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Reviews For With Teeth
Reviewer: streetgurl (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 18


Reviewer: Pat1983 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 26

Loved the update. So sweet!

I didn't cry this time.

I can't believe there's only one more chapter to go =(

I love this story so much.

Thank you.

Reviewer: streetgurl (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 17

yay! she said it. 

Reviewer: Lurecyka (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 26

You have such a wonderful way with words. This story is so beautifully written, making it a joy to read.  I can't  believe it's almost over...I really don't want it to be over...I'm addicted to them :)

Reviewer: Gennell (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 26

I never really thought they would get back to this point.  I was just thrilled that they were friends.  And I know they are going to "think about it" while he is gone on his trip.  But I think they are both more mature and in a better place, and I think they have a better chance now.  We cannot really choose who we love in life.  We cannot choose our "pinball machine".  It just is.  I really enjoyed this chapter. 

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 26

Well that was beautiful! I love that Edward just made up his mind to try to move things forward and how they both feel crazy for the other!

Reviewer: twink423 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 26

So effing great!!  I love that they are talking about how things could be better and different in starting over again.  And that Bella is being honest about what she is afraid of and what could happen if she doesn't call him out on his shit, etc.  I really hope they can make it work when Edward gets back. 

I can't believe there is only one more chapter left... I will miss this story and the characters so much when they're gone.

Reviewer: OhhEdward (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 26

Loved the chapter. Loved it. I am the biggest fan of these two getting together. I am glad that they are honest with each other and talk things out. I just wish they could have more confidence in themselves. Especially Bella. They are made for one another. They have overcome so much junk in the past and I think that they are both grown up enough and got their stuff together that they can take a leap of faith and just try. I was reading so late at night that I didn't catch how long Edward is going to be out of town. I hope that while he is gone they both don't talk themselves out of this. That would be sad considering how far they have come. Wonderful story. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Mell C (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 26

Intense. And fantastic.

Reviewer: maarthev (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 26

NOO!! it can't end! i love the story so much i want to go on and on and on. LOL thanks for the update really love the story even if it's so short.

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 26

charlie was pretty cool... i was surprised. well, it doesn help that bella is almost 30 now but even so it could have been so much worse than awkward...

Reviewer: Yasmina (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 26

I'm awe-struck again. Your writing makes me feel tongue-tied and embarrassed because none of my ramblings here could do full justise to your amazing talent.

I'll just say I love your story. Very much. Thank you for it.


Oh, and I've been wondering why is it called "With Teeth"? (sorry if the question is stupid)

Reviewer: Ouiser Boudreaux (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 26

Dear Ms. Talula, 

I think this one just about killed me. I want to be irritated they didn't officially "get back together" but I just can't. Every emotion you share and movement you describe, every word uttered feels real and authentic and most of all healthy. As a side, I also have say it was EXTREMELY sensual and effing hot! 

This has been such a moving and emotional story. I'm not ready to say goodbye to these characters. if they've effected me so dramatically I can only imagine your commitment to them. Thank you for trusting us, you readers with them.



Ouiser B

Reviewer: 50bestfriends (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 26

Friend, so glad you're giving us the hea.  The beginning of the chapter was a bit forward (as in time from the last one) so I had to regroup before I caught on half way through the party.  Probably just me being anxious to read rather than your writing.  Your Edward is so damn sexy.

Reviewer: paammee11 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 26


Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 26

A new start for them!  (sort of)  I love seeing how much they have both grown.

Reviewer: fancastride (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 26

That was so sweet.  Wow when Edward took her hand and started to lift her skirt....yeah that was hot!!!! Loved how they might give it a go again, knowing their past and how Bella was so lost without him they both need to give it some thought.  I will be sorry to see your story end.  Great Chapter.

Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 26

I just love this story.  It's nice to see a story every now and then where Bella doesn't just immediately run back to Edward.  Don't get me wrong, I'm all about Edward and Bella.  But that just isn't real life.  Great story.  I'm sad it's coming to an end.

Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 26

Oh.My.God. EPIC chapter..fucking EPIC. Fun stuff in the beginning, serious stuff in the end

BUT THE MIDDLE? FFFFFUUUUCCCCKKKK ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously Hott--probably one of the more sensual encounters I've read!!

Not likin your Chapter End Note (crosses arms & scowls at you) :+(

Reviewer: streetgurl (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 16

oh poor orgasms during intercourse.  boo hoo!!!  just kidding but seriously at least you're more realistic about the sex....

Reviewer: streetgurl (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 15

loved it all.  does edward not know how hot he is?  or is he modest? 

Reviewer: grabadietcoke (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 26

This chapter had such a leap to it, didn't it? Bringing Charlie and Edward together - so that he is no longer a secret in her life and acknowledging her feelings toward him. The recovery conversation was amazing, I like to read honest conversation that includes all of the fears.

Reviewer: Gina2000 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 26

W o w. What a reunion. That was probably one of the most honest ff chapters I have ever read!  Absolutely beautiful conversation at Bella's apartment.  I love the maturity and growth B&E are showing here.  Amazingly written dialog.  I loved this chapter. 

Gah!  Just beautiful!!!!!!

Thank you for sharing this wonderful journey with us.

Reviewer: Jeswah (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 26

I just want to say thank you. I don't review every week but that doesn't mean that I'm not hanging on for every chapter. With Teeth has had a profound affect on me. It's got into my head and I often find myself thinking it over when I'm doing something.

Your writing style is just inspirational and I can't tell you how much I've enjoyed this story. I'm sad to see the next chapter is the last, I've come to care a lot of both Bella and Edward. Especially Edward. I think I will miss your words tho as much as I will miss your characters.

Your playlists are badass by the way. You have great taste in music so thank you for sharing that too. I had a lot already but you've introduced me to a lot of new bands. The Walkman for one. Thank you!


Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 26

I love that they're slowly mending the bridges...that for all the pain the separation caused them, that they've both grown and this relationship is not only being built on trust but on equal footing :)

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