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Reviewer: StarLightSuccubus (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 16

Absolute perfection honey!

I love it.

Wording, topics, everyting. LOVE IT!

The ILY on his part. My stomach fluttered! YAY!

XOXO,

SLS

Reviewer: tmbleweed17 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 16

well hott damn...thats some delicious smexin!!! awwww he loves her...this just all seems fast and disastrous...but hopefully not... :)

Reviewer: saltygoodness24 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 16

Your story is so unspeakably gorgeous and I cherish every installment. The raw, real description that you use is palpable. The interactions between characters, both dialogue and physical interactions are more authentically real than anything I have ever read. You have such a gift for bringing things to life, even if this story does have a heartbreaking undertone.

I love that Edward told her how he felt and I love that she didn't say it back as a reflex and rather took it to heart. I'm so happy to be on this journey with them and can't wait to see where they go.

Thank you so much for writing and for sharing with us. I wish I could offer more than just a few words of praise to express my gratitude for your time and sharing of this important story! :)

Reviewer: grabadietcoke (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 16

so, umm, with the antibiotics, are we heading for pregnancy?

I like that Alice knows finally. =)

Author's Response:
Oh dear lord, no. =) There will be no pregnancy. No pregnancy scare. No, no, and no.

Reviewer: Elizmeagan (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 16

Absolutely love this story. I have re-read it lots of times (more times than I can count) and wanted to tell you how great I think it is!

Is there going to be lots of angst in this story? If so, I can see it coming....the upcoming separation and worries about their differences. I can't wait.

Thanks again for this story.

Reviewer: greeneyedmonster (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 16

I agree with your point, a_muse1, that it is an A-typical romance. Of course those happen, it is central to the conflict of this fantastic characterization. I really wish I had just said I think Bella would be (privately) squirming a little more when it came to bedrooms with safes in them and what Charlie is going to think. That's it.

Reviewer: fancastride (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 2

Bella seems to be lost not sure what is going on with her. She needs like she needs someone to help guide her. Nice to see her making friends with Alice and Jasper.

Reviewer: JDSHANNON117 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 16

OH NO!!!! Does Bella realize that when you are on antibiotics your birth control may not work...I do believe her doctor should have told her that! I love your Edward. I picture him in my mind saying the things he says as he changes and developes...building his self esteem. He is so cute and vulnerable, and Bella and he are so great for each other. I don't think they could handle a baby though...but maybe they could. Looking forward to the next update. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: luvmytwins (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 16

Ok, hahahahahah.....

Their bedroom-banter was hilarious!!! That she was laughing while he was "trying to get her off without the use of his fingers or mouth"! That was priceless!!!!

Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 16

I am happy they were both tested because all I could think of was VD. The tieing up Bella sounds good to me too lol :)

Reviewer: cosnmom (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh my god...I just want to cry for them. That was so beautiful and tender and sweet and I feel like I experienced it with them. I couldn't stop smiling and then I hated to see him go at the end. I REALLY want everything to be great for them. I know that it's probably unrealistic, but I want them to be happy so badly. Hearing that Jasper went through rehab 6 (?) times does not make me feel optimistic that Edward's recovery will be smooth. Oh, and I love your Mike- I feel like he tends to get a bad rap in ff most of the time. I think he was a pretty reliable friend to Bella in the books- he tried anyways. This is just an outstanding story. I adore it.

Reviewer: luvmytwins (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 14

I think that has to be the most realistic sex-scene I have ever read. I can't believe how awesome an author you are to be able to convey the awkwardness that generally accompanies 1st timer sex, yet the scene was still extremely sexy and hot.

I laughed when Bella said she lost her virginity on an air mattress - how much more "normal" and un-romantic can you get?!?!?

And then when his cum was pooling between her ass cheeks....... Ipitome of normalcy - regardless of how it sounds, it happens. This was everyday sex not sugar-coated like the other fics I've read. Nice for a change.

Reviewer: Alliez (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 16

I am done and it is awesome and I cannot wait until you update,which is I don't know how often. It's so, so wonderful.

Reviewer: ginabina (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 16

Love your story! Very cute couple they make, but I have a feeling we have some bumps ahead. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Alliez (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 12

This story owns me. I cannot wait to get to the most updated chapter yet I am nervous about it as well. I only want good things and I know that probably won't be the case. It's great.

Reviewer: Kiwi6401 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 16

I don't have anything constructive to say other than I really enjoy your story - so much. I get pathetically excited when I see you updated. Thanks for updating; can't wait to read the rest of it.

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 16

They have been intense in their time together and Bella's body had to react. It's not a huge thing, but something to take care of and they both learn more and find new and different ways of spending time together.

Bella is moving to Seattle, but the move isn't ending what they have. Edward made it clear he plans on visiting so they will still be together it seems.

They have a task that's taking lots of time and it seems that finally things are moving, at least a bit. They don't mind the work for it, but it has to sometimes be difficult to try so much and get so little from it.

Reviewer: twifan925 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

So did the doctor forget to tell Bella that antibiotics reduce the efficiency of birth control pills?? Or are we assuming that Bella already knows that?? Just curious...

Reviewer: luvmytwins (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh, my! That make-out scene was adorable! The way you described it, it was like being a teenager all over again - and yet, they're 23 and 27! It was so innocent and sweet and tender and gentle......

Reviewer: luvmytwins (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 7

Read a rec for your story by the author of Edward Wallbanger on ff.net. She was RAVING about it and so I figured I'd give it a shot. Have to admit, up until this point, I wasn't real thrilled. Moved real slow; real dark; and Edward's such a schmuck. So okay, I've made it this far and I'm really beginning to like it. I have to admit, it's got potential - I mean, I've always know it had potential or I wouldn't have made it this far. But now I'm starting to SEE the potential. So now that my intrigue is peaked, I'm going to continue reading. See you on and off. And thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 16

Your description of a UTI was perfect.....and completely cringe-worthy.

The conversation with Alice while tentative and awkward was totally BFF confidential when talking about sex. Suspension of disbelief accomplished....

Edward's birthday presents and his present to Bella was cute, heart-warmingly awkward, but still hot, hot, hot.

The sexploration shows just how amazingly comfortable they have gotten with one another, as did the puzzle piecing and kidding around they were doing.

Great chapter all around....

Reviewer: FunmbiE (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 16

*SIGH* I love your updates, and I love this story!

I'm glad that Edward is open with Bella, and even though Bella doesn't tell Edward that she loves him, she does want him to meet her family, and be in her life well into the future. That has to count for something! I believe Bella when she says that there's nothing that Edward could tell her that would cause her to run away. Although the UTI sucks!

And the oooolala sexy times are just SMOKIN!

Your writing is gr8, so beautiful in its simplicity and honesty. Looking forward to the trip to the mountains!

Thanks!

Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 11

That was such a hot scene in her bedroom. They are finally showing each other how they feel. Great!

Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 16

I love the realism here. These 2 are wonderful together. I love how giving Edward is, yet she still laughs at him. I SO love this story.

Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 10

They are so damned cute together! Love them.

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