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Reviewer: jenalpz (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 11
Wow. That was so great. I will have to reread. I was surprised he showed up but thrilled. I am very anxious to see E's POV on this, see what was going through his mind. This was very different from his last encounter with a woman and I'm wondering how he struggled with it. Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Scorpiosue1102 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 11
Fantastic chapter. Each chapter is less stuttered and more natural....just like their relationship and I love it. They have so much to go through still, but I just love this story. Probably my favorite right now.
Reviewer: bemily (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 11
"So, this is a lot weirder now that I'm inside," he finally says.
Loved that line.
Their first kiss was so perfect. The whole chapter was really.
Reviewer: AuroraBlue (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
And there it is...Once again, you make it so real. This is my favorite FF. You make "BereftWard" so real. thank you.
Reviewer: FangLang (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 11
Oh wow. The slow burn heats up. Probably the hottest yet sweetest thing I've read in a long time. I really want to know what Edward's feeling right now. He best be feeling very good. Lol.
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 11
oh sweet, a little making out!!!!
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 11
I loved it!!!! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: olvamptramp (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 11
Great chapter. I just love your writing style. It is very real.
Reviewer: victoriajoy (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 11
I read your chapters slowly, hoping to make them last longer.
Love the vulnerability of these two.
Reviewer: Sophie_2003 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 11
beautiful. I like that they are taking it nice and slow. tks for the update!
Reviewer: emily612 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 11
One of the best first kisses of all time -- loved the brownies, loved the guitar playing, loved it all! But the last line of the chapter -- "I slide into my bed and bury my face in the sheets, trying to smell him, but there's nothing there" -- that line is KILLING ME! What does that mean?? I figure it can't be good. I'm worried that it can't be good. I'm going to worry about it until the next update! Please don't leave me worrying too long!
Reviewer: angel4ever (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 11
UGH!
that. was. worth. the. wait.
wow, bb i read A LOT, as you probably know, and that was one of the best updates i have ever gotten.
thank you so so much. i can't wait to see where it goes from here!
angel
Reviewer: ManfaMae (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 11
AHHHH!!! I love that chapter! I may just have to read that one again:)
Reviewer: MelissaO (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 11
Love the story! Can't wait to see what happens.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 11
OH MY GOD!! THAT WAS TOTALLY FANTASTIC!!!!!!!! LOVED IT SO MUCH!
Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 11
Whoa hottest make out scene ever, I could just picture it! My heart is racing
Reviewer: fotogirl (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 11
Loved it, of course! Very sweet chapter. Ahhhh...first kisses are always great. *sigh*
Reviewer: lisab (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 11
that was such an incrediby sweet chapter! had just finished all of the other chapters yesterday so was so excited to see the update this morning! thanks for writing this is great!
Reviewer: Evenstar (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey!! I just thought I'd stop by and tell you how much I love your story! Why is it that you don't have a banner? Is it because you don't want one or because you haven't been able to get/create one? If you want one, I'd be happy to make one for you :) / K
Reviewer: Tyranny (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 11
I don't know whether I want to laugh or cry. I loved it, it was beautiful. You got that first kiss feeling exactly right, with the heart pounding and everything. Loved it, can't wait to see more.
Reviewer: mothlights (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 11
Uhm wow, that's... wow. Or in your words, "good, good, good."
Reviewer: lal08 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 11
Hot, hot, hot.... Truly one of favorites ever and everytime I see an update I am so happy and I have to read and I have to review right away!!! So how will Edward balance his recovery and a relationship, very promosing and interesting plotline...
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 11
Awww Talula that was wonderful and a lovely surprise. I wasn't expecting that to happen yet. I thought it would take them longer to take that step. Not that I'm complaining at all. Edward was so sweet and gentle *sigh*.
Thanks so much for the update.
Annette
Reviewer: cozyegg (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 10
They are so fun - I love the way you write them. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: lisab (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 10
I just love love love this story right now! cant wait to read more! hope edwards going to be as great a guy as he's trying to be....
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