So sweet- what a delicate dance they're doing.

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Wow, that's some dark Darkward. I like it. I've heard lots of good things about this story. 

So after hearing how awesome this story is (on twitter)..here I am :)  I'm hooked - I started it tonight, and if I had some toothpicks to keep my eyelids open, I'd keep reading...but just can't.  I can't wait for him to break his silence !!

Another great chapter. I absolutely love their fumbling make-out sessions.  You really capture the yearning and awkwardness between them. It's hot but sweet.  I'm nervous for them.  Glad that E is at a 5 1/2 and not higher.  Everything is different; everything is exactly the same.  So true. 

I am leaving my first review for this amazing story on chapter 12 because I couldn't stop reading after each chapter.  You have drawn me in with characters that feels so real and true.  I love how they talk to each other.  They are open and honest with each other.

I do wonder what Jasper will have to say about their blossoming relationship.  While I want them together as much as the next person I wonder if Jasper will make Edward second guess if he or Bella is ready for this huge step.  Especially when Bella will be leaving in a few months.  Where will that leave Edward then?  Can they make this work?

The last paragraph seemed to completely explain how much they have changed...it wasn't; and now it is.  Beautiful.

that not sharing food thing is possibly the most hilarious thing in fanfic I've read ever. Sorry if it wasn't meant to be.

Hey Talula

Great chapter.  I can feel Edward's confusion over what's going on.  He's just not used to this sort of relationship.  They are both very sweet with each other.  I can see that Bella is not sure how far they should take things either.  You write this so well.

Thanks for the update before Christmas.  Hope you have a lovely Christmas.

Annette

Aww, that first date kinda awkwardness was captured so well!

Another wonderful chapter.  When they were getting carried away on the couch, it almost felt like Edward was giving in to his addictive behavior, but stopped himself.  Don't know if you meant that, but it made sense -- maybe he is stronger than he thinks.  Anyway, I love the pace of the story and can't wait until the next update.  I've been worried about what will happen when Jasper finds out or what will happen if this doesn't go smoothly.  But I like Edward's comment -- "But I can't imagine how anything that makes me feel better - stronger, more sure - than I have in longer than I can remember; how anything like that could be a thing to refuse."

 

I wanted to wait until I read through all the chapters so far before leaving a review--hope you don't mind :) I really, really like your story. The dialogue is very fun and although they sometimes just talk about trivial stuff, it all really makes a difference and pushes the story foward. I like the steady progression, too. I, myself, don't like rushing in my stories and it bothers me when Bella and Edward are saying 'I love you' two chapters into a story so I like how yours isn't like that. Also, I am usually not a fan of stories in present tense--I don't know why, but they always manage to annoy me and I can't continue past a few paragraphs--but for some reason your story really reeled me in and the tense did not bother me at all. The story just wouldn't be the same written in past tense--I know it's weird to think of that, but I'm strange about that stuff. So very well done. Your story is very different and I love how you catch the awkwardness of Bella and Edward's relationship; it's very realistic. I can't wait for the update!

I'm really trying to come to terms with the emotion this story invokes in me. It's good - I just can't put my finger on it. I am really enjoying this.

The writing of this story is awesome. I love it. I love the banter between E and B. They just seem to "get" eachother.