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Reviews For Illegal Contact
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Cheap Wine and Rum

lol! i love their interactions! I mean all of them! They're freaking great together! :) Loved this chpater! cant wait for more!

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 01:07 AM · On: Cheap Wine and Rum

love the interaction

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Cheap Wine and Rum

i  need more

,,love it

Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Cheap Wine and Rum

great chapter...too funny. please update soon!

Reviewer: youaremyvienna (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Cheap Wine and Rum

I am loving this story, can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Cheap Wine and Rum

Good chapter! I hope that Bella finds out soon that Edward is no longer with the skank.

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Cheap Wine and Rum

Heheh.... awesome chapter! :)

Reviewer: youaremyvienna (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Quitting and Late Night Calls

I laughed when Emmett was squealing in the background (I absolutely love Emmett) and cried when Carlisle had to be pulled away from Bella's parents.  Can't wait for Edward and Bella to meet.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Cheap Wine and Rum

LOL.... they're so busted by Rose & Emmett.  Seriously.... Making cookies with Bella gets Edward hard.  Nice :)

Reviewer: nslachey (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Cheap Wine and Rum

Yes he does like her cookies!!! lol

Great update, I loved them making the cookies together.

Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Wow!  Makes me want to read in a hurry to get back to that!!!!  Sounds like this is gonna be good!!!!!!!

Reviewer: klw10682 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

Oooh, I like what you've got so far! Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

OMG... please god tell me hes not asking her what I think he might.. what a perv..roflmao.. but probably not so... cant wait for the update.. peace

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

Great chapter! Loved their first meeting!

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

:D I cant wait for the next one :) It was a very cute chapter *LOL*

Reviewer: addictedtotwilight116 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

Yay, you updated!  It's always exciting to see a new chapter posted for this story.  Lauren is one crazy and clingy chick.  I mean, seriously, who leaves a box of her panties on her ex's doorstep?  Anyway, I loved the Edward and Bella  together time, and I definitely want to see these two spending more time together.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

"Hey, Bella... it's Edward.  I just got your note and... well, I was wondering if you could help me out with something...?"

Aha! He needs her help making his dreams come true!

Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

  'I had the phone number of the woman whose mouth I pictured around my cock in my dreams.  Fuck me.' LOL lmao at this part!! lovin it!! :D

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 04:36 AM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

Great chapter. I'm glad Edward and Bella have now met. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

LOL! Dirty Edward.. MMM XD

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

I SO LOVE THIS STORY!

Can't wait to see how jealous Lauren gets - I can only imagine.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

I wonder what he needs her help with??? I can't wait to see what happens next. Great way to have them meet by the way!

Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

Their going to be so cute once they get over their shyness. Um Lauren leaving a box of her panties..yucky. Poor Edward already has a stalker fan. Update soon. Love the story so far. =-D

Reviewer: lucky4me13 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

more! this is such a great start to a story! i'm very excited to keep reading it!

Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Thunderstorms and Cookies

I bet I know what Edward needs :)  Actually, Edward needs a lot of things ;)

What a great way for them to meet and spend some time together.  And the package she left on his doorstep was much nicer than that box of underwear Lauren left!

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