Oh good lord, this story is just so well done.  Each chapter kills me with its intensity and the development of their relationship.

Great chapter!! He is completely fucked... I love it!

great story

I really like your story, it is very differrent than anything else I've read and I can't wait to keep reading!

Your story is amazing, I am so hooked on it and I'm only 5 chapters in!  Love the pace you have set and how  they finally had a conversation.

It's weird reading one of these with the "we should just be friends" speech. That makes this different, but good! :)

Love that they're communicating (finally!) and together. 

Can't wait to read more.

Loved this chapter!  Wow...I'm surprised they were able to stop.  Edward's self control is impressive.  Somehow I don't think they're going to be able to keep their hands off each other ;)

Bella is constantly taking notice of the lack of noise, the silence. She hasn't stated that she misses the cars and buses and people, just that the silence catches her attention constantly. As if she were surprised it hasn't driven her crazy yet.

Her life has fallen into a pleasantly nice routine. She likes her work, her co-workers, the chores, the ins and outs of the bookstore. Especially she likes Thursday and Sunday afternoons when a guy who would probably fit better back in Boston than in Port Angeles makes his appearance in the bookstore. Just as she has, he as a routine to which he sticks. He talks as little as possible and just the needed words for his purchase. He has put a spell on her. She is aware of it, and seems helpless to stop it. So she decided to take a chance and start a conversation, sadly it only was her rambling trying very hard to get an answer from him. Nothing, she should be upset, he came across a bit rude. She is as intrigued as before.

Seth is... a good buddy, a nice guy, someone to pass the time with. Too old for his young age. He sees far deeper than I am sure people give him credit. He realized Bella and him are just sharing time for a while. He isn't upset, he gets it, and wants to enjoy it while it lasts.

Bella is moving to Seattle in August, how will her life change there? Will she miss the silence?

Mmm that was hot...he just can't stay away ;)

Another great chapter!  Well I'm disappointed that Bella is continuing her flirtation/relationship with Seth.  I understand that Edward can't be more than friends right now and I feel that it's for the best, but he did tell her that he likes her and it's obvious that they both want more.  It's just wrong to be playing around with someone else when you're becoming emotionally involved with someone.  She is going to hurt Edward.  I really want to smack her for being stupid.  Does she not realize how fragile Edward is right now? 

The flirtation with Edward is fantastic and I find myself smiling like a tool :)