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Reviews For Illegal Contact
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Moving On

I'm glad to see things coming together for Bella and Edward, and I love Bella's interaction with Esme and Liz.  Great job!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Moving On

YAY!!!  Super glad for the update!  I am so happy that she is better and they are back to calling each other bf/gf again!

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Moving On

YAY for strong Bella! :) And shame on those nasty tabloids. :( 

I would love to hear what Edward's dad thinks of all of this...why the change of heart?

Is it bad for me to want Edward to break his contract and just come home now? 

Reviewer: AniePen (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 12:06 AM · On: Blushing TILF and Naked CILF

THIS IS AWESOME....

U deserve a nobel prize

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Broken

Now that I have a second to write you, I HAVE TO THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU for the amazing number of updates this had in like a day! It took me quite a while to catch up, and I'm so sorry I didn't review each and every chapter. I just kept on reading and reading like one long enormous post. So please accept my apology and allow me the honor of reviewing:

I absolutely love this story. B&E's relationship is so realistic that it's a refreshing change from some out there that just scream disbelief. I love how Edward is so desperate for Bella, as she is for him. 

And now I am completely horrified for our poor Bella, being forced to endure the unbearable scrutiny of Edward's world. 

I hope you update soon as after so many chapter reads I'm going through a bad case of withdrawal! LOL! 

Hope you had a Merry Christmas and now pray you have a Happy New Year!

Reviewer: jessicasheehan (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Broken

I love your story. Keep it coming!!!! Merry Christmas.

Reviewer: litlemiss_Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Broken

i love your story...cant wait for ur next chapter

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Broken

You go get your girl Edward!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Enough

How can I not want to hug Bella right now? She is so sad and how can she give up on Edward? You have a great (sad at the moment) story.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 04:56 AM · On: Explanations and Apologies

I just feel so sad to them right now. As little time as they have together something needs to happen to remove this rift between them. Loved the chapter but it made me sad for E&B.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Thanksgiving

Uh-Oh! I hope Edward doesn't overreact too much. Their Thanksgiving could be ruined. Great chapter!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Pillow Surprises and Late Night Calls

That skanky Heidi better keep her hands off of Bella's man. I just love this Edward and Bella. I do sense some angsty times ahead for them. Great story!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Missing You

Although it was written into my wedding vows that I had to be a Dallas Cowboy fan due to living in North Texas, I just want Edward to go back to Washington to play for the Seattle Seahawks and not be away from Bella...or at least not as far away.

I hope is dad is not too much of an ass the morning of his first game.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Bathroom Encounters and Sad Goodbyes (Ninapolitan)

They can make it...just keep the skanks away. Great chapter!

Reviewer: wendy_beth (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Broken

I absolutely LOVE this story. It is my favorite story on twilighted!!!! Keep posting!!!!! I can't wait to see how the conflict resolves itself! I've read up to this point in a total of 2 days AND Ive had two family Christmas' during those days, so yeah I pretty much love it!

Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Broken

Yay! i've been mising this story. aw, edward's being amazing. that was a shock about bella, i bet seth feels bad. can't wait for the next chapter! happy holidays

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Broken

wow, thanks so much for all the updates, really nice x-mas present! it sucks what they're facing, hate that lauren bitch, really sweet that seth and edward think of the other as their brother.

Reviewer: drlena (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Broken

I'm afaid bella acting like such a basket case is  not going to look good to the social worker...

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Broken

I want to hurt Lauren in every horrible way possible lol

Reviewer: salem2004 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Bathroom Encounters and Sad Goodbyes (Ninapolitan)

Hope they can deal with the separation and Edward stays true to Bella. Love the story:)

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Love and Lacy Panties

Believe in your man Bella! I hope they can make the long distance relationship work.

Reviewer: FrenchNinny (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed

And Edward to reply: "Yes, unfortunately, that was JUST a dream!" :P

Damn it's getting late, but I'm so hooked!

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Broken

Great chapter!! Don't keep these two apart too much or we'll all go a little crazy. If I was Bella, I'd go punch that Lauren bitch in the face then kick her a few times just for giggles. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: FrenchNinny (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

Why is the number an Arizona number when she's in Washington state? lol



Author's Response:

She had just moved there... I think it was like her second day back, so she hadn't gotten her number changed just yet.

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Broken

Hey Jen

Poor Bella, what an awful thing to happen and for Edward to be so far away.  I hope that they can get through all of this.  I kinda wish he'd just walk away from football and go to Bella, although that would probably make her really mad.

I hope you have a happy Christmas and are safe as well.

Annette

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