Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Cheap Wine and Rum
So loving the Edward/Bella moments! They are great together -- it's addicting!
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
BUSTED!!!! Ha! I can't wait for the next day!
Reviewer: Drnifer (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
I absolutely love this and can't wait to hear E's explanation, LOL.
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
LOL
Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
thanks for the update, i hope he'll have the balls to jump in and say that yes he was dreaming about her
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
*mischeivous laugh* hehehe
~ B
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
Hehehe.... Edward Masen is a Horny Masen.... awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: OH MIA MYA (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
loves it I do. Can't wait till the next chapter
Waiting Patiently Impatiently,
OH MIA MYA
Reviewer: cecpet (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
Hmmm, can´t wait to see how that conversation will go... And I don´t seem to be the only one who loved that ending but will love whats to come even more :-)
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
LOVED IT!!! I cant wait for the next one
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
He knows she is dreaming of him, too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
haha.. now its edward who is dreaming of bella and dream talking haha!!!
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
duh duh duh dummmmmmmm.. FESS UP TIME EDDIE..lol
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
LOL
Edward is so busted. He talks in his sleep.. I guess with having a vivid dream about Bella I understand why. =-D
Reviewer: shannigal911 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
oh my god! pleasse update soon!! please!!
Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
awe man!did you have to stop it there?
Reviewer: klw10682 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
:) Awesome chapter.
Reviewer: bebe5975 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
OMG i love it love it love!! cant wait for some more:)
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
Great chapter. I'm glad Edward finally told Bella that he broke up with Lauren. I liked all the E/B interaction. How is Edward going to answer her?
Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
Too Hot!!! And how could you leav that little cliffhanger there? LOL
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
Hahahahahaha!! Awesome!
Thanks for updating!
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
LOL.... I find it funny that this Edward tells the truth, while Bella lies :) The camping trip... oh my. I love that they're away from the group and sleeping next to each other now. I wonder how he's going to explain his way out of saying her name in his sleep?
I love there internal monlogues with themselves, they're both really funny when they'e in their own head and trying to talk themselves into the fact that the other one isn't interested!
So who called Bella when she was in his classroom?
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
Great chapter!!! Poor Edward almost got caught having a wet dream. I'm glad he finally told here that he was no longer with Lauren. I cannot wait for the next chapter to see what happens to them on the camping trip.
Reviewer: jtaylor1972 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
LOVED IT!!! Great start and very interesting end!!! Please hurry... I'm so excited to hear/read/see what happens next!!!!
Thanks for a good story!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 01:26 AM · On: Cookie Deception and Caught Red Handed
I love the plot line. Bella coming home to friends. Meeting Edward, cousin to her best friend. Things are started to heat up between them. Definitely Alice, Jasper, Emmett, and Rose are all setting them up to be together. Loved the prologue waiting for the full chapter that scene is in. Looking forward to further chapters for the continuing events of Edward and Bella getting closer.
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