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Reviews For With Teeth
Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 10

I really enjoyed this chapter. Jasper...I am not sure what to expect from him exactly. I know he doesn't want them to be together right now, but I don't know if he is going to be aggressive about it. The car ride was a lot of fun. The shoulder squeeze was lovely and I am itching for these two to hug. It doesn't feel like the right time to kiss just yet but the UST is building and it's quite delicious.

Reviewer: edwardisavilf (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

Your title is so incredibly apt. I can't tell you enough how accurate your descriptions of partying and drugging are. From someone who has lived through the drugs and sex, thank you for not sugar coating it. Thank you for writing this as dirty, disgusting, and painful as the reallity can be. Your work is amazing.

Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 9

I love their teasing, no I adore it. I adore them. I spend so much time worrying about them while I am reading that the playful banter and teasing is needed. I was a little bummed seeing her kissing and fooling around with Seth, but I think I know where her sexual aggression is coming from ;-)

Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 8

The conflict and the tension in this story is just delicious, but this Edward just breaks my heart. I just ache for him and all that he has been through.

Reviewer: tlips18 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 4

this is the most sexually frustrating story i have ever read... ugh... and i love it!

Reviewer: Shano (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 8

wooowwww i loved this chap. I thought their insecurity was delightful. Edward seems so shy and reserved, so vulnerable. Its charming! The story took a while to pick up but i like where its going now.

Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 7

These two with the grinning are so adorable! There is such happiness and an ease-even in the awkward moments. I am just curious as to what kind of boundaries Edward has set with himself and which one of them will want to push those boundaries. I also worry about Jasper and how he will handle a potential romance. Great story! Lots of chemistry!

Reviewer: Pat1983 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 27

I love this fic so much, so sad to see it end :(

You are  an incredibly talented writer!

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 6

Thank you for the warning for this chapter. It was brutal. I wept when he described that awful scene. I just fear so much for how far these two have to go. I can see that Jasper is going to be a problem and I understand why he would be. Edward's past is just devastating.

Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

These two are adorable in their dance of awkwardness and smiles and blushing. They have a difficult road ahead though, I think.

Reviewer: sweet_mama77 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 27

Aw, that was just beautiful!  You broke my heart more than once with this story, but - like with Edward and Bella - you put it back together better than before.

I'm so happy that you brought them full circle.  And I'm glad they've decided not to have kids, because I don't think Edward could cope with parenthood. But I bet they'll be the most awesome aunt and uncle ever!

Wonderful work, bb!  Thank you so much.  :)

Reviewer: Veeron (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 27

This is my fav story. thankyou for writing and sharing :)

Reviewer: Musty (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 27

It´s a beautifull story, but I wish there was a more complete ending  :/

I don´t know, I don´t mean to be rude, really, It´s just.. did he ever colapse again? Was he able to work as a teacher? Did their relationship work? Did they marry each other? They were anxious about their first night together after so long and it made me anxious too.. I wanted to know how that was.

 

So, yeah, I like the story very much.. I just wish there was more at the ending.

Reviewer: Musty (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 22

"Good morning, ladies"   kkkkk

My God, this is so Jacob. Couldn´t keep my laugh from going out loud.

Reviewer: sweet_mama77 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 7

Awwww!

Reviewer: sweet_mama77 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 6

This story is amazing.  You're really making me think about how difficult it must be to go from the powerful position of drug kingpin to a post-rehab labourer at the bottom of the totem pole.  It must take an unbelievable amount of courage and determination  just to keep putting one foot in front of the other.

Reviewer: duSangre (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

what a brilliant first chapter. exquisitely done.

Reviewer: Intricacy (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 27

I love the way it ends. It's perfect. It's beautiful.

Thank you so much for sharing this.

Reviewer: Musty (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 19

WTF????

Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 4

I love that he didn't notice her immediately and that his short term memory played it. I also love that he notices her now. I like the characters in this story already, even Alice.

Reviewer: Musty (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 15

Is it just me or Edward is getting a little too obcessive?

Reviewer: crazyj9girl (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

wow.. a edward like ive never seen.. cant wait to read more

Reviewer: ArcadianMaggie (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 27

I finally finished reading these last few chapters, and what can I say? *sigh* The only thing that really comes to mind is thank you.

Reviewer: DebbieCDC (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 27

Great story! I loved it!

Reviewer: chucklesfamily (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 3

I'm so anxious for these two to interact together! I'm also dying to know what is going through his mind. I'm kind of still Team Seth right now though ;-)

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