Reviewer: swt-vixen (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 08:19 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
Its a very nice twist I can see it becoming a very heartwarming tale... keep up the good writing.
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 08:10 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
I like the twist on this story.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 08:09 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
Hmm I guess I would love to have Carlisle has my vamp incentive...
LOL I have to just smile at Edward's eagerness when it comes to Bella...Maybe the issues of him hurting her will not be such a limiting factor in thier relationship..but have a funny feeling Bella will put Edward in his place soon enough
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:53 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
great story so far!! i am very interested in seeing where this goes.. but it is very funny to see edward so flustered! haha
Reviewer: sewthyme (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:52 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
Your story is a good concept and very well written. I really enjoy reading it.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:47 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
That was fun! So, Jasper has a "sister"
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:44 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
Great story! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:35 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
Great chapter!
I loved the interaction between Bella and Jasper. It was sweet. She has a brother!
For a moment I thought that Edward was going to screw up with Bella, but it was fixed in Biology. Yay!
I can't wait to see Bella with Carlisle and Esme.
Please, please, please update soon? :)
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 12:51 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
Damn!! i love this story, and there are only two chapters!!! Update soon!!!!
Reviewer: StarsRefuseToShine (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 10:55 AM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
I like your ideas for this story... curious how it's going to evolve. So i'm keeping a tab on this one! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 08:43 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
I'm loving this!!
Reviewer: Fantastico (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:07 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
LOVE. IT! I am always looking for stories if Bella was a vampire originally, and this one is purrrfect! Pleaseee keep writing!
Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 02:45 AM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
aw i like this rose because she's nice.
but onto your work. nice mix with the veagan thing causing bella's eyes to be brighter. i wonder how rose and alice are gonna get there clothes. will bella take them back home enabling bella to see the cullen house? furthermore, bella going there without edward being aware of her coming (until he hears her car of course).
oo i am excited! i'm sure it's not gonna happen that way but my mind goes off in it's own lala land sometimes :) great job.
Reviewer: ctfan (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 07:04 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
Really liked your story. Very interesting the way you made Bella a unique vampire with her abilities. Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: Sweetpea123 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 05:16 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
Hey, this really is going to be a great story--my absolute favorites are anything BxE, cannon, and vamps. Thanks, and please continue!
Reviewer: missielynn (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:31 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
this is a really great story. i can't wait till the next chapter. please don't make me wait long
Reviewer: alecjanes (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:52 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
cool
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:45 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
LOL...that was great! WOW I can't believe that Bella is Alice's sister in law...what are the odds. This is going to be so much fun. I'm envious that they get to ride in Bella's car...sigh
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:26 PM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
My dear you did just fine and I am excited to follow another one of your stories...I love daybreak and thrilled by this new one.
I absolutly love the car...definatly drool-worthy...
Can't wait for more...
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:36 AM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
Your story has me hooked, I can't wait to read more. By the way chapter 2 sin't slow, it was very informative. Update soon!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 05:44 AM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
It's a little strange why Bella did such a complete 180 when Alice and Rosalie showed up at here place? She was still bent on avoiding them still, right? Was she that moved by the flowers? I'm curious about her gift-she can chhose to be human, I assume that means her scent and somewhat her appearance? What a handy gift! That means she can stay in one place for about 8 years?
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Well Alice did tell Bella not to leave so they couldn't be that bad. As for Bella choosing to be human its her essense, what she puts off. if she wants to be human then thats what she appears as. does that make any sense...it works out in my head.
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 05:06 AM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
nice
Reviewer: budgiec (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:40 AM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
I liked this chapter and didn't think it was to slow. I'm glad we could learn more about Bella. The Maria connection was interesting.
Author's Response: There is still more to learn. MWAHAHAHAHAHA
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:30 AM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
That's a great insight into Bella's history, and explains a lot about her mysteriousness and how she's even able to block Jasper. Love the interaction between all the girls, by the way. I'm curious as to how Alice and Rosalie found Bella's apartment.
This is getting really good, and I'm intrigued. Please continue and thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: How many other vampires or 09 Eclipses do you think there are in Forks? I guess I forgot to type that in...I thought about it but apparently forgot to add it.
Reviewer: Tasha083 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:15 AM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
im loving this cant wait till you update!!
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