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Reviewer: edbellafan (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart
This story is completely amazing and unlike anything else I am currently reading. I'm anxious to know what Edward has gone thru...if he is living with his Aunt and Uncle, then I'm assuming something happened to his parents. I love all of E/B's interactions and how gradually they have gotten to know one another. I'm happy that Edward finally realized his jealousy of Jasper is silly and uncalled for.
Adding this to favorites and anxious for more! Oh, and I graduated highschool in 91 and I've always had varied musical tastes, from Def Leppard to Salt n Pepa...lol...and I LOVE the Cure!!! :o)
Author's Response: Wow, what an eclectic mix of music!
Thanks for all your kind words! Edward is definitely all kinds of jealous in this story--he will grow through this, just as he does in the Twilight saga. He is also quick to jump to conclusions, which hopefully won't get him in trouble in the future...
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart
Great story! It is definitely one of my new faves!!! How often do you update?
*Relient K and Linkin Park were my favorite band in HS.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review--I'm glad you are enjoying it! I update as soon as a chapter is validated since I am a few chapters ahead of what is posted. So, it's up to how busy the 'queue' is for when each chapter gets validated. Check out the forum for teasers...
Reviewer: pommedeterre (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart
Interesting that here Bella is learning to let Edward have the choice, when in SM's books it's Edward that has to learn it. But I feel like he's not totally letting her in, either, about his leg.
Anyway, that was a nice bit of character development. And nice that Jake isn't a villain here :)
Thanks for the update and I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Bella is definitely learning to let other people into her life, not just hiding behind her shield. Edward is keeping a secret, just like in canon. And there is another sort of reverse canon situation that is coming up in a few chapters....
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart
I am glad that Bella has such a high survival rate. I still wonder what Edward has.
Author's Response: Yes, I'm hoping that everyone will read into the fact that it is very much a hopeful situation for Bella, despite the diagnosis of leukemia.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Phone Calls
Amazing story! Love it so far!!!!
Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart
Jake gave good advice for once. I didn't know he had it in him. WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH EDWARD??? You are killing me. LOL. I was a rock girl. Def Leopard was my favorite band.
Author's Response: Yup, my Jake is actually a lot nicer than most Jakes in fan fiction.
Sorry, can't reveal about Edward yet...it's technically not a huge part of what's going on right now, except for the fact that there is a lie by omission. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 02:38 AM · On: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart
Great chapter. Maddie was adorable. I'm glad Bella is calling Edward and Jake was the one that convinced her to. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Maddie--she is secretly modeled after my own three year old. =) (minus the leukemia)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Butterflies
beautiful story so far...
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart
Hey Melanie
Things seem to be going well for Bella with her results. I love that she's missing Edward, I wonder if he's feeling the same. It's interesting that everyone immediately asks her where he is. Angela revealed another little bit of information that definitely makes me think that there is something more serious going on with Edward's health. From what she said it sounds like he's been a patient there for a long time.
Are we having some dancing and kissy kissy next chapter?
When is your baby due?
Annette
Author's Response: Thanks Annette! I'm trying to drop some hints about Edward--but Bella doesn't seem to be catching on to them, does she?
Homecoming will be in a few more chapters, but I promise some kissy kissy before then!
My baby is due in April, actually on my bday.
--Melanie
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart
I'm really proud of Jake in this, he's being a really great guy.
It's good to hear that Bella is doing well, even if it is the beginning of her treatment, at least things are moving in her favor.
Author's Response: I'm trying to balance the hope and fear--it's still a scary thing to face even if the stats are 'good'.
I'm glad you like this Jake! Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart
okay absolutely LOVE this story...can't wait for more.
growing up my favorite band was Poison...circa 1989
Author's Response: Is it bad that I'm laughing about Poison? I had some friends in high school who were into them too.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart
I like your Jake. He's just a nice guy and not a jerkface. And he's encouraging her relationship with Edward - soooo refreshing to read!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like Jake--I really think he's a nice guy at heart, even in canon. It's not his fault his love is unrequited! (in canon, not here) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart
Dude, I am a teen-boy-band-a-holic all the way bb! Way good chapter about Bella's thoughts and the way that she thinks. I can't wait for your next update!
