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Reviews For With Teeth
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 11

That was so beautifully written, I have never read a kissing scene that was so hot!  Well now they have ventured into something that should have waited.  I hope this is a HEA!  Regardless this a a wonderful, well written story!

Reviewer: readingintherain (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 2

I really kind of love this Bella. :)

Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 11

Finally!  That was lovely.  I felt completely in the moment.  I also kept thinking "but he's not supposed to..."! 

Reviewer: katmiles77 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 14

Ahhhhh......Edward finally gets laid. The smexing was wonderous!!!!

Reviewer: katmiles77 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 13

Gah....you're killing me here.

Reviewer: katmiles77 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 12

Such a slow burn...gotta love it.

Reviewer: nicoleaj (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 14

One word....amazing :)

Reviewer: Dawnplus3 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 14

Wow..... just WOW! Im all hot and bothered over here!!! And my husbands working tonight.... crap!!! Seriously though, really well written, well done!!

Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 14

The calm before the storm...

Reviewer: dm241 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 11

Apparently Edward likes to drive!!!  LOL!!! Guess it was OK for Bella to take him up on that offer after all.  :)

I loved the chapter. It was great and they kissed!!!!

Yeah!

Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 12

I keep waiting for this to go wrong... yikes!

Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 11

I don't know what to think about that. I'm worried for him.

Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 10

I also went to local government meetings with my parents when I was growing up. I'm not alone! (Hypothetically)

Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 9

I really love Mike in this story. He's such a likable guy. That's rare in a mike. Thank you for that.

Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 8

I'm loving the realistic awkwardness. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: vamosrafa07 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 5

Your story is really really well done. Well weaved together.

Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 7

Okay, so I haven't been reviewing because I was still trying to get a feel for your story. It's hard to know what to say in the very early chapters when things are still being fleshed out. The story could go zillions of ways. I like the time you're taking to develop the characters. I appreciate the way that Bella and Edward interact. I find it very realistic. I dig the conflict that Edward not supposed to be dating brings to the story. All in all I'm having a good time... Thanks so much for writing.

Reviewer: dm241 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 9

Edward is sort of sexually frustrating Bella, uh? Well, good thing Seth is around LOL!!!!

Reviewer: dm241 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 8

Great Chapter! Love the interaction between these two, the exploration of who they are, the sharing of information and the holding back of it too.

Reviewer: parker137 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 14

I spent the weekend reading your wonderfully written story. I wanted to review every chapter, but I read on my iPhone where the Twilighted review doesn't work. So now that I'm back on my computer, I wanted to let you know how much I really love this story. It's so well written and obviously well thought out. I can't wait to see where they go from here. I am of course nervous for them. Thank you for sharing your writing!

Reviewer: dm241 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 7

I love to read about their interactions. It really captures the awkwardness, uneasiness that can be there at the beginnings of a new relationship, trying to get to know each other.

Reviewer: dm241 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 6

It is gut wretching to read about Edward's former life. I couldn't imagine having to live with  the memories.

Reviewer: dm241 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 5

He remembers her name this time. I bet!!! LOL

It's really good.

Reviewer: dm241 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 4

The replay of Edward's day was really great.  Gotta feel for the guy. The sheer monotony of it has got to make you tempted to use or drink!

Reviewer: dm241 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 3

Alice and her dress making had me chuckling. Info about Jasper was really interesting. It is kind of amusing that Bella is irritated with Edward's presence. You know it's cause she likes him and wants his attention.

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