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Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Quitting and Late Night Calls
ooo i'm really excited to read this sotry!!!! its off to a great start... i can't wait to see what happens next =]
Reviewer: twilighter767 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Quitting and Late Night Calls
im really liking this story so far!!cant wait for more!!
Reviewer: terrabella (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Quitting and Late Night Calls
A great start! I wish there were more chapters up - I would like to read more. although I really like your prologue, so we know how it develops
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Quitting and Late Night Calls
Another great chapter, I'm looking forward to seeing (or reading0 how the story unfolds. Of course he needs to dump Lauren pronto. How come they always let it drag on?
Author's Response: I promise it will not last long... probably w/in the next couple of chapters. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
Great chapter, looks promising.
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Quitting and Late Night Calls
Nice chapter. Good lead in for Edward's character (besides the prologue).
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
I really enjoyed that steamy premise of friends embarking on the beginning of a new relationship. I look forward to reading more.
Reviewer: addictedtotwilight116 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
This was an amazing prologue and definitely has me hooked. I can't wait to see how this story plays out.
Reviewer: Radical (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
This is a ridiculously promising start! I saw the manip of Rob/Edward as Tom Brady on the banner and the thought was so ridiculous to me (sorry) that I had to read it. I mean, I'm a huge Patriots fan, but it still made me laugh like nothing else.
Anyway, this prologue was fantastic and I can't wait to see what leads up to this point and what happens after!! Update soon!
Reviewer: cautionxoxo (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
I literally died seeing the banner! Edward in a football uniform is beyond gorgeous! Hah, I like guys in uniform as you can tell : ) Looking forward to this new story.
Reviewer: Tsherm (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
I'm wondering where this story will lead. I have added you to my fav so I can keep an eye out. -tsherm
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
I'm all for this......Will keep reading!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
Loved it ! Can't wait to read more and see how they get to this point!
Reviewer: x-stephanie-x (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
woo! sounds like this is going to be a very good story!
i can't wait til the next chapter!
=) x
Reviewer: Twihard-Twilighter (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
Ooh, I'm intrigued .. This looks like it's going to be a really great story ..
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
If this is the prologue... I can't wait for the rest of the story!!!!
It will be good, hot, sweet and ...
Just hope you decide to keep writing it and soon!!!!!
Reviewer: arra584 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
I hope you have Ch. 1 already in the works because you're off to a great start and I'm anxious to read more! :)
Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
Love the story... But WHYYY would you use the body of TOM FREAKIN BRADY FOR YOUR BANNER!!!!!...srry i had a football anger prob just then...... GO GIANTS
Author's Response: It just fit with the story... hey, if it was my choice, I would have chosen Dallas Cowboys (and if you're a Giants fan, I'm sure you HATE my Cowboys). LOL.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Reviewer: vampgirl138 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
Cool! Keep it up!
Reviewer: bebe5975 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
I like it ...but is this a football story? lol
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! It's not all about football, but it does have a football type background, with Edward being a former pro-football player..
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
Can't wait to read more! :-)
*Love* the banner, btw...
Reviewer: RiRi (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
Oh oh oh!!!! I love fanfics about them being teachers and all that fun stuff!!! Especially guys in uniform... :D
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
Wow... that is some first chapter! I can't wait to read the next one.
Reviewer: naeo99 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
I can't wait to read more!!!!
Reviewer: Dada2612 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
I love it.
Please update soon!!!
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