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Reviewer: whitestripe (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 2
This is awesome!
Reviewer: MyHubbyIsATwilightWidow (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 27
This was a lovely story. It took me a while to realize that you sort of paralleled the original with Edward's addiction to drugs being like the addiction to human blood. I wish you had an epilogue to show us ten years down the road, but it's also nice that you left it up to our imaginations to hope for the best.
Reviewer: whitestripe (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
Whoa... this first chapter is incredibly raw and feels real.
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 27
Thank you for sharing this amazing story. It was angsty and hearwrenching, but a beautiful story. I really love how the characters grew. I think the ending was perfect. They've come along way and know the future won't be perfect, but they're happy.
Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 14
That was beautiful and perfect and just incredible! It was worth the wait and at just the right time.
Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 13
It breaks my heart a little bit how he keeps thinking she is going to reject him. These characters work so well together. Similar in their shyness with each other and yet totally in their pasts and they way they interact with people.
Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 12
These two just have a beautiful fumbling awkwardness about them. It's sweet and it's intense and just wonderful.
Reviewer: Sparkkel (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 14
ah how refreshing to read about some shmexy time where the climax genie doesn't grant simultaneous orgasms. good stuff indeed ;)
Reviewer: mallmouse (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 27
Thank you for giving us the best Twilight ff story. The void it's left is so big I'm even willing to beg for Bella/Jacob outtakes.
Again, thank you
Reviewer: edwardisavilf (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 27
Thank you for giving us such a beautiful story. Your writing is great, but better than that, it is REAL. Real life is so full of sorrow and regret, full of anger and pain. You wrote all the ugly grit that life can hold, and made if beautiful and fullfilling. This broken Edward broke my heart, but he was lovely in his imperfections. Thank you again.
Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 11
Wow. That was just lovely. The kissing was lovely and sweet and hot and tender and just perfect.
Reviewer: edwardisavilf (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 7
Ok, so this chapter was sooooo sweet in all its awkward glory. But I hurt inside for this poor broken Edward.
Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 10
I really enjoyed this chapter. Jasper...I am not sure what to expect from him exactly. I know he doesn't want them to be together right now, but I don't know if he is going to be aggressive about it. The car ride was a lot of fun. The shoulder squeeze was lovely and I am itching for these two to hug. It doesn't feel like the right time to kiss just yet but the UST is building and it's quite delicious.
Reviewer: edwardisavilf (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
Your title is so incredibly apt. I can't tell you enough how accurate your descriptions of partying and drugging are. From someone who has lived through the drugs and sex, thank you for not sugar coating it. Thank you for writing this as dirty, disgusting, and painful as the reallity can be. Your work is amazing.
Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 9
I love their teasing, no I adore it. I adore them. I spend so much time worrying about them while I am reading that the playful banter and teasing is needed. I was a little bummed seeing her kissing and fooling around with Seth, but I think I know where her sexual aggression is coming from ;-)
Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 8
The conflict and the tension in this story is just delicious, but this Edward just breaks my heart. I just ache for him and all that he has been through.
Reviewer: tlips18 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 4
this is the most sexually frustrating story i have ever read... ugh... and i love it!
Reviewer: Shano (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 8
wooowwww i loved this chap. I thought their insecurity was delightful. Edward seems so shy and reserved, so vulnerable. Its charming! The story took a while to pick up but i like where its going now.
Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 7
These two with the grinning are so adorable! There is such happiness and an ease-even in the awkward moments. I am just curious as to what kind of boundaries Edward has set with himself and which one of them will want to push those boundaries. I also worry about Jasper and how he will handle a potential romance. Great story! Lots of chemistry!
Reviewer: Pat1983 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 27
I love this fic so much, so sad to see it end :(
You are an incredibly talented writer!
Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 6
Thank you for the warning for this chapter. It was brutal. I wept when he described that awful scene. I just fear so much for how far these two have to go. I can see that Jasper is going to be a problem and I understand why he would be. Edward's past is just devastating.
Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
These two are adorable in their dance of awkwardness and smiles and blushing. They have a difficult road ahead though, I think.
Reviewer: sweet_mama77 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 27
Aw, that was just beautiful! You broke my heart more than once with this story, but - like with Edward and Bella - you put it back together better than before.
I'm so happy that you brought them full circle. And I'm glad they've decided not to have kids, because I don't think Edward could cope with parenthood. But I bet they'll be the most awesome aunt and uncle ever!
Wonderful work, bb! Thank you so much. :)
Reviewer: Veeron (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 27
This is my fav story. thankyou for writing and sharing :)
Reviewer: Musty (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 27
It´s a beautifull story, but I wish there was a more complete ending :/
I don´t know, I don´t mean to be rude, really, It´s just.. did he ever colapse again? Was he able to work as a teacher? Did their relationship work? Did they marry each other? They were anxious about their first night together after so long and it made me anxious too.. I wanted to know how that was.
So, yeah, I like the story very much.. I just wish there was more at the ending.
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