It suits perfect their story; No rush, just gentle getting to know each other.

Finally! I love it! I just hope edward doesn't freak out and pull away

This story is incredible!  It has twitter all a buzz right now!  Amazing!  Loved how sweet Edward was and there time together...getting to know each other was so hot and sweet!  Can't wait for the next chapter!

i really love mike! he's fuckawesome. but you know i was wondering if we were gonna get some emro action in here

OK, highlight of the chapter to me was Alice's "are you fucking Seth?" interrogation..

I LMAO!

I wonder if Edward really doesn't give a shit about Bella or if he is suffering from the usual "I am a dick. You are too good for me" complex... Probably the latter.

Anyways, I love your music. I've created playlists on youtube and I am listening to them while reading. i am sad there is only up to chapter 3 at playlist.com..

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review.

Playlists for all eleven chapters are up. Only three show up (in addition to the featured playlist, which is always the most recent) on the initial page. Click on the playlists tab, and you'll find all eleven.

I honestly don't want to be caught up.  This was so intense and wonderful.  Now I will lament having t patiently wait for an update.

ok, that was FANTASTIC! I am far too excited now for the next update!

omg. I was wondering when they were going to give in. And boy was it nice. I think you captured the whole 'making out' essence well...I know I don't have clear thoughts when gettin' my mack on...

man I love this.

The interaction between these two is great.  I'm conflicted about them kissing.  As much as this is romance and its great that things are moving along, there is a reason why they don't want recent recoveree's to date.    All that aside, this is a great story! 

I'm so enthralled at the way you've built these characters.  Bella and her Gramsci amazes me.  I'm insanely jealous of your writing ability.

Never bet against Alice/feathers_mmmm.  She's rec'd this story big time and I just didn't want to believe.  I stumbled through chapter one more than once before I finally dug in and kept reading.  I now LOOOOOOOOOVE your story.  I still can't really relate to what he's going through but I can empathize.  I'm really hoping his romantic entanglement with Bella heals instead of hurts.  I'd really hate to see him relapse.

I prefer AU and Vampward but your writing is so compelling and descriptive, every scene plays out perfectly in my imagination.  I love the awkwardness between these two.  Similar to canon their romance is sweet but without the naivete, they both have pasts and I can appreciate that.

I'm really, really hoping you're a HEA kind of girl.  I so want happiness for these two, especially Edward who struggles so to stay on the straight and narrow.  I was blown away by (was it chapter 3 or 4?) where he goes through his routine over and over, just to get through the day.

It's sweet that you're not begging for reviews but I feel bad none the less that I haven't reviewed most of your chapters.  I've read most of this on my IPOD and it's too hard to type a good review on that.  Just know that I think you're a very talented writer and a compelling story teller.  Great job and I SOOOOOOOOOO looking forward to more chapters.

love,  Richelle 

Oh dear lord that was THE most intense kissing ever! I gotta say that was better than some lemons that I've read! Good stuff, man, good stuff. Your writing is just amazing!

Wow, I'm in awe of your pure, amazing talent. This chapter was just perfection. It is so sensual and sweet, and I loved the easiness of these two. I'm so happy that they finally touched and kissed.