The water fight was awesome!!!!! I also love how Carlisle and Esme joined in!

""I suddenly found a fully loaded water bazooka thrust into my chest by Rosalie. I wasted no time at all in releasing the water pressure of the bazooka on Emmett. His face scrunched together as if he had just eaten a lemon as he scowled at me. I shrugged my shoulders but kept the gun aimed directly at him.

The forest erupted into even louder laughter when Emmett was drenched again from the side by Jasper. “That’s what you get for attacking my sister without warning.”

“Dude, bros before hos remember!” he eyed Jasper disbelievingly, obviously surprised that Jasper had shot him in the first place.

Jasper’s eyes widened for a few seconds then narrowed in anger. “Are you calling my sister a ho?” I could tell by the emotionless tone of his voice that this wasn’t good.

Emmett paused for a minute, most likely going over his words then his eyes expanded in terror."" Yep Jasper is very protective of his little sis. I love how Rosalie gave Bella the gun to shoot Emmett!

Author's Response:

LOL, I had sooo much fun writing that part. I'm glad you liked it.

Loved the paintball revenge Bella put on Alice!

Ok I am totally loving this story and ALice totally deserved those paintballs and more she is really starting to annoy me and Im enjoying Edwards and Bellas private time together.

Author's Response:

I'm glad your enjoying this. The revenge schemes are over tho, too many things are about to happen and Bella and Alice won't get a chance to do much of anything. ^_-

That was so funny!!!

Bellas revenge on Alice was just right!

well, the revenge part should be double ;p hahahaha...

coz its gotta be so frustrating whenever E&B need privacy there were always someone/bunch of vampires interupting them ;p *sorry Little Pixie aka Alice*

Author's Response:

Need to remember, Alice is still her sister-in-law and she does love her. So the revenge thing is over...they won't have time for revenge schemes in the future for a while. ^_-

really alice deserves a little more revenge. Great overall camping trip.

hmm I can see Bella and Edward trying to outdo the other's pent up frustrations for the next decade or so at least... at best I think they'll conceded it's a draw?

Bella's revenge on Alice was hilarious... though perhaps there'll be a game at a later date that Alice brings a better strategy to?

Could be an ongoing thing fo rhte two of them - at home they're sisters/best friends... on the the paintball field everyone else gets the hell out of the way :)

Author's Response:

LOL, I never thought of the paintball game that way, thats funny. If you think about it, Edward and Bella were virgins for 109/56 years, so they had the most pent up frustrations compared to everyone...I think they'll win.

hot damn that was brilliant!!

OMG!! can I have Edward and a washing machine moment please, pretty please ;) Well done it just keeps getting better and better... Loved the Emmett and Alice moments nearly wet myself laughing :)

Author's Response:

Please don't wet yourself, that would be messy. I wish I could have a washer moment with my husband but our machine is outside so it would be REALLY cold this time of year. Glad you liked it ^_^

I keep reading your story over and over again, please start writing again and finish it for us :)

Author's Response:

I haven't stopped writting them, I'm jumping back and forth between Captured, Hidden and OneShots. I promise you, I will finish them, I hate having unfinished stories.

I love to see Edward out of his element around a beautiful that's not either threatened or dazzled by him.  He's cute when he's confused!

Author's Response:

Keep reading, he gets more out of his element. ^_-

I'm really loving this version of Bella. You have amazing talent and I LOVE this story.