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Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 08:23 AM · On: Sweet Ginger

Awwww...... Bella needs to just stop fighting her feelings and Edward needs to tell her about him having Diabetes...

Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 06:20 PM · On: Homecoming

It is sad that Bella couldn't go to her homecoming but hopefully she gets out of the hospital soon.

Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 04:14 AM · On: First Date

Edward seems to be more and more of a mystery. How awesome was that date though? He was so thoughtful of the fact that she had Chemo that day........

Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 08:59 PM · On: Doubt/No Doubt

I wonder what Edward is doing to help out his friend Kate.

Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 11:53 AM · On: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart

That is sweet that Jake is trying to help Bella see that she pushes people away from her to protect herself.

Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 11:33 AM · On: Butterflies

Well now we know that Edward is just Jealous about the relationship that he thought that Jasper and Bella shared only to realize that she doesn't want Jasper but she wants Edward.

Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 11:02 AM · On: Going Home

Well it seems that Edward is keeping a bit of a mystery about him.

Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 10:41 AM · On: Phone Calls

Aw.... I wonder why Edward is really in there and why he doesn't want her to know why.

Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 10:23 AM · On: Prologue: Movement / Chap 1: Tears

Wow how sad .. I have a friend that has just gone through his second bout with cancer. He had to have a bone marrow transplant and now after a year is doing ok...

Reviewer: CarrieJ (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2011 09:02 PM · On: Epilogue

I really loved your story.  I almost didn't read it as it strikes a chord with medical issues I'm facing now but I'm glad I did.  I rarely have time now to read for fun, being a mother of 2 young children, but my husband was off this whole week so I've taken advantage.  And I'm glad I did.  Nice work. 

Reviewer: Gogsnkay (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 12:46 PM · On: Epilogue

I have read this over the last few days and as a self confessed FF addict on this site I have to let you know it os one of my favourites yet. So heartfelt and true to life. Well done and thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 03:57 PM · On: Epilogue

That was such a sweet scene! :-)

xoxo Sarah



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah,

I'm glad you liked their little future take!  Thanks again for continuing to read and review all the way to the end!

-Melanie

Reviewer: Mya Ray (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 17: Time Passes

Twilighted is my escape too.  I have been able to work through so much of my very complicated life by reading stories here. I have two special needs children and have battled cancer (and lost a parent to cancer) My husband and I are also among the fortunate ones who have worked through the hard times and come out stronger. When We were told that our youngest was going to have downes and advised to abort at every appointment I don't know how I would have made it if it weren't for his love and support.  She is a happy healthy 11 yearold now and the doctors were WRONG! (I had poly-hydramidose aka enough aminiotic fluid for 3 babies and THAT was what they were basing their diagnosis of downes on NOT anything else!)  I grieve with you for the loss of your daughter and rejoyce with you for the health of the latest knowing she will never replace her sister but how happy you must be to welcome her into your family.



Author's Response:

Hi Mya Ray,

I forgot to write in my last response that I'm sorry to hear that you have had to battle cancer as well, but I'm glad to hear that you've made it through.  I'm also happy to hear that you and your husband have made it through together.  Believe me when I say I know how lucky we are (and how rare). 

I do feel that a lot of my FF reading (and also writing) has been cathartic and also an escape.  It's been a blessing really, (even with all the fandom drama, lol). 

Thanks for your message.

-Melanie

Reviewer: Mya Ray (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 09:56 PM · On: Ch. 11 The In-Between

I was diagnosed with cancer in 2007. my daughter donated her hair last year right before she started her freshman year of highschool (she had hair down to her thighs) a month later her school had a hair drive she couldn't donate her's anymore of corse but she held the hands of the girls who did as they got their hair cut and told them how much it means to people like her mom when they give.  Locks of love actually only gives wigs to kids the wigs to kids who have lost their hair for one reason or another and is one of many such organizations who does.



Author's Response:

I love that your daughter donated her hair and that her school had a hair drive.  I've heard of so many inspirational stories like that.

I actually learned about some of the other hair donation organizations after I wrote this chapter, some from other readers as well.  Thanks for letting me know and thanks for reading and reviewing.

-Melanie

Reviewer: JStone78 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 03:38 PM · On: Epilogue

Really nice job with this.



Author's Response:

Thank you--I appreciate your kind words and I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

-Melanie

Reviewer: rivruskende (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 04:42 AM · On: Epilogue

Your story was amazing! I did cry a big deal. Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I'm sorry I made your cry...but on the other hand, I appreciate you telling me that the emotion rang true.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

-Melanie

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 08:51 AM · On: Epilogue

Loved it.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the epilogue.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

-melanie

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 09:28 PM · On: Epilogue

This story was really touching. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

-Melanie

Reviewer: ccslover22 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 06:01 PM · On: Epilogue

I love the ending.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

-Melanie

Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 06:49 PM · On: Epilogue

That was just perfect and absolutely beautiful. I have enjoyed reading this story and I have laughed and cried at some point in every chapter I think... I'm glad these two are starting on their happy ending. I hope that you are moving closer to your happy ending too... thank you for sharing this with us and God bless you! :)

 

Love, Beth :)

aka BethMasenCullen



Author's Response:

Hi Beth,

You know...it had been a tough few years but I finally feel like I am at a happy place overall, so thank you for that.  Fortunately for me, I have a wonderful family who has been SO supportive.  (And honestly, though one child definitely does not replace another, the birth of my third daughter has brought such joy back into our lives and has been so healing.)

I am so glad that you enjoyed reading this story and that the emotion came through in the writing.  Thanks for continuing to read and review despite the long delays!

-Melanie

Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2011 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 21: Prom

I loved the surprise appearance by Emmett... and I'm so glad Bella got to go to Prom at the hospital even if she couldn't go at her school. It was clear that as far as she and Edward were concerned, there was no one in the room but them, and I think it was just beautiful :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked Emmett's appearance...it's not what I planned at first but then it sort of wrote itself into the story.  =)  BTW, they really hold a hospital Prom around here which is where I got the idea. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

-Melanie

Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 04:28 PM · On: Epilogue

I hate to disagree, but I love Epilogues  They add to the fantasy, afterall we all yearn for the happily ever after, even after the 1st happily ever after!  Thanks for sharing and great story-hard at times, but very thoughful and inventive!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like epilogues!  I admit I still do read them, but I like to definitely think of them as separate from the main story.  I'm glad you enjoyed reading this story.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

-Melanie

Reviewer: Caarz (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 06:20 AM · On: Epilogue

Aaah, this story had been so fantastic! Even if it was far between the updates, it was worth the wait. GREAT JOB!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you thought it was worth the wait!

-Melanie

Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2011 05:42 PM · On: Epilogue

Excellent ending my dear, excellent ending!

Loved the idea of naming the baby Madison, very appropriate!

CC



Author's Response:

Hi CC,

I'm glad you liked the ending and the 'reincarnation' of Maddie.  Thanks for being one of my readers who stuck with me through the long delays between updates!  I appreciate it.

-Melanie

Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2011 04:12 PM · On: Epilogue

a beautiful ending to a beautiful story.  perfect.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Ellie!  You're the best!

-Melanie

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