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Reviewer: shelly8721 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 10:40 AM · On: 4: A Past Revisited
Just found you. This story intrigues me. I really like it so far.
Reviewer: alecjanes (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 09:32 AM · On: 4: A Past Revisited
nice
Reviewer: Whispering_Willow (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 09:30 AM · On: 4: A Past Revisited
Wow! I love this story so far, it's absolutely amazing.
Dying for more
Keep up the excellent work *thumbs up* =D
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 09:29 AM · On: 4: A Past Revisited
Lillian's name is perfect. Bella's story is perfect. Thanks for the quick update.
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 09:04 AM · On: 4: A Past Revisited
I loved this chapter!!! And the story of Bella's history was awesome. I can't wait to read more!!!
Reviewer: Shannon Carr (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 09:00 AM · On: 4: A Past Revisited
I'm very intrigued by your storyline. It's interesting, and I love everyone's reactions to her.
The last chapter, hearing Edward talk about her to Esme, was one of my favorite parts...but I loved their music chat in this chapter, too.
You've got a lot of great details, and I'm looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:41 AM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
Think baseball! Ha.
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:33 AM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
What an interesting power. I wonder what Jasper will think of his "sibling."
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:26 AM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
Too cute that her car is an Eclipse. If Bella were something other than human, wouldn't Edward have smelled it?
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:24 AM · On: 4: A Past Revisited
(whisper whisper) They didn't have "malls" in the late '60's. They had "shopping centers" that were not enclosed, but more like a conglomeration of stores. Just for the record. *smile* Malls were not the thing until the mid to late 70's. And Phoenix was very sparsely populated in the 60's since air conditioning was more expensive. (Sorry, I lived there for years. lol)
Just thoughts!
Wow...I almost like Maria in your story! Shocking! Bella seems to have handled her transition with her usual preternatural grace. A lot of that I am sure comes from being independent and the "stable" one in the family, huh?
Author's Response: Thank you, I never thought about the 'mall' thing. Bella has always been very mature and grown up, which I believe helped her in the transisition, even in BD.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 07:36 AM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
I'm very interested to see how the story plays out, update soon!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 05:50 AM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
nice
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 04:34 AM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
ooo a sparkly vampire on top!! Do i have to choose between Edwars, Emmet and Jasper?? too hard to decide ad I suppose Carlisle too...wait nevermind!! I love the latest chapter, it was awesoem, I love that Bella is coming out of her shell a bit more! Can't wait to find out what happens next!!
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 04:14 AM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
ooooooooooo please update sooooon!! i wanna see her meet the parental figures!!
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 04:07 AM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
woooow. Vegan????? niiiice wist!! keep it up!! :P
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 03:59 AM · On: 1: What Is Her Problem?
oooo, nice car!! it's not my taste, but it's still cool!! i can tell this stroy is gonna get real interesting REAL fast!! i've noticed the changes in the story....is she NOT his singer....?? i'll keep R&Ring fer ya :P
Reviewer: miss-moon123 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 03:44 AM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
UUUH very exiting story..:) please update soon..:P
Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 02:51 AM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
I like eager Edward. It's cute and amusing.
Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 02:04 AM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
loving what ive read so far, so good not to have angst, sooooo over that, great to see humour and more 'realness' for the vampires, cant wait for your next chapter
Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 01:12 AM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
haha nice with the sparkly vampire on top touch. i choose edward!
i thought it was great. i love how you don't really have her showing too much infatuation toward edward. i like it slow that's why. haha.
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 11:22 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
:oD YaY Kinda expected more of a reaction from Jasper but am sooooooo excited to see how things work out thanx for the quick UPDATE but Pleaseeeeeeeeeee do soooooo again soon!!
Barb
Author's Response: How was he supposed to act? He does start to become more brother in later chapters tho.
Reviewer: NewDAWN (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 11:07 PM · On: 2: Unexpected Revelations
DEfinitely an engaging premise.
I like this story a lot so far.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 10:07 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
Edward is just so cute with all this!
And hey, how'd you get those fonts to stay here? lol I'm all jealous!
Author's Response: Shhhhh, don't tell anyone, its all pics. I thought the white on black would look better and match the page. It looks good though right?
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 09:53 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
HEHEHEHE!!!! amazing! update soon!!!!
Reviewer: locksofglory (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 08:32 PM · On: 3: Whys of Amber
i like this story... it is a nice twist.
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