don't think they sparkle in artificial light, or they would sparkle at school. I left the growling annonomous because it could have been Edward because he wants Bella or it could have been Jasper because she's his sister, I left it up to the reader to decide.

Reviewer: cruiz107 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 06:50 PM · On: 11: You Got Me What?!

I know I'm late reading this but I freakin looooved it, esp. the Once Bitten reference.



Author's Response:

YAY, I'm not the only one who has seen that movie, I love it and the song. I'm glad you're loving the story.

Reviewer: March_For_Love13 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 05:17 PM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery

I love this story! Update soon!

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 12:56 PM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery

i wonder if its dirty pictures of bella and edward? or something of a gift? i hope its funny whatever it is!

Reviewer: scarlet (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 04:37 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber

Interesting so far

Reviewer: Tassah (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 02:10 PM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery

hurry up

Reviewer: Kandikane (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 04:35 PM · On: 16: A Shocking Discovery

Can't wait to read the next chapter. Hurry please!

Reviewer: Kandikane (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 02:54 PM · On: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

LOVED it.. Finally someone but Tanya in her place.

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