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Reviews For With Teeth
Reviewer: BHBabe (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 12

Fascinating.  The story is beautifully paced and I love the sense of fragility in both characters.  Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: jenalpz (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 12

I was jonsing for an update on the this fic and not disappointed. I am glad they're taking slow. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 12

The Edward you have created just touches my heart.  He is so real, so human, and although so many things I can't relate to with him there are so many others that I can.  He comes to life through your words.  I am always giddy like a school girl when I see you have updated and am always excited for the next one to come.  Thank you for writing such a wonderful engaging story that I am enjoying so much.

Reviewer: roxyrain (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 12

I love this nervous, awkward couple, they seem so very real to me. I love how their relationship is evolving and how Edward is making small positive steps forward. Your writing is always so vivid and heart gripping. You are very talented and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 12

LOVED EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS!!! GREAT JOB

Reviewer: tmbleweed17 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 12

ahhh i love this!!! they are so sweet.......... im so in love with this story....

Reviewer: ja6108 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 12

He's so confused! Poor Edward. I wish he could just relax and enjoy it. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Live720 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 12

This story is just...

I'm really at a loss of words.  I love, love, love it.  I love your characterization of Bella.  She's strong, smart, funny, a bit naive but not too much so, and incredibly accepting.  She's refreshing to read and easy to route for.

I love watching Edward change from the very first chapter.  I felt my heart sink to the pit of myself, felt myself almost become physically sick reading about his former lifestyle.  How sad. How sad, was all I could think, and what a complete waste of life and breathing.  He's growing slowly, changing softly, and I'm interested to see what is in store for his future.  I'm sure he'll have hurdles that get in the way and I'm curious as to what the peak of the story is going to entail.

Finally, I had to mention I love Bella's relationships with both Seth and Mike.  Her friendship with Mike is envied, because doesn't every girl want a best friend like that?  Her relationship with Seth is unique and interesting. 

I honestly have no complaints about this story.  It's going at a marvelous and realistic pace and I feel everything that Bella and Edward are feeling as the scenes unfold before them.  My stomach gets butterflies when Bella is affected by Edward's kisses or proximity, and I feel myself blushing when she gets embarassed.

I'm looking forward to the next update.  Keep up the good work and thanks so much for writing such a refreshing and beautiful story.

 

Reviewer: siggynic (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 12

I love this story so much! I often find myself thinking about it  =- wondering what will happen next. Loved this chapter - and love the reference to hiim being fourteen. SO SWEET! And I also really enjoyed how he knew when it was too much and he had to stop. Fascinating story! Keep up the great work - this has been a great start to my week! YAY!

Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 12

I am happy Edward realized that by rushing he may be triggering old habits with the sexual situation & decided to slow things down. Is Edward worried that by telling Jasper about Bella, Jasper may say he is not ready?  I love how awkward they are together. This is a great story

Reviewer: Cerebella (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 12

So torn - shes good for him, obviously - his 1-10 rating drop shows that... but would it be better for him to heal on his own, instead of his recovery being based on someone else?  Humph!  Someone better tell Jasper soon, because when he gets a look at Bella, or the two of them together... hes not a blind man - Hes gonna figure SOMETHING out! 

Gaww, hes so nervous and cute, waiting for her to show up!!  THEYRE so nervous and cute!!  

Happy to be caught up, b/c now I get to get excited about updates, but bummed since now I cant just go on to the next!!

Great chapter - you can really catch and convey moods amazingly!!   

Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 11

so good. I can't believe I missed this update. Now off to read next chapter :)

Reviewer: Jessypt (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 12

hehe that was so good! I love how awkward yet good they are together! You really have such a unique way of writing this story! I love it!

Reviewer: tisaveeone (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 12

I love this story. I would like to find some wonderful flowery words to discribe how much i enjoy reading it, but I just keep coming back to love, so I hope that's enough.

Reviewer: lisab (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 12

This chapter is so so super sweet! i just loved it, and love this story!  can't wait to read more.  thanks again for writing.

Reviewer: loss4words (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 12

"Everything is different; everything is exactly the same. "

This line is a little frightening.  It seems like this could either ground him or put him completely over the edge.

I really enjoy this story and there was the perfect amount of "steam" for their growing relationship.  They both have expectations and reservations and you can FEEL how fast they want to take it and how hard it is for them to slow down.

Wonderful!

Reviewer: Brits23 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 12

*sigh* I'm in love with this story. Do u mind if I rec u in the next chap I post of my story? Let me know! :)

Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 12

Awww. They are so cute. I have total confidence that Edward can make this work.

Reviewer: kim1974a (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 12

Another beautiful well written chapter.  I love these characters, I can't get them out of my head.

Reviewer: Genny (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 12

That last paragraph is so beautiful. This chapter really captures that sweet awkward stage. Thanks.

Reviewer: caligirl24 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 12

Another fabulous chapter!  The honesty and simplicity in this story is just so beautiful!  Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: ella_lacy (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 6

This is just..wow.

 

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 12

wonderful chapter. i really cannot get enough of your writing. your style is brilliant; the characters are superb and the story progressess really well in every chapter, leaving you wondering what mind set the characters will be in next.

i like the way their relationship is going. its intimate, even without the physical side of it, though you can certainly feel the chemistry between the two when there is a bit of lovin'!

i'll be interested to see jasper's reaction but something tells me he'll be understanding..

as always, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: sp0iledbrat (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 12

Wow I really like this story. It's different from the others. Usually I don't read fics
about Edward Whoring around. But as I read on I realised it was a one/last time thing. I like your writing style it's different but still kind of sam, still it looks fresh. Anyway keep up the good work :)

Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 12

Awwwww! What a great chapter!  You do such an incredible job making us actually feel what these two are feeling...the innocent, awkward yearning.  This story just always feels so intimate...I can't wait to read as their emotions get more intense and they loosen up a bit more.  I really wonder what Jasper will have to say about all this.  Oh, and it was interesting how Edward started to feel himself spiral out of control when he was with her, but was able to rein it in and stop. That's good, right?

I really LOVE this story! I can't wait for more!

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