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Reviewer: twink423 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 6
i loved edward speaking at AA... his story clenches my heart and i feel for him... but love that he is speaking out and talking with jasper was good too... love that he is still thinking of bella
Reviewer: twink423 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 5
i loved the ineractions between e & b with the book rec's - just very playful and cute banter.. and also jasper opening up to bella about his sitch.... i hope bella can open edward up in the future too.
Reviewer: twink423 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 4
ok, this is a great chapter... sorry i am finally reviewing on chapter 4, but i just couldn't stop reading until now. love this story hard... you can give thanks to the gals over at Twigasm for rec'ing this. Those lovely ladies rec the very best stories and this one is awesome. ok, onto the next chappie! Love it all!
Reviewer: palooza (Anonymous) · Date: December 26, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love With Teeth. I started reading it and couldn't stop. Can't wait for updates, this is definitely going on my squee list.
Reviewer: TheRugbymom (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 12
this is great! I'm loving this story!
Reviewer: TheRugbymom (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 11
nice!
Reviewer: jbella (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 12
Wow I stayed up till the wee hours of the morning reading all 12 chapters. I am hooked on your story, your writing is fantastic...can't wait for more.
Reviewer: TheRugbymom (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 8
well that ending was sure painful . . . . I want to give them each a big hug
nicely done
Reviewer: TheRugbymom (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 5
finally!
you've done a great job building this up
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 12
So good. I love that we are moving forward now. I know Edward will have to tell Jasper. He may not be pleased, but Alice will probably support them. I just saw your story yesterday and from the premise I had to read it. I'm glad that I did. I enjoyed it very much. Can't wait to read the new update.
~Shani
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 11
That was a really good lemon. Well there was no sex, but a lot of PDA. It still was good for me. A lot of times you don't have to write out a whole sex scene to make a point. This was good enough and it made sense. They are taking their relationship slow so this was a great place to start the physical stuff.
~Shani
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 7
Sweet.
~Shani
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 6
Wow that story is so real. Again I say I have never done drugs or gotten drunk, but the way you tell this from Edwards POV sounds so right. Like it could be a truthful tale from any ex addict/drug dealer. This seems so documentary. Girl you know how to write a story. If you don't write a book and tell us where to purchase it. LOL I haven't read in a long time a great FF story like this. But yours just reads really well and authentic. Merry Christmas!!! I still have 6 more chapters to go. I'm savoring each one.
~Shani
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 5
Great job again. That has to be so tough to open up and let people know about your drug or alcohol problem. You can't tell everybody because so many people are judemental. You can loose friends or a job behind it. If I were told about someones issues I would try to play it off too and show sympathy. I would try to talk a bit, but not get to nosy into their lives. I would just show that I was there for them as a friend that they could depend on.
~Shani
Reviewer: Jenny Jerkface (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 12
This story is fabulous. Your writing is probably the best I've ever seen. I gave you a rec on my blog, Twitarded. Can't wait for the next update. Very well done.
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 4
This is so good. The repetitve way Edward goes about his day is real. I bet there are so many ex drug/alcholic people who do the same thing everyday. You have written such a real outlook here. Great job.
~Shani
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 3
Loved it. Edward is really avoiding people. He is really broken, but sober. Bella is really finding her place and self a bit.
~Shani
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 2
I love this Bella. You told us a lot and this fills very solid. Your a very well rounded writer who knows how to tell a story. You should try and write a book.
Well I have 10 more chapters to get through and then put your story on alert.
~Shani
Reviewer: ssn112358 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 7
Great chapter!
Reviewer: ssn112358 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 5
This is great!
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
WOW!!! No wonder you have over 900 reviews for only 12 chapters. This is damn good. I've never done drugs or gotten drunk. But I've heard that people feel the exact way you described it. This really is going to be a great piece that's so not fiction. I love it when FF authors make Edward and Bella into real people with real issues. I love this Edward with his realness and attitude. Can't wait to read what Bella is like. Merry Christmas!!! Have a blessed and Happy New Year!!! And you or someone you know must have been through this. The details of how Edward feels sounds on point.
~Shani
Reviewer: TheRugbymom (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
nicely done
Reviewer: Tyranelson (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 12
I found your story after reading Angstgoddess003 Company Loves Misery. She mentioned it in one of her a/n's. I am so glad I came over here to read it. I love your writing and feel like I really know these two. I can feel E's pain and it's so interesting to see through his eyes what it's like for him day in and day out. I really hope things will work out for these two.
I'm caught up now, and am looking forward to future chapters!
Reviewer: moblair (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
I've seen this story so many times and just haven't read it yet. But this first chapter i amazing and I'm so glad that I got bored this morning. If I wasn't on a severe amount of Tussonex right now, I'd say something more intelligent. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Reviewer: jublack2000 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
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