Reviewer: spicynoodle (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
That is pretty mortifying ... how is Bella's face going to be anything but beet red when she faces him. The UST would make my face explode. They both know that their attracted to each other and that it's mutual, so why don't they wave hello to the giant elephant in the room already?
Jake is a really creepy pervy student in this story. Seriously he gives me the heebeejeebees. I get that they are all friends of the family and it's fun to embarrass Bella, but the whole TILF conversation and everything is extremely inappropriate. Nothing is in a story without reason, so I can't help but think that this little student crushing on teacher thing is building toward something. I just don't know what.
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
OH! this is getting good! all the build up is intense! why dont they just get it over with and start dating already?! :) Hearing Edward call bella baby had my heart hammering! I'm such a pathetic hopeless romantic lol! Update soon pretty please!
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
OMG! That was great! I can't wait to see how Bella acts once she sees Edward face to face. Write more soon please so the anticipation doesn't kill me!
Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
Wow that was awkward! I loved it lol! more please!
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
Coach Masen just sounds like sex on a stick.........I love this fic!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
Why doesn't Bella just go for it? Don't listen to Lauren, she's just jealous beause he respects Bella and looks at her adoringly. Edward is staying in Forks because of Bella. They both love each other, it's getting harder and harder (no pun intended) for them to resist each other. Edward especially with Bella always liking to sleep with her best friend. Awaiting them to admit their attraction/feelings for each other and move to the next stage (dating) at least. Breakfast should be something else. with Bella blushing and feeling guilt for being a peeping Bella. Poor Edward won't have any idea was she's so quiet and blushing.
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
Peeping Bella she will be tomato red at the breakfast. and most likly choking on every other bite.
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
Oh the UST! Love it! They have to figure this out soon! Lauren is such a b**ch, hopefully she doesn't cause problems!
Reviewer: tigger12 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
loveitloveitloveit!!!
Reviewer: indianagirl (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
Personally I wouldn't have ran away. Just would have walked right in there and surprised the hell out of him. LOL!!
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
How many chappies left until the prologue?
e/B seem to be very friendly, and he calls her beautiful, etc. they both need to get a major clue....
Reviewer: jtaylor1972 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
OMG!!! WOW!!! leaving us hanging again!!!! (LOL) Love where this story is going and how it's getting there... I've sort of had a similar image happen in my life...
I am so excited!!! Please hurry... love these characters and cannot wait to see/read what comes next... (pardon the pun)
I am anxiously awaiting the next installment!
Reviewer: nessap (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
LOL. THAT WAS HOT. THIS IS KILLING ME. LET THEM GET TO TOGETHER ALREADY. IM SEXUALLY FRUSTRATED. LOL. AGAIN WHATS UP WITH "FALLING FOR YOU"?. IM DYING HERE.
Reviewer: sli723 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
WOWWW....EACH CHAPTER gets more and more intense...
I can't wait until we get to the prologue part!!!! It's going to be funnn!!!! :D
Reviewer: vannaaaaheartsjacob (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
Haha wow...
Lucky Bella!
Reviewer: dracorium (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
DUDE!!!! So when is she going to get that he likes her? he's constantly telling her that she a Teacher he would Like To Fuck, he THREW himself at her in Portland and she just caught him jacking off thinking about her.... I understand her being dense and self depricating and having low self esteem, but come on now....
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
You are so bad, girl!! You're killing me with the UST. I nearly peed my pants laughing with Bella's peeping tom act, that was great. What a bitch Lauren is. I'm sure she's going to end up causing trouble later on for them.
Love your story.
Annette
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
That was WOW! Well that was something nice to see in the morning.
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
Holy fudge bucket, That was Genius! I cant wait to read the next one :)
Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
great chapter...more please
Reviewer: leigh1080 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
yeah!!! gettin to the good stuff now!
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!! hahahahahaha omg finally .... hopefully we willstart to see some action now! cant wait for more :)
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
WOW..FUCKING HOT!!! POOR BELLA; CAN'T IMAGINE HER BLUSH NOW. LOL
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
How the hell is she supposed to face him? Now that she knows for sure how he feels about her? Sober? She needs to kiss that boy right now!!!!!
And her catching him in the act was hot!
Reviewer: kayphere (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF
You are killing me. I wish they would just get on with it. They have the restraint of saints cause I sure wouldn't have lasted that long... Thanks for the great story!
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