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Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 07:39 PM · On: Epilogue
This was a pleasure to read, I have had it on my list for awhile now but wasn't sure I wanted to get into a story with a negative medical outcome as a real possibility. I see way too much of it a work and need the escape ff provides. It was great, and your hard work was appreciated.
Author's Response: Thanks again for all your reviews and for reading my story. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I have a hard time reading FF stories with sick or dying characters as well, so I know what you mean. (unless they die and are changed into vampires, that is ;)
-Melanie
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 21: Prom
Awesome
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Interim
Awwwww
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2013 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 19: The Hospital
Poor Jazzy
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2013 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 18: Divergency
She really needs to stop running when things get difficut...... life is difficult, you can't run from everything and everyone, eventually even those that love you will get tired of always chasing after you.
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2013 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 17: Time Passes
Tragedy puts a magnifying glass on the relationship, if there a cracks they get bigger, the stres is multiplied and not all marriages survive, but I wonder if those weren't heading in that direction anyway.
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2013 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 16: Luminescence
What is ADF?
Author's Response: ADF is A Different Forest. It used to be a site for Twilight, but now for anything supernatural.
www.adifferentforest.com
There are lots of lovely people over there.
-Melanie
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2013 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 15: Matters of the Heart
I hope she doesn't drag out her " you didn't tell me " drama. Get a grip Bella.
Author's Response: Hi Adirondackmommi,
Thanks so much for your reviews for each chapter. I love getting new readers and hearing feedback. It's fun to see everyone's reactions--and I know that everyone gets frustrated with this Edward and Bella at some point. Don't worry, Bella won't drag it out. ;)
I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapter.
Thanks for reading!
-Melanie aka april09
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2013 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 14: Illumination
Why is she being such a Bitch? She said she didn't care as long as he wasn't dying......suddenly she cares?
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2013 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 13: Falling Snow
Heroin......hard core
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2013 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 12: Somewhere Over the Rainbow
Tissue alert
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2013 09:25 AM · On: Ch. 11 The In-Between
You should throw in a few rec's now and again.....it's so hard to find the really good ones.
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2013 08:56 AM · On: Sweet Ginger
Mr. sexypants is diabetic?
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 09:20 PM · On: A Sort of New Moon
What is he not telling her? And please let her pull her head out of her ass and make the most of whatever time she is given. None of us knows what life will send our way, make the most of what you have while you have it.
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 08:37 PM · On: Homecoming
Getting frustrated......what is he hiding?
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 08:07 PM · On: First Date
Officially hooked and wanting to kick Edward in the teeth
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 06:40 PM · On: Doubt/No Doubt
Any day now Eddie....WTF tell her already
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 05:51 PM · On: Six Different Ways Inside My Heart
Eddie's in the hospital too isn't he ??
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 05:22 PM · On: Butterflies
I am trying to decide what Edward's secret is.....does he have some form of cancer as well?
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 10:29 AM · On: Going Home
I wanna dance with a Cullen......any one of them will do, but to be fair I would be willing to give each of them a shot.
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 10:09 PM · On: Phone Calls
Your writing flows so nicely, it's a pleasure to read. Can't wait to see what Edward is hiding.
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 09:37 PM · On: Prologue: Movement / Chap 1: Tears
Sounds promising.
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2012 02:28 AM · On: Epilogue
I enjoyed your story. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: LivelaughLoveiskey (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 09:51 PM · On: Epilogue
I loved the story. Even though it had it's sad parts, it was very sweet at the end! I loved how he proposed in a non-fashionable way compared to the other things he did. I am happy that this story got a happy ending! I am very sorry for the story to be based on the passing of your daughter, but am glad I got a chance to read it. Thank you.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Thanks so much for letting me know--it means so much to get new readers even months after I finished posting. And, I really couldn't write this story any other way but with a HEA. =D
Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2012 10:45 AM · On: Epilogue
I was a little weary of reading this from the summary cause I cant stand any character having an illess or something that may lead to death, but I'm so glad I started it cause soon I was on chp. 3 before I knew it. It just flowed and I was immensely enjoying the read. Just know that I loved it all and I really love your writing. Keep up the great job.
Hugs, Stephanie
*Im sending a PM right now if posssible too.
Author's Response: Hi Stephanie,
I'm glad you gave this story a chance. I know what you mean about being wary of stories with 'ill' characters--I feel the same way. And, in all honesty, I almost went in a different direction with this story. However, the ending that I stuck with was the original ending I imagined from the very beginning. (Plus, I think that readers who PM'd me privately would have been throwing things at the screens if I changed it!) Actually, this is the only ending I could write, even if another ending might be also realistic. I couldn't break my own heart while writing it.
Thanks for your review!
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