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Reviewer: FoxxyJ (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 17
I'm so glad she told Charlie. I like that he didn't try to stop her from seeing him. It was well done and i could feel his disappointment. I can't wait for Edward and him to actually meet face to face. That's going to be awkward! Great story.
Reviewer: machismo (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 6
Okay, I've read more twific than I'd like to admit, and I just wanted to say that this is seriously well written. Thank you for it.
Reviewer: FoxxyJ (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 11
Wow, that was the best kissing scene i've read in a long time. So beautiful.
Reviewer: alexandratrueblue (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting story.
Reviewer: alexandratrueblue (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting story.
Reviewer: FoxxyJ (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 7
I love how awkward they are together. So darn cute. You have written that really well. this is great. I'm really enjoying it.
Reviewer: whyuh (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 27
I found myself stunned by your words. Sometimes moved, but always enthralled. This story is raw and brutal. It's awkward and sweet. It's honest. I love that neither of them are perfect, but the imperfections make them real. They become understandable, relateable, and become more than simple characters.
You have a wonderful talent for seeing reality, and while making it entertaining, keeping it true...even brutally so when it's what the character requires. I can't wait to see your talent stretch and grow.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us. I hope it's the first of many!
Thank you again,
whyuh
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 27
OK. That was an acceptable ending. I knew that they would have to work at the relationship. Drugs and alcohol are a bitch, aren't they? Thanks so much for writing. I really loved this story.
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 25
This better have a happy ending or I'm going to be pissed. Just a warning.
Author's Response: Ooooo.... Them's fightin' words..... =)
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 20
He's not going to have to worry about alcoholism or drugs killing him. He's going to die from lung cancer.
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 18
Now, not only is he an alcoholic and an addict, he's an idiot. So, you have 10 chapters left to fix this.
Reviewer: vampluvr25 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey. just thought I'd let you know that I am indeed reading (and LOVING.) But since I'm reading from my celley, reviewing has proven to be difficult. So, with that said, I can't review right away but I am typing them out so as soon as I get my wifi back, I'll post them.
I can review chapter one.
To be frank, I absolutely HATED Edward this first chapter. But when he got himself together at the end I was sooooooo proud of him. I can't wait to see what happens next. xoxo VL25
Reviewer: beans4all (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 27
Magnificent.
Reviewer: beans4all (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 19
*sobbing*...heart is broken....
Reviewer: beans4all (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 15
Why do I get the feeling things aren't as great as they seem...trading one addiction for another.
Reviewer: StylinDa (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 27
Amazing story, words cannot fully express how much I loved reading this story. Your ways with words turned the story into something beautiful :) I loved how it wasn't the typically H.E.A type of story, you really captured the essence of reality and that life fo everyone isnt a 'bed of roses'. The ending of every chapter just made me want to continue and continue reading the story. And i liked how your chapters were decent length, hard to find chapters like that nowadays lol :)
You're a great writer and I just want to thank you for putting in the time and effort of writing such an enjoyable story :D xx
Reviewer: beans4all (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
Holy shit, this is raw. Excellent writing.
Reviewer: totallygone425 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 27
Wow! My emotions are all over the place! This story really took me to a world I've heard about but it was so descriptive I felt like I was there!!!!!
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
Gee, that should keep anyone away from drugs.
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 3
Its an interesting , full bodied, meaty story so far...love the way you write.
Reviewer: HoochieMomma (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
Whoa. Just WHOA.
Superbly, excellently written. But you know that already. Can't wait to read the rest of this story. :)
Reviewer: ilovelatif (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 27
beautiful story. exceptionally written. honestly, i've been on this site for about six months now and this is the first i have ever felt the urge to review. i just wanted you to know that you are incredibly talented. seriously, started reading yesterday and could not leave the computer untill i finished 27.
Reviewer: angelspinknose (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 11
I love how real the chapter is.
Reviewer: angelspinknose (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 8
Like how they are unsure at the beginning. Sick to death of reading stories where they immediately fall in love at first sight and everything is perfect.
Reviewer: Katiedid (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 27
Great, great story! Thank you for telling us how E felt after he ended it with B. I wondered when you would tell us.
Your descriptions are great, not to frilly or space-fillers.
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