Love it, love it, love it!

if i was you i would demand reviews, you put all this hard work into writing such a great story and the least the readers can do is say how amazing it is!

that ending was hot!!

*runs off to read next chapter*

AMAZING!!

i am only going to leave short reviews because i cannot wait to read the next chapter :)

(Im more of a lurker, bit i believe you deserve reviews from me for this amazing story)

Such long, dense chapters!  I love it!  Great description of Boston and how she spends her day saying goodbye to the city!  I like that she's not waiting around for her Edward but having some sexual fun with Seth.  Your Bella and Edward are definitely not the toned down Mormon version of SM or the juvenile, idealized ones of much of the fanfics out there.  I like the realism.

WOW that was fantastic. GOD i love this story so much.

Starting this on the recommendation of several people. So far, so good, you have me quite interested. :-)

I loved, loved, loved this chapter.  I think your makeout session is like a million times hotter than most of the lemons I've read.  It was so realistic and sweet.  I loved the part with the legs getting in the way - so true!  It's interesting just how tender this was, in comparison to the scenes in the first chapter with Edward, which were just so horrifically brutal to read.  I can't wait to read Edward's take on all this.

Thank you again for writing!  I was reading another story that has Edward as a recovering alcoholic, and although it was very well written I was dissapointed because you've set the bar so high.

Ok, so this story is amazing. It's so perfect and realistic, and it just makes me feel warm inside when I read it. This chapter was what I was waiting for at the same time I was dreading it. All I could think was, "No, Edward don't kiss her!" rofl. I just don't want thier relationship to interfere with his recovery. I'm sure that Jasper will be a little upset about this. I want him to get better, but I want him to be will Bella at the same time. I AM SO CONFLICTED.

I love this story, I can't wait for more :)

I am going to recc you on my blog tomorrow. SRSLY LOVE THIS STORY.

I have to say I never start reading stories until they are almost finished because I am not the most patient person in the world and I know I won't be able to wait for the next chapters to come... This is the first time and boy, what a torture it has been since I finished the 11th chapter yesterday... I am totally hooked on your story! Can't wait for what's gonna happen next! Not trying to rush you or anything but my goodness pleeeeease hurry up! LOL

I love your characters and how the relationship between them develops, I totally loved the awkwardness in the beginning when they couldn't even formulate a full sentence... So adorable! Love the mix od BPOV and EPOV. Your portrayal of Edward is amazing, it seems he's never been in love before and just discovers what it's like for the first time... His innocence (considering that he's anything but innocent) when interacting with Bella is astounding. The kissing scene was absolutely beautiful. Lit'rally cannot wait for more...

Wow.

Thank you.

YOu do such a wonderful job of writing their awkwardness and conversations. I can really imagine the sentences actually happening. And, by the way, BEST MAKE-OUT SESSION EVER!

Totally enjoyed the entire  11 chapters in one sitting.  Loving the story and the blossoming relationship