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Reviews For Illegal Contact
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Going Home

I loved this story immensely.  Thanks for sharing it.

Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Going Home

I love all of your stories lol! It makes me happy and sad to see another one come to an end. Please update soon on this story and your newest one! Thanks and you make the best epis so at least thats something to look forward to... dont dissapoint! lol

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Going Home

Alright I am officially happy now that they are going home to Forks!

So what ever happened to Lauren for selling Bella's medical records?  Are we ever going to find out?  I hope the little witch goes to jail!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 02:26 AM · On: Going Home

great part

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 10:07 PM · On: Going Home

Very romantic honeymoon in a secluded house on the beach. Making love on an air mattress on the back deck with netting all around it.  Keeping off the eagle sized mosquitoes. Staying warm under the electric blanket.  Kinda reminds me of their camping trip in the tent.  Sleeping together in the sleeping bag because Bella was frightened.  Edward carried her back inside to the king sized bed to keepp warm and avoid Bella getting ill.  The second playoff game was in Minnesota.  Bella and the family were placed into a suite box to watch the game.  Edward was sacked multiple times the last causing his helmet to fly off his head.  Bella was out of her mind about Edward.  She was told only family allowed to see him by the staff.  Bella informed them she was his wife.  Ed, Edward's dad, confirmed that information.  The Cowboys lost the game, so the football season is done for Edward.  Edward is ready to come home and start his life with Bella.  Already wants her to stop the birth control shots in 6 months.  Edward wants a family and so does Bella.  Bella will be moving in to Edward's house.  She will rent her parents's home to Kate and her daughter Abby.  Edward's parents are moving back to Forks, WA.  Edward's mom wants to move back home.  They are building their own home on the land.  Edward received a concussion from the sack that knocked him out competely.  Both Bella and Edward are so happy with each other and the fact they are actually married.  Looking forward to the epilogue, but really upset that this story is at an end.  Have enjoyed it from the beginning to this point.  Always made me laugh and smile.  Even cried at some of the parts in the cemetery with both Bella and Seth.

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 09:46 PM · On: Going Home

Great chapter! I'm glad Edward wasn't hurt when he was hit, but I didn't think he would be since the story is getting ready to come to an end. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Going Home

I am so happy for them!  It worked out so much better for them than I originally thought it would.  I am really sad to see it end, I have really enjoyed this story and it is one of my favorites,  Glad I have the epiloge to look forward to and your new story which I plan on starting soon!

Reviewer: sinqo (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Break-Ups and Flat Tires

wow if it was me wakin on my bf with another man id castrate them both on site and feed them their balls..

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

what, a blowjob??? buwaaahaaaahaaaa!!!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Going Home

I'm sad that this story is ending :(

Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Going Home

great chapter...fantastic chapter...amazing chapter...awsome chapter...i've run out of suplurlatives for this chapter. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Going Home

Perfect ending!  I've enjoyed the whole story.  Every plot turn advanced the story without going off on a tangeant.  Well-crafted and heartwarming!

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Going Home

so sad to see this story end, but i'm glad that edward didn't get too injured!

Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Going Home

soooooo cute!!!

i love it! 

definitely a fairy-tale ending but idk it works like that!!!

are we getting an epi? 

cant wait!

<3's for you!!!

Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Going Home

love it!

didn't realize we were this close to the end

would really like to read about the media reaction to the wedding

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Going Home

LA-OVe it

Reviewer: ratchet (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Bathroom Encounters and Sad Goodbyes (Ninapolitan)

omg,i have just cried all through this chapter........lolx

Reviewer: Robin Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 03:49 PM · On: Texas Sunsets

So sweet, I love that their wedding was so them.  I cired, it reminded me if my own.  Can't wait to see what else you come up with for this story. :)

Reviewer: ratchet (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed

i am so loving this....x

Reviewer: Jaci (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 12:00 PM · On: Texas Sunsets

That was one of the best fan fictions I have read so far!  Just couldn't stop reading it!  Thanks.  Jacilyn

Reviewer: Robin Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 02:47 AM · On: Hanging Up and Flying Away

Okay this is my first reveiw of this story, not because I have been secretly reading it from the start and just not saying out amzaing it is, but because I only started reading it this morning.  I must first give you some well deserved praise, you built a REAL foundation for these two,a wonderful friendship, before you had them realize that they are "it" for each other, and I love that fact.  I enjoy your work very much. and until this chapter never thought that I would have something negitive to say, but really I just need a clairifcation.  You mention that they are in Denver getting ready to play the Brocos (GAG) but then you say something about Arrowhead.  Was this just an example statium, becuase the Brocos play at Invesco Feild in Mile High.  I only bring this up because I am tried and true KC Cheifs fan ( the team that Does play at Arrowhead) and didn't want people to think that our Wonderful stadium home was that of the Broncos, you know since the Broncos are our #1 rival and all.  But I must admit I love the fact that my team is feeting fome FF love ( even if we have problems playing the game well). But honestly I think you are doing an amazing job, but I must go finish the next 13 chapters that are posted to the before I go to sleep,that's my goal anyway. lol Can't wait you are an AMAZING writter. :)

Reviewer: twilighter023 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 11:17 PM · On: Opening Up and Letting Go

LOVED IT!!! :)))

Reviewer: twilighter023 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 10:39 PM · On: A Rainy Kiss

WOW A-M-A-Z-I-N-G story!!!! :))))

Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Texas Sunsets

just got through this and i LOVED every minute of this story!!! ive been reading so much angsty stuff that i really needed some fluff and this had just the right amount of drama and epic lemons to make the fluff more interesting! 

that was such a sweet wedding!!! one more chapter right? is there going to be an epi as well?

cant wait for more!

<3's for you!!!

Reviewer: FrenchNinny (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Texas Sunsets

*sighs* They finally did it! And yes, it has a nice ring to it!!

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