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Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 06:10 AM · On: The Skank and the Biker Babe
:)
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 02:17 AM · On: Fireworks and Late Night Talking
Oh my gosh indeed !
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:10 AM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
so great !
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 12:50 AM · On: Cheap Wine and Rum
hahahaha ,he's been sussed !
I was wondering why nobody noticed that Edward had Bellas cookies!!
Smart Rose and Emmett !
Loving the story !
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 12:26 AM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies
yep ,yep ,still loving the story :)
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 12:10 AM · On: Break-Ups and Flat Tires
Absolutely loving this .......
Reviewer: HeatherT (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
I guess when i said that nothing was going on I was meaning that it was repeative. Don't get me wrong, I loved the story. It was well written and it was intense. I think that in the begining it was just kind of... slow? I mean that in a good way though. I felt like they were saying the same things over and over again is all. I really wasn't being mean because I love the story. I just like to give constructive critisim for stories instead of the short little 'great job' or 'loved it'. I'm an author myself and I prefer for people to give me real critisim so I assume others like it too. I hope you didn't take it as me being mean though. I have pimped your story out to friends. I just wanted you to know so that you could see what I thought. Great story though... it really got less repeative toward the end!
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
interesting start ....
Reviewer: Aldi74 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 05:54 AM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies
So so sweet.
Reviewer: Aldi74 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Break-Ups and Flat Tires
Oh is it Bella's car? Jake is hilarious.
Reviewer: Aldi74 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 06:50 AM · On: Quitting and Late Night Calls
I like it and checking next chappie.
Reviewer: Aldi74 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
Interesting start.
Reviewer: deliac (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 09:46 PM · On: Opening Up and Letting Go
I think I am going to go my hubby and do these exact things to him and him to me! OMG I loved this chptr!!! Ahhh thank you!
Reviewer: pindrop (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Explanations and Apologies
Well that answered my question! lol Great Chapter!
Reviewer: pindrop (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 06:50 AM · On: Future Questions
uhh ooh bad edward! lol I really like this chapter. But, I'm confused is it thanksgiving or the wednesday before cause if it was thanksgiving Edward would have had a game at 3 because the Cowboys always play on thanksgiving.
Reviewer: HeatherT (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 04:39 AM · On: Thanksgiving
I love the premise of your story, I really do... it's just that it seems so repeative. There's nothing really going on and in every chapter it talks about the same things over and over again. I'm not trying to be mean so I hope you don't take it that way. I'm just trying to give some constructive critism.
Author's Response: Okay..... could you give me some examples? That's the first I've heard that there isn't anything going on... so I'm just kind of wondering. This wasn't one of those high drama, action, insanely charged stories. I never made it out to be one of those - it's a romance; just showing their relationship over time and how they deal with his football career, while staying true to one another.
Anyway, a little more explanation would be nice so I can check it out. Try to see from another's prospective.
Thanks,
Jen
Reviewer: deliac (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Epilogue
This story is awesome!! I love it! Thanks for sharing with us!
Reviewer: twilightelle99 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Moving On
I just love the way Renee, Esme & Liz's relationship when they were younger seems to be so much like the one Bella, Alica & Rose share. Their friendships add so much depth to your fic. Thanks for sharing your talent! :)
Reviewer: twilightelle99 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Moving On
I just love the way Renee, Esme & Liz's relationship when they were younger seems to be so much like the one Bella, Alica & Rose share. Their friendships add so much depth to your fic. Thanks for sharing your talent! :)
Reviewer: carbella02 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 10:41 AM · On: Epilogue
Well, I know that I find your story really late but I just want you to know that I had enjoy it!!!
Great fic!!
Reviewer: anne2097 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Epilogue
Was reading the new story when I saw this and read it through in about 36 hours! Thanks! I loved it!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Dancing, Drinking and Decisions
Nothing like a little liquid courage to get things started! At least I hope things are going to get started soon...
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 08:31 PM · On: Fireworks and Late Night Talking
Definitely like the story. The tension brewing between them is so exciting! I wonder who's going to crack first!!!
I really enjoy your writing style - very captivating.
Thank you!
Chyla
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Quitting and Late Night Calls
Can't wait for Bella to make it to Forks and meet Coach Masen!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
Well hello to you! Wow if this story starts off so steamy, I wonder where it will end up! Enjoying it so far and can't wait to get back to reading!
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