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Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 27
Dear TalulaBlue,
Having just finished your story, I remember the feelings and thoughts other chapters excited in me. This is a rare occurance and only attends worthwhile writing. Not once did your story flag or become mundane and inconsequential. It was consistant and relevant through the whole and even in the darkest sections there was joy in the crafting.
It is my sincere hope that if you have published that you will share where to find it and that if you have not published, you will consider doing so. I will read anything you care to write. Well-crafted and involving prose is not as prevalent as it should be and I cherish every source. Thank you for so unselfishly sharing yours.
Mary K
Reviewer: MMOBB (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 27
Thank you, thank you, thank you. I've adored this from the beginning. Your writing style fitted the story perfectly, and the pacing was wonderful. It's been a challenge and a joy to read, and I've cared about these two all throughout. I'll miss them deeply... thank you again.
Meg
Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 27
I wish I could write...I so wish I could...I am actually angry right now that I cannot tell you how your story of addiction adnredmption with Bella and EDward has touched me...I know I am not aloe...but I feel as if it is MY story...I have devoured every chapter adn probably will again...it has meant so much to me...being a food addict...seeing this edn...all I want ot do is go eat a cheesckae...but I will just have to f*cking cry instead...I will miss With Teet so much...
So Much...
Thank you for walking through whatever difficulty you had to put this on"paper" for "us" (ME!)....luv you....
Reviewer: mrsmurphy (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 27
Beautiful ending. Thank you so much for your story. Please keep on writing, you are so very talented.
Reviewer: poohlicous (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 27
Perfect ending:)
Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 27
Not the ending I was expecting. It left a lot to the imagination and also left me filled with hope.
Reviewer: Kenzie121 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 27
That was such a beautiful and well written story. Thank you for sharing it.
Reviewer: lost my mind forever (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 27
One of the most realistic stories, I have ever read in FF. A stunning job, by an incredible author. Bravo!
Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 27
What a journey for both of them and for us. Thank you for sharing your story. It will be missed.
Reviewer: bausten (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 27
I don't often review, but I wanted to tell you thank you for writing such a great story. It was raw at times, but also beautiful and heartfelt. I appreciated it, and you have a true talent.
Reviewer: twiheart89 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 27
I can't believe it's the end - can you be convinced to do an epilogue? :)
xx
Reviewer: ooza (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 27
Thank you for writing such an amazing story! The ending was truly beautiful. I am sad that it is done, but I think you wrapped it up perfectly! Hopefully you have something else up your sleeve. <3 <3 <3
Reviewer: Bethelbelle (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 27
Beautiful.
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 27
You're just so good at writing these little moments so perfectly and beautifully. I love the way you ended this story in a quiet moment, full of hope. While this was sometimes a diffcult story to read, it was never because of your writing...you've made this so realistic and real and developed these characters beautifully.
Thank you for sharing this story with us.
-Melanie
PS I also love that he finally wrote her back.
Reviewer: Nano Annis (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 27
I have a pain in my chest after reading this and I'm trying hard not to cry. I've been caught up in my love for this story for so long that it's hard to let go and if it's that way for me, I can only imagine how you are feeling right now.
I feel that firstly, I should say congratulations on completing your story. Thank you for sharing your words and such a special part of yourself with us. This story crept right into my heart and remained there. It wasn't always easy or pretty and at times I thought the starkness of the truth would kill me, but it was so, so worth it.
With this story, you remind us that anything is possible with real belief and effort. You remind us that life isn't easy and sometimes it completely sucks, but that doesn't mean we have to stay in the gutter. You remind us that there is no such thing as a perfect, happy ending, but that we can find joy in aiming for it and in living each day.
I won't forget this story or your amazing characters.
With much love and admiration,
Emily xxx
Reviewer: StoryPainter (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 27
*cries*
Ungh, that was just...beautiful :-)
Reviewer: azoolap (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 27
Thank you so much for this story. Your words were so beautiful
Reviewer: McGee (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 27
Just perfect. Thank you.
Reviewer: JoMarie (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 27
Perfect ending.
Reviewer: chop (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 27
Thank you for this story. I hope you continue to write more. You have such an honest way of capturing what is happening in the reality of a moment and mingling that with the inner workings of each character. I will so miss these characters. Thanks again. Best wishes.
Reviewer: axd3258 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 27
loved this chapter...loved the ending. as much as i would love to read and epi and see into their future...i LOVE how you ended it. and i kind of like not knowing, and just letting them be.
loved this story...it has been so honest and real. and beautiful. one of my absolute favorites.
Reviewer: ECis4ME (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 27
What a perfect ending. I'm glad there won't be an epilogue. Not because I didn't like the story (because it is truly one of my favorites) but because it just doesn't seem an epilogue would "fit". Your story was so real. So raw. So beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing your incredible talent! ~Tyra
Reviewer: ECyesplease (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 27
How did we find ourselves at the end so quickly? It seems like I've been racing to reach this point and now I want to go back. Haha. I guess that's what re-reading is for. :)
This story has been unlike anything I've ever read. Thank you so much for sharing something so beautiful and pesonal. It's clear how much you put into this.
The final line sums up my feelings for this story perfectly. "I smile." Even through the difficult to read chapters, you always left me feeling or sensing hope. You have an amazing way with putting words together.
So now I'm going to sit back and let this soak in. This story will always hold a special place in my heart. There's something about this Edward. i just adore him. And I like and respect Bella so much.
I'll be on the look out if you decide to share another story.
xxoo annie
Reviewer: irishluck (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 27
thank you for such a beautiful story i have loved every word
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 27
is it really the end? no epilogue? *sigh* just wanted to say i really really loved and enjoyed your story. it made me understand recovering addicts more. you write them really really well. prolly the best i've ever read on that subject matter. i really hope there's an epilogue bec i still want to read more about them but if this is really the ending, i like how you end it :)
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