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Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2012 04:56 PM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed

This two are so much fun!and the sexual tension is killing me as it seems to be killing 'Little Edward'. He is so busted! can't wait to see how he gets out of that one. Bella could totally get advantage of the situation and maybe lend him a hand.

Loved Edward and Seth's first encounter, a mix between meeting your sister man and a fan guy! he's such a great kid.

Kisses.R.

Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2012 08:41 PM · On: Cheap Wine and Rum

Those cookies sound delicious! wish I had the recipe...It was cute to see them baking together and a lot of fun too. Talk about giving a guy a hard time, poor Edward, think this friendship is going to be tricky for him. But i'm glad they started off like friends.

Can't believe to smart people like them didn't guess they were going to the same cookout, seems they were to distracted. And being busted like that bye their friends? can't remember what they say gotta read the next chap. Hope to see Seth meet Edward.

Kisses.R.

 

Reviewer: roxxychik06 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2012 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue

:0 !!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
There's really nothin more I can say

Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 07:30 PM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

I never get tired of reading their first encounter, it always cracks me up! Thank godness she didn't actually spray him with the pepper spray that would have been painful.

Talk about instant atraction and a bunch of match makers as friends, couldn't they (the gang) be more obvious! not wonder E&B ended up together latter on. I love the fact that Edward was so attentive with her, you can tell a lot about a man by his actions in situations like that one and is always good to see some gentlemancy in a guy from time to time.

And now I think we're off to bake some cookies to take to the Cullens cookout.

Kisses.R.

Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 06:59 PM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

I never get tired of reading their first encounter, it always cracks me up! Thank godness she didn't actually spray him with the pepper spray that would have been painful.

Talk about instant atraction and a bunch of match makers as friends, couldn't they (the gang) be more obvious! not wonder E&B ended up together latter on. I love the fact that Edward was so attentive with her, you can tell a lot about a man by his actions in situations like that one and is always good to see some gentlemancy in a guy from time to time.

And now I think we're off to bake some cookies to take to the Cullens cookout.

Kisses.R.

Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2012 06:51 PM · On: Break-Ups and Flat Tires

And there he is, our young, cocky Jake dreaming and staking a claim to his new teacher! it always cracks me up.... hahahahaha especialy since he is to young to ever have a chance with Bella.

I'm happy that all of them are helping with fixing and redecorating the house. I believe it would mean a lot to Bella and Seth, re-asure them that they are not alone in the world and that they still have a family in this close friends of their.

I'm really happy the slut is finally out of the picture, she sure didn't take it lightly with aout coach but it had to be done. Now on with the surpricing encounters that the rain can bring... I believe Edward is son going to change that ecuation to Flat tire+Fucking rain=best night of my life!

Off to next chap...

Kisses.R.

 

Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 10:21 PM · On: Quitting and Late Night Calls

May 27th...I used to wait for that date while growing up too, but for different reasons than our lovely Bella. In the country I grew up in, that date we celebrate mother's day. Till this day I still call my mum on that day eventhough were I live now mother's day is the 3rd Sunday of October... Sorry I'm rambling *sigh* I'm a little sleepy it's past 3am here.

Back to the story, I loved the chapter! I remembered some of it but there was so much more to recall... It's so wonderful to see her taking care of her younger brother, it's a lot of responsability and I can understand why she needs to 'make their parents feel proud'. Form the first time I read the books Seth was always my favorite wolf (outside from Jacob) and seeing him here as Bella's brother is so lovely! Can't wait to read more about him and his friends back in Forks...I remember Jacob being really funny with his crush on the new teacher xD

I know he is going to leave her soon but hell do I hate Lauren!In my book she falls right after Tanya and Jane, and although sometimes it's a tie with Victoria and Jessica, the 3rd place is always hers. I really had forgotten about him being in a 'relationship' with her at the begining of the story, I feel sick to my stomach just thinking of it...poor Edward.

I found the idea of Edward being the Cullens cousin and having Kate as a sister a refreshing idea, he is most of the time an only child or some of the members of the gang are his siblings that this new development is quite interesting. Also I can't wait to read more about little Abbi (don't remember much about her).

I adored the fact that he seems smitten/intrigued by her just after hearing her voice. And in that note I'm off to bed before the sun comes up again, after all every girl needs her beauty rest ;)

Hope RL is smiling at you.

Kisses.R.

 

Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Hey there Jen! So, on Valentine's day I decided that I'll re-read one of my favorite stories so far. And this wonderful story won! I can't remember if I review all the chapters when I first read it on ffn but since it doesn't let me login I'm just gonna start reading and review it here.

I loved it the first time and now is no different, i love the chemestry between this two and the passion they share, it's an awesome prologue.

I can't wait to keep reading and remenber new details that I forgot with the time. Hope RL is treating you well.

Kisses.R.

PS: I send you a PM in the forums, hope you consider it please. Thanks!

Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 08:18 PM · On: A Lot of Snow and a Pretty Ring

Awww so sweet!

Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 11:12 PM · On: An Awkward Morning, But a Sexy Night

I don't know if you're still reading these reviews, but I have to say I'm so enjoying the love and lust between E&B. So worth the wait.

Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 09:08 PM · On: Opening Up and Letting Go

Wonderful chapter! So sweet, sexy, romantic, hot, everything. Didn't want it to end.

Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 07:41 AM · On: A Rainy Kiss

Just when I thought all the UST would do me in... What a kiss! Finally!

Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 12:56 PM · On: Hangover Kiss and Another Sleepover

Edward, you are so sweet. {Heavy sigh}

(skinemax and hotime--lol!)

Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2011 08:19 PM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed

So she heard him say her name....hee hee. How's Edward going to explain this?!

Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Recently stumbled upon your story and after reading this prologue, I'm so glad I did.

Reviewer: Sally-Anna (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2011 05:03 AM · On: Epilogue

Really great story, loved it and read it all in 2 days x

Reviewer: crazy4Rob (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 12:18 PM · On: Epilogue

Awesome story!

Reviewer: caramel65 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 11:47 AM · On: Opening Up and Letting Go

It's about time you got some smmmuuuut going.

Reviewer: Annnjan (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 07:55 PM · On: An Awkward Morning, But a Sexy Night

sexy Edward....yuuuuMY!

Reviewer: Annnjan (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 07:35 PM · On: Opening Up and Letting Go

sigh...

Reviewer: Annnjan (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 02:59 PM · On: Hangover Kiss and Another Sleepover

oh just DO IT already!! haha!

Reviewer: Annnjan (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 02:37 PM · On: Dancing, Drinking and Decisions

OMFG that's hot!

Reviewer: the_other_cullen_girl (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 11:50 PM · On: Epilogue

okay i was warry at first because i dislike the patriots with a burning passion, but once i started, i just couldnt stop. great characters and great plot!!!

Reviewer: Annnjan (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue

OMFG... what an opening!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Ooooh intruiging, I've just found this story and I'm looking forward to reading the rest.

Jane x

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