Author's Response: Thanks Nikki! I really felt that Bella needed time to think about everything that is happening to her so I tried to focus on that mainly here. Hopefully no one missed Edward too much--he's back in the next chapter.
Reviewer: Scorpiosue1102 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart
I was obsessed with Duran Duran during high school. I saw them in concert too. Great story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I loved Duran Duran when I was in junior high, then my musical tastes shifted. Still love to hear their songs once in a while, though. =)
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart
Yea, give Edward a chance. =) Bella needs something better than a ball to play with. haha
Is it better to be younger with innocence? Or be older and understand?
Author's Response: I think a combo of understanding and innocence is good! LOL I'm trying to balance out Bella's canon 'middle age' personality with a typical teenage one. (Bella claims her mom says she acts older, which she does in Twilight, but then is more teen-like in New Moon anyway--more reckless, heartbroken, angst-filled)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart
Love this story... As a teen (in the late 80's/ early 90's) it was New kids on the Block, Tommy Page, & Nelson.
Thanks for sharing it!
~Sapphire
Author's Response: Sounds like you're around my age. =) Glad you're liking the story!
Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Prologue: Movement / Chap 1: Tears
LOL! sounds silly huh?? Tons of woods, almost all private. Nearest trail is a madeover railroad bed, that is FLAT (like a railraod bed should be) for about 80 miles. Nearest REAL hiking trail is over an hour away.... I also have small twin boys that keep me from hiking as much as I use to...
LOVE this story!
~SApphire
Author's Response: Thanks!
I could see how TWINS would be hard to hike with. =)
Reviewer: pommedeterre (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Prologue: Movement / Chap 1: Tears
Oh, I'm not Ellie, I'm Candy. I should put a note in my profile, I think some people are getting us confused. Ellie is pomme_de_terre, I don't have any underscores. I joined without knowing that someone so well known and loved on the site had such a similar name :/
(I wrote her though, and she seems very nice and didn't seem to mind. I might still change it if I ever write anything, I don't want anyone to be misled.)
But there aren't any woods in the middle of the city, and some places just have farmland for miles and miles. I do wish I had woods in my backyard. Do you have woods in yours? Don't be too afraid of them :)
Author's Response: Sorry for the mistake, Candy! It's funny because I know that Ellie's penname is diifferent, but I looked at yours so quickly!
No woods in my backyard as I live in suburbia, but lots of woods within driving distance.
Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Going Home
Obviously, you know how much I love this story, but I am so sorry for being late reviewing! Excellent job as always! Ellie
Author's Response: Thanks Ellie!
Reviewer: brain candy (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Butterflies
I'm glad that the misunderstanding is taken care of!
Author's Response: Yes, I couldn't leave it until the next chapter since there is so much more going on with Bella right now. =)
Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Butterflies
Great chapter. I'm glad Jasper and Bella finally asked Alice and Edward to homecoming. I really liked the butterfly house bit. Glad they're both opening up. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Bella will be trying to get rid of some of her insecurities in light of the seriousness of her disease, so she finally got the nerve up to ask him. =)
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: KristenCullen (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Phone Calls
im so in love with this story its becoming pathetic....you won me over with the summary haha. Its so different to anything i have ever read, i pretty much only read all human fics, but never really angsty one, but this had opened my mind to a whole new genre. Thankyou!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your encouraging words! Don't worry, this isn't super angsty--it will be emotional but it is a love story at heart.
Reviewer: ratqueen (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Butterflies
I am super curious as to why Edward was in the hospital, ugg he was going to tell her and she stopped him! how frusterating.
Author's Response: Yes, I'll admit that we won't find out for awhile what's going on with Edward because there are other things that distract from that....
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: wetgirlie (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Butterflies
lol its this story!!!!!!
cant wait 4 the nxt update!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! The next chapter is in the queue...
Reviewer: gabriella (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Butterflies
this story is soo sweet. i wonder what is really wrong with edward it seems there is more to it than knee surgery. i cant wait to read more! i really really really hope that this story will have a happy ending and that neither will die because that would be too heartbreaking. i love your version of bella and edward; they are soo innocent and adorable. cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story! Sorry, but I can't give away the ending! =) Thanks for your review.
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