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Reviewer: lindsey1230 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 11
oh my gosh. that was just... whoa! so good.
Reviewer: loolupe (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 6
I'm curious about his family
Reviewer: lindsey1230 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 7
omg, i freakin love them. they are so cute around each other. i love love love edwards point of view. it's nice that he recognized what was wrong and fixed himself, just for himself. and he's so strong for doing it mostly by himself. you are doing a great job writing this story, i can't wait to keep reading!
Reviewer: nondi_rochelle (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 11
Um... Wow. That was all kinds of hot. Seriously, that was beyond sexy, and very realistic.
Reviewer: nondi_rochelle (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 10
I just love these two. And I love this story dearly. Excellent job.
Reviewer: nondi_rochelle (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 9
They are just too cute. I love how awkward they are and how they always seem to irritate one another.
Reviewer: bella224 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 11
OMG THAT WAS SO GOOD! NOW I HAVE TO WAIT FOR AN UPDATE. I HATE THIS
Reviewer: nondi_rochelle (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 8
Aww they're so cute together. And now I have a craving for rhubarb pie.
Reviewer: nondi_rochelle (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 7
That was so deliciously awkward. I love their one worded responses. Too cute.
Reviewer: nondi_rochelle (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 6
Hearing about Edward's past was very heartbreaking. I'm glad that Jasper is there for him. Excellent job.
Reviewer: nondi_rochelle (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 5
Loved this chapter. I'm also loving the music you have paired up with the chapters so far. I like how Edward is kind of coming out of his shell a little bit.
Reviewer: nondi_rochelle (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 4
I really liked how you wrote the beginning of the chapter. That was very creative. I love this story so far and I'm looking forward to finishing.
Reviewer: KiwiEdfan (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 11
I found the link to this story on the Twigasm blog.
Enjoying the read. Looking forward to the next update! Keep up the great work.
Reviewer: nondi_rochelle (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 3
Another great chapter. I love Seth. He's so sweet and adorable. Jasper and Alice are still really cute. I'm wondering how his accident is gonna come up in later chapters. Anywho excellent work.
Reviewer: nondi_rochelle (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 2
Wow, cute chapter. I love Mike in this story. He's always the douche or the slimy guy that hits on Bella. I like having him be her best friend. I like Jasper and Alice too, they seem cute. And god help me, I like the Seth/Bella lemon. I know its wrong, but he's so sweet. I also love that he braided her hair, although I have no clue why.
Reviewer: nondi_rochelle (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow. Very interesting and dark story. I'm curious to see where its going.
Reviewer: Nikki_BU (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 5
I love the E/B back and forth! Their actual conversations are actually quite amusing. And then he goes back to shutting down and my heart breaks a little bit. This is so good.
Reviewer: Nikki_BU (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 4
Well, at least I know he wasn't just being a douchebag. He's just gettin through stuff and trying not to relapse. Good for him. But now he can man up and talk to her! DO IT.
Reviewer: Nikki_BU (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 3
I'm so ready for them to talk! Suck it up, Edward! Bust a move, dude!
I love Seth.
Reviewer: tj33 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very intriguing story. I will be interested to see how this pans out for Edward.
Reviewer: marylizo (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 11
Wow...that was the hottest make out scene I think I've ever read. You really know how to build/maintain anticipation.
Reviewer: Newmooneyes (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 10
I'm so tired right now but I just can't put my phone down, because I'm in love with those two...
Reviewer: vickyaj (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 11
Hey!!!!
I loooove your story!!! Just startes reading it like 2 days ago and im done!!!
Cant wait for the next chapters to come!!!
Reviewer: Newmooneyes (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 9
In so many stories mike is a total idiot and it's a nice change that your mike is a really good friend to bella.
Good choice of bands here: yeah yeah yeahs, yo la tengo...
And I really like it when authors put their playlist online. So thanks very much for that.
Reviewer: marylizo (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great story. Great rec from twigasm....love the imagery you create without being overly verbose. Can't wait to read more!
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