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Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 3

I just started this and I am very intrigued!!  I know that I will probably cry alittle when I find out what your summary meant.  Someone very wonderful is about to die and that is so sad! :(  I was looking for Jake and Bella stories but I think this will eventually be Edward and Bella.  But I will stick with this because so far the story is very good.  You write well!  Please don't make me cry too much please!!!

Hugs, Stephanie

Reviewer: MrsCullen30 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 3

Hope to see more soon! :)


Reviewer: bemily (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 2

Sounds dark.  I like it!

Reviewer: Tori80 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

OK, I'm intrigued by this story..looking forward to seeing where you go with it.

All good so far :-)

Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 1.

I like this.  Very well written.  I'm curious to were you are taking this story.  I do hope you update soon.  Great work.

Author's Response:

Thank you Robbsweetangel! 

I've have worked hard on it and just hope I can make it something worth reading.  Chapter 2 is already up on and it's in the queue to be validated on

For your kind review I’m including a piece from chapter 2:

As soon as she looked at me with those lovely brown eyes, I knew who she was. I hadn’t known if I would see her again and now here she was standing in front of me. She smiled at me and I felt my heart begin to race. I tried to determine if there was some way to get closer to her. She didn’t know me but I felt the need to be near her- to engage her somehow.

Thank you again.





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