Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:56 AM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
Thanks for updating so soon. I think I was as surprised as Bella to see Alice and Rosalie at her door. I am so glad they are getting to know each other. I've never read a story where Bella developed a realtionship with not only Alice but also Rosalie before anyone else in the family. Maria being Bella's creator was very interesting.
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 11:11 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
Amazing now KEEP up the good work and UPDATE ASAP
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:15 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
i like it and all my questions were answered yay.. cant wait for next chapter
Author's Response: All of them... -_0
Reviewer: Twerd4Life1609 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:52 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
its going great cant wait for the next chapters <3
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:00 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
I am a huge fan of Daybreak so I decided to give this one a shot too and I am SO HAPPY I did, this is so original, I love where it has gone so far. Bella's abilities make it really interesting and I always love when they are clueless about love and get to discover it together, I am so on board with this story, PLEASE update again real soon! :)
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:00 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
Oh god!! To.Damn.Funny!! You suck for only writing two chapters!!! Hello this story is awesome!!! But the car makes it better!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:45 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
I think it was a great chapter
love the story
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:40 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
Thanks for the quick update. The chapter was awesome. Great idea having Bella maker being Maria. Very original.
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:34 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
How wants to have a Volvo parked when you can have that?!
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:16 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
No carnivores! Knew it! *cheer*
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:07 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
Great chapter!
Bella is very interesting!
I loved the interaction between the girls and finding out that Jasper has a sister....sort of.
Please, please update soon?
Reviewer: Sweetpea123 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 02:26 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
Ooh, I liked this storyline, with Bella as a vamp. I also like Daybreak, too.
Reviewer: sep3 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 02:23 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
Keep going i wanna know what happens next please
Reviewer: mercy101 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:03 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
really good d`start :)
Amazing carr :P:D
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:08 AM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
I love Daybreak!! This is an awesome beginning!! Can't wait to see what happens!
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:55 AM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
i loved it just like i love your other one cant wait to read both the updates i love your style :D
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 11:02 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
Definitely intriguing.
Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 01:58 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
Great start. I hope you update again, and soon. I will definately be back for the next chapter I already feel hooked!!!
Reviewer: alecjanes (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 07:45 AM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
very nice car but y are bells eyes brighter than the cullens
Author's Response: You'll find out in the next chapter. ^_^
Reviewer: Twerd4Life1609 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 07:33 AM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
so far so good :)
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:45 AM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
nice
Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 01:43 AM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
I'm really interested to see what's up with Bella. Great start!!
Reviewer: JeannieRoss (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:20 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
great start cant wait for more!
Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 08:21 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
YOU HAVE TO CONTNUE!!!! that was great and interesting. i told myself i was not going to read it because it's only one chapter long. i can be quite impatient thats why. yet the summary made the story so alluring. being that i am weak with curiosity i sat down and read it. only to come to find that it was even better than the description! now i'm anxious for the next chapter.. keep up the good work and update soon please.
Reviewer: shannabanana1 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 08:17 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
I don't mind multiple POV's as long as you don't recount the whole last chapter in a different one, it gets monontous and repetitive after awhile. Good first chapter though, keep it up.
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