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Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

So great to see their friendship continuing to grow.  I really like that they are open with each other about their pasts.  Those are difficult convos and they are handling it well.

Edward and Bella's pervy thoughts are cracking me up.  And I am addicted to the UST!

And 'It' is a creepy friggin movie and I hate clowns too!!!!!

Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

lOVE THIS STORY

HOPE LAUREN GETS TOLD OFF

Reviewer: nslachey (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

Oh crap it's lauren. I can't wait to see what she will say about this.

Great update. Love the story!!!

Reviewer: shannigal911 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

update soon! this is such a great story!

Reviewer: Uncoordinated Princess (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

Love this story it's such a amazing idea. Bella and Edward need to see how much they love each other that would be great hopr that's coming soon. Jake is a little player he will never stand a chance. Look what he has to compete with Mr. Sexy Coach. Emmett, Rose, Alice, and Jasper are being very good friends and not pushing so much. And lauren needs to go to hell. Looking forward to more and update when you can.  

Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

Ugh. What a cliffie! I can't wait to see what Lauren says.

Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

Really enjoying the story!  Was very happy to see another chapter up. 

Reviewer: jenejes (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

i'm loving the TomBrady/Edward similarities. So, I sort of noticed there was maybe a little foreshadowing about going back and playing again? that might be kind of cool..I love the celebrty Edward/non celebrity Bella stories anyway...hope to see you again sson!

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

oh boy this is going to be interesting,.... i wonder what is going to happen! can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: lmb (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

Great story.  I think you are doing a wonderful job building suspense between the characters, I am hoping for Portland!

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

I love this story!  I really can't wait for the chapter that includes the proloque!

Love those Lemons!!

Great story, I really am enjoying it.

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

:) Sweet

Reviewer: alexisjayde (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

DAMMIT!

 

Please tell me Bella breaks her face open.

 

Please?

Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

:) I'm so excited! But I want more more more! please! you need to update soon! I"m soo hooked on this story! Edward and bella's friendship is so awesome! :)

Reviewer: xmouth (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

love it as always!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

Great chapter. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: angelwings (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

Seriously, leave it at a cliffy why don't ya?

Reviewer: jtaylor1972 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

wow! great conversations!  I cannot wait for another chapter... now REALLY cannot wait... must have more!!! MORE PLEASE, SOON!???

enjoying it greatly! looking forward to more soon!

Reviewer: trixietraci (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

"I'm going to have to find like the manliest man ever because I don't want my next boyfriend to find a boyfriend as well." -- My fave line from this chapter! I LOL'ed quite a few times, but that one was hilarious (look at me, laughing at poor Bella's heartache). :)

I can't wait for the next update... If Lauren makes trouble, I'mma bitchslap her!

Reviewer: xxashleyxx (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

great chapter!!! Now they can put Lauren in her place, test negative for STDs, then have sexy time??? Yeah? No?? Maybe??? Update and let me know... :)

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

Good chapter!  They are really good for each other.

Reviewer: shopgirl7000 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: addictedtotwilight116 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

I really like the bonding between Edward and Bella when they are watching scary movies at each other's houses.  I think it's a good way for them to get to know each other.  I would have been clinging to Edward the whole time during "IT" because I fucking hate clowns, too.

That's definitely got to be awkward to see Lauren at the hospital when they're both getting tested for STDs.  I'm so excited that we're over halfway to the prologue because I have been waiting to see what happens since this story posted.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

Scary film marathon, love the idea of switching houses every night.  Edward and Bella are getting to be close friends.  Too bad about Lauren, she is a shank.  Hopefully you won't ruin their budding relationship.  I wonder how long Edward will be able to last?  Doesn't sound like it will be too long?  What about Bella she's thinking about  it too?  Maybe after the STD tests.  Eric was definitely a jerk.  I am glad she can laugh at it now.  That's a devastating thing for a guy to cheat with a guy.  Definitely hits the self image.  Bella's reaction seemed to be normal doubt her femininity and sexuality.  Of course, neither are true.  Looking forward to their first kiss and getting romantically involved.  I also hope Bella stands up for herself against Lauren.  Putting Lauren in her place as the town idiot.  Love this story.  Great premise.  Was surprised Edward didn't want to go back to professional football as a quarterback.  He's really into Bella to pass up a chance to be back on top.   

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Scary Movies and A Jealous Teenager

Eeew... Lauren.  She stinks through the computer screen. 

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