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Reviews For With Teeth
Reviewer: truthordare (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 15

i stalked twilgihted for a week waitin for this story

 

thank you

Reviewer: mjpiper74 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 15

I was worried that Jasper would be the one to stop their relationship but he seems to be willing to let them see if this will work or not. 

I really loved their joking and teasing each other on the phone.  Their "I like yous" just don't seem to do justice for what they are really feeling for each other.  That being said...I really hope that Edward isn't exchanging one addiction for another.  I am not sure if the way he "needs" Bella at the end of the chapter is new found love or addiction. 

 

Reviewer: kmm122 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 15

I really enjoyed this chapter! thank you for updating!

Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 15

I hope Edward isn't changing one addiction (drugs) for another (Bella). It's hard to tell if it's his addictive tendencies taking hold, or just the excitement and desire and natural high that comes with a new relationship.

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 15

Oh boy, the man is in love. and that could be the best thing for him, or the worst. Please let these two admit how they feel, and hopefully he can go to Seattle with her. I   cant bear the thought of poor Edward falling apart when she leaves.  :(

Reviewer: dorothys ruby slippers (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 15

I enjoy this little tale more and more with every update.  These two are very sweet, and navigating some rough waters.  I look forward to seeing how it all unfolds.

Reviewer: lisab (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 15

I just love them!  this edward makes you want good things for him, for them, and for him to feel good about himself....can't wait to read more.  thanks for updating! 

Reviewer: radioActive (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 15

I love this story...writing that and my inadequate vocabulary don't do my any justice here.  I really really love this story.  I have probably 10 stories that update on here (I try to read stuff on ff, because for some reason the black background hurts my eyes...I'm wierd) and when I get an alert in my inbox, I'll I'm thinking is "please let it be With Teeth"!  The other day I went back and read ch 14 again, just because I was thinking about it and wanted to.  You. are. amazing.

Reviewer: jacmom (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 15

Fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: ksgeo (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 15

Can't believe I thought for even one brief moment of giving up this story for Lent.  Not gonna happen.  I'd rather forego chocolate - and that's saying a lot.

Reviewer: Melissa228 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 15

There are no words. I know that sounds like bullshit, but really...there are no words for how powerful of a story this is. I wish I could articulate and explain how palable the writing...the words...are, but I can't without coming off as a total idoit. So, I will just say that I've read a lot of fic...I write it myself...and can honestly say, I don't think I've ever been as moved as I have with this story. There are talks of support groups for us...so at least I won't feel so alone in my obsession.

Thank you for writing this...for sharing with us. Thank you.

Reviewer: mallmouse (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 15

I love this story, thank you for the update!

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 15

amazing chapter as always, although for some reason this one makes me concerned for edward but i'm not entirely sure as to why that is...

Reviewer: angel27eyes (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 15

he can't be flipping out! don't let him screw this up!!! I love this story!!!

Reviewer: sass (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 15

I think I understand what Jasper meant about juggling too much. It already seems as if Edward is becoming distracted, thoughts of Bella are clouding his mind and seem to be affecting his work. Probably not a good thing when one has an addictive personality, hmm...

I friggin love this story so much, seriously. It is so very different from anything else out there and I look so forward to your new chapters!

Reviewer: SweetVenom69 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 15

sounds like Edward is becoming a tad bit addicted to Bella... I like it though... will make for more interesting drama =)

Reviewer: SweetVenom69 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 15

sounds like Edward is becoming a tad bit addicted to Bella... I like it though... will make for more interesting drama =)

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 15

Edward seems to have found a replacement for his old addiction, very interesting. Loved it!!!

Reviewer: creuxx (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 15

I love it, can't wait for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: freshgirl324 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 15

I'm a bit of a lurker, I don't tend to review much... I'm not always as thoughtful as I'd like and my reviews end up being "yay!! love the story!" lol

Anywho... I've been jonesing for an update of this story so much that I've been checking the forum a couple times a day so I was very excited to see this!

I can't figure out my feelings for Edward.  I'm not sure if he creeps me out a bit or not.  I guess we'll wait and see!

BTW, I'm with Bella on the tolerating Zombies, but not slashers! :-)

Thanks for writing!!!

Reviewer: JoMarie (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 7

I loved that interaction between them.  It reminded me of times when I felt the same with someone; I remember the excitement and the awkwardness.  You want to be yourself, but you want to person to like you.

 You're doing a great job with this story.  And I like that you say reviews are not necessary.  You're a sweetheart. But I'd like to let you know I apprecitate your efforts.

Reviewer: Nano Annis (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 15

I'm getting worried for Edward - the old inferiority complex is rearing its ugly head again, me thinks.  Your chapters are always interesting and involving and I'm always left hungry for more!

Reviewer: itzmegan73 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 15

thank you for this chapter. I love watching their relationship unfold. And that unsettled feeling you describe between Edward and Bella transfers to me as well. I'm waiting for something bad to happen!

Reviewer: julierae (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 15

I LOVE this story.  I love these two -- I love their conversations and the way they're both such a mixture of certainty and insecurity.  You really make the dialogue pitch-perfect and you do such an incredible job of getting inside their heads even though they're so different.  Beautiful!  Thank you for writing!

Reviewer: pool718 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 15

He's so distracted because he is in love.  I hope Bella feels the same.

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