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Reviews For Illegal Contact
Reviewer: laurie12 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 02:02 AM · On: Epilogue

A wonderful ending to a wonderful story :) :) :)

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 01:21 AM · On: Epilogue

Loved the ending.  Edward is still the sweetest, most loving man.  Just loves his wife and children.  Little Gracie sure does have daddy wrapped around her finger.  Daddy being coach for her soccer team as well as football coach for the high school.  Baby Ethan spitting image of daddy, wow the next generation will be screaming his praises when he's older.  Adored the babies's names.  Both children having Bella's parent's name as their middle name.  Great having Edward's parents move to Forks just minutes from their house.  Is great and will be great as the children grow up having their grandparents so close.  Seth going to be a doctor.  Impressive and he gave up football on his own.  Edward was a great influence on Seth.  Just loved the ending where Gracie wanted to drop out of kindergarten. 

Reviewer: kittykat91419 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 01:20 AM · On: Epilogue

Aww, It's been a sugary-sweet good time!  Thanks for sharing this with all of us!

Reviewer: LoganOwens (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 01:08 AM · On: Epilogue

So sad to see this story end but I love the ending.

Reviewer: HappyPrinsesa (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Epilogue

nice story. :)

Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 12:33 AM · On: Epilogue

*sigh*....and they lived happily ever after!  Thank you for a great story...looking forward to the outtakes!  :-)  Loved that Edward found out that he really wanted to be a family man as long as he had the right woman. 

Reviewer: leigh1080 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 12:09 AM · On: Epilogue

I loOooved this story! i'm Sad its over, but it had a great ending. thaNks for writing it! i'm loving silver strand nights by the way! please update soon!

Reviewer: Meliha (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 12:09 AM · On: Epilogue

I can't tell you how sad I am to see this story ending. I have enjoyed every minute of reading it. You wrote the characters so well and made them come to life. I will miss the excitement I felt every time I saw a new chapter posted. I do hope you are able to do some future one-shots. It would be nice to see what these two are up to down the road. Great job with this story and I hope you write more stories in the future.

Reviewer: gaudigirl2 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 12:01 AM · On: Epilogue

Thanks for a great story!

Reviewer: IluvRobandEdward (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:35 PM · On: Epilogue


continue writing stories, you are a keeper ;-)


Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Epilogue

I love how the story came full circle with the flat tire in the rain. :) I'm glad we got to see a bit of their lives after the wedding too. :)

I will miss this story! Thanks for writing it. :)

Reviewer: edwardftw85 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Epilogue

AWWWWW I loved this story... sad to see it end. The Edward in this story... is there a guy who could live up to him... don't think so. Loved it thanks for sharin

Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Cheap Wine and Rum

I just started and I'm already loving this fic

Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Epilogue

it was so great! your endings are always so great and complete, they make me want to cry lol I would love some one shots you rock! Thanks

Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Epilogue

I am so in love with this story what a way to end it with how it started. Great story!!! Are you planning on doing another one? I hope so u have a great gift.

Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Epilogue

I'm glad you loved writing it cause i loved reading it! And it was the perfect ending!

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 10:54 PM · On: Epilogue

I think the ending was perfect--sweet but not syrupy. I'm so glad I found your story.

Reviewer: AlohaWhatever (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Epilogue

I LOVED this story :)

Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 10:45 PM · On: Epilogue

Loved this story...absolutely wonderful....can't wait to read more of your work!

Reviewer: FrenchNinny (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 10:42 PM · On: Epilogue

*sighs* and it's over :(

*wipes tears* really going to miss this fic and the lovely couple Edward and Bella made in this fic!

Really loved the sweet ending!

Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Epilogue

Her miscarriage was heartbreaking. Knowing they had two kids later was heartwarming. Seeing that they still love each other and have that same spark, even though they're both run down all the time from having 2 small kids? Priceless.

I love that it ended with the flat tire...Like I told you in my email... at first I thought Bella set up the flat tire as a "seems like old times" special thing for him. Especially when he was pinning her against the car. Then little Gracie rolls down her window and says "Got my pizza?" and I was laughing out loud!! First Edward gets cockblocked by Herkie, and now by his kids :) Classic!

Beautiful story, Jen...

Reviewer: mathqueenb (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 01:05 AM · On: Going Home

OMG I loved loved loved this story!!! Sooo great!! I thought you could make Edward sweat the sonogram picture a little longer though LOL!! You wrote this story sooo perfectly I loved it!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Going Home

I'm kinda sad to see this story end. Having Edward as the QB for the Dallas Cowboys...what could I love more? Thanks for sharing this great story!

Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 01:10 AM · On: Going Home

omg it's so true about the whole husband-forgetting-to-tell-you-things deal. it's so irritating!

I love it. And that shot thing is true too. I didn't know that until my cousin started taking it.

Love the story keep going. And there's only a few more chapters left I'm guessing so make them extra special!

Reviewer: shanno716 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Going Home

Very truely enjoying this story.  I hope the story goes on a little longer, not ready to give it up just yet.  Does Edward get his teaching job back in Forks since a sub was filling in for him? 

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