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Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Pillow Surprises and Late Night Calls
I hope the tension between Edward and his dad eases a bit... he needs to respect Edward's choices. Loved the chapter, and I can already see that both of them are having a hard time with being away from each other. And so far they've really only been separated for TWO DAYS. So yeah, this is gonna be rough. And Bella and Seth are going to be hating life on Monday morning...
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Missing You
Jake needs to be put in his place really soon. Can't wait for the day Bella finally does it. Edward just about killed me when he pulled over and got out of the car so he could hold her in his arms... so sweet. And I loved how they made out like teenagers at the drive in :) Not sure what to make of Edward's dad. I'm looking forard to someone putting him in his place, too. I know he's his father, but Edward is a grown man fully capable of making his own decisions and his dad should respect that.
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Bathroom Encounters and Sad Goodbyes (Ninapolitan)
What a sad goodbye at the end, but there were lots of tender and loving moments before that. I loved the reassurances he gave her. Being in Dallas is going to be hard, even if he comes home on his two days off. He'll be half way across the country and will spend a day of that time traveling... and I just hope that him being exhausted doesn't maybe lead to him getting injured...
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Love and Lacy Panties
Great chapter :) I loved Edward eavesdropping on Liz & Bella's conversation!! Sneaky devil! And the I love you's were perfect, she just said it without thinking because she felt it, and that gave him the balls to finally say it, too. Evil cliffie with the panties. I suspect Bella won't be upset, that it will just be comedic... but I do wonder why he didn't throw them in the trash or burn them so they weren't co-mingling with his things!
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Dallas
The agent ticked me off, interjecting himself into their personal lives by telling her about how Edward used to be. I'm hoping Edward talks to her openly about that soon so she doesn't have to wonder what he's doing in Dallas by himself... I was so glad that he was treating Seth like he was his brother :) It was just all around a great chapter, as usual. I'll be sad to see them separated, but I think maybe this is what they need to really figure out just how deeply they love each other. Oh, and what a way to meet your boyfriend's mom!!
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Sneaky Teachers
Another great chapter :) 3781 reviews already and you just posted chapter 16. That is so awesome. So Jane is kind of a bitch... go figure. And Jake, too. So he basically said they wouldn't say anything... and then went and told Mrs. Cope? What an ass. I'm a little surprised at Mrs. Cope, though. You'd think she wouldn't have treated the situation like they had done something wrong. Seems like she's more upset about her niece not getting what she wants than actually having a valid issue with Edward and Bella dating. I'm glad that E, B & Seth are going to Dallas together. Hopefully we can see some bonding time with Seth & Edward. And of course some sexy times between B & E. Oh, and the "wake up call" he gave her... priceless.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Broken
Talk about a lot happening. Wow can't say I am disappointed in the number of chapters that have been rapidly updated within the last 24 hours. A lot of romantic and lovely visists between Edward and Bella. As well as Edward with Seth and his family. The hugh Thanksgiving holiday at this place. It was so wonderful up till Wednesday before their Thanksgiving dinner. Bella decorated his house, got everything ready for his family's arrival for the holiday. She was the major shopper and cook for the meal. But getting upset about the baby picture, Edward was a jerk. He has been stressed, but still should have maintained his cool to talk civilly with her. Bella would have told him the truth. If Bella became pregnant she would have told him directly. Living apart is hard on both of them thus the tears. I cried and I am only reading it not living it. The pain of separation for short or long times is just heartache pain and longing on both sides. At least he tried to make it up to her with the premade dinner and nice weekend on the beach trip. Lauren's actions were done out of jealousy. Bella had been in the papers/tabloids/magazines seen with Edward. Lauren couldn't handle it because in her warped mind she should be with him. So for revenge/spit/hatred/anger towards Edward and Bella she leaked out Bella's medical records. As you can see the tabloids didn't mention the fact he parents had just died and was the day of their funeral. No they slanted it to make her look unstable and a detriment to Edward's career. I wouldn't put it passed Garrett and Irina being behind it. Looking for skeltons to get even for Edward firing him for his snide comments and innuendos towards Bella. Now she is in a state where all she wants to do is withdraw inside of herself. Push everyone away. Curl up into herself and draw the shell over her head. Not face the outside world and all their implications and lies. Bella just wanted to love Edward and build a life. Now wants to separate awhile pushing Edward away because she isn't worthy enough. I am glad Seth is with the Cullens for awhile and letting his sister deal with things on her own. Also extremely glad that Edward is coming home to Forks no matter what the tabloids spread about them. He is going to be there to help the woman he loves. He is using every asset he has to do it. His agent, his father and his father's Seattle law associates to get justice for the story being printed. Even a retraction isn't going to help the damage has been done. Who knows if Bella will be able to live in Forks any more at all. Too many folks know and think it was suicide. But because of the tabloids it is known world wide now. Of course, with scandal like this it only lasts until the next big scandal hits the racks. So looking forward to the reuniting of Edward and Bella when he returns to Forks to fix their relationship and prove to Bella that SHE is ALL Edward will ever need to be happy. Nothing else matters to him, but her.
Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Broken
Thanks for the update. Have a great Christmas.
Reviewer: chicabonita51983 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Broken
Don't forget that Lauren's whole RN license will be revoked.
And I lost track, but technically, isn't Seth almost 18?
Hmm... you better fix things soon :-P
Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Hanging Up and Flying Away
I absolutely love this story... They should move to Pittsburgh eventually, replace Big Ben because he is a prick. Haha. I love this so much! I can't believe you updated like 10 chapters... I'm curious to why... but not ungrateful, that is for sure! I wish Seth had a bigger part though. I loved the scenes where he and Edward practiced together. He is such a sweet character and I love him! Gah!
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Broken
Awww... go Edward! Fight for your love! And thank God Lauren got canned! That is such a serious offense! I used to work in med recs and they did NOT play around with people's medical records.
Reviewer: chicabonita51983 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Enough
Well, if that isn't a total violation of HIPPA, I don't know what is. So, if it is Lauren, you're totally going to have her be sued and brought up on criminal charges, right? Not to mention fines. Her career as a nurse is totally screwed.
Okay... on to read the next chapter...
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Broken
OH my god these two need a break! Bella get your head out of you ass right now!
Lauren needs to go to JAIL right now, the skank!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Broken
when they find out Garrett is behind this, and i KNOW he is, i hope he gets his arse handed to him. great story!!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Broken
:( still soooo sad.
Reviewer: grlanachronsm (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Broken
No! This is too sad. I want them together. =[ Well, it makes sense in that depressed logic kinda way, but I still want them together.
Give me a happy resolution? Soon?
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Broken
My heart hurts for them...
Reviewer: belward (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Enough
Well this just sucks. plz update soon
Reviewer: distractedbyshinyobjects (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Enough
AAAAHHHH! Please tell me that this will not be too long of an agnst situation. PLease say they fix it in one chapter not 3. Luv the story by the way!
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Enough
I read this on FF but I had to review here too. I love love love this story!
Reviewer: KEEGANN (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Enough
I CAN NOT WAIT for the next update.
greattttttttttttt cliff hanger.
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Enough
GAH!!!!!
Of *course* the ubber updates would leave me hanging with the mother of all cliffies.....
Thanks for updating! :-)
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Explanations and Apologies
Glad Edward is sucking up accordingly... lol
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Future Questions
Ruh-roh....
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Thanksgiving
Dun dun dun!!!!
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