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Reviewer: tdaniellautnerfan (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 16
i love the oway edward is like like charlie from the perks of being a wallflower in a sort of way. the way he says things, the way i hear them in my head. i like thi story so much! <3
Reviewer: esmemahina (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 5
ahh .... i love ur writing style. bet u were/are a lit major =)
Reviewer: esmemahina (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 4
great voice and tone
Reviewer: bara (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 16
love this story.
Reviewer: Sebastien Robichaud (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 6
That was a powerful chapter.
Your description of Edward's confession at the AA meeting brought me to tears.
Thank you for writing and being honest in your portrayal of addiction.
SR
Reviewer: Belindella (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, so raw, so descriptive. I feel for this guy, yet at the same time I don't. Very well done.
Reviewer: In_a_blue_bathrobe (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 16
La.
I love the imperfection.
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 16
I am sad to be caught up because of course I want more. It seems time for Bella to grow up a little and woman up to her own emotions. Maybe at the house in the mountains???
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 15
Edward is definitely having to feel the emotions of living and trying to process all of it seems to overwhelm him. You capture it so well.
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 14
Edward is really back to life again. You took him from a walkng zombie to a living, breathing, loving and emotionally involved person. Their relationship is very sweet and loving. The story about loopy fit perfectly. And the sex...is fabulous.
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 13
That was a very hot scene and I am not sure how you even stopped them with your written words for going all the way. Edward was so sweet when he asked if she still like him.
Reviewer: In_a_blue_bathrobe (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 5
There is somewthing so real and perfect about this. I want to hold it in my hands, a used book found under a couch when housesitting, worn and loved and not loaned for fear of losing the only copy.
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 12
The last paragraph was exactly right...the confusion of when a relationship transitions, begins, changes and not just any relationship, but a soulful one that has the chemistry of true, pure love.
Every chapter is gold. Thank you.
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 11
Thank you for that! I've been waiting for the kiss. Of course I know the angst is coming in this...it can't be all sunshine and roses. Please tell me there is an HEA for this and that B/E will be together happy and healthy.
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 10
I was hoping that she stayed with Edward. Can't wait for these 2 to finally kiss and break the friendship barrier. Love your dialogue.
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 9
loved their record store conversation! You are doing a great job developing the story! Every word is perfect.
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 8
I love their awkward firsts as they manuever around their connection and relationship. Really Good!
Reviewer: Daftdaffy88 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 16
Ok, so I'm gonna come out of hiding and just say that the way this fic is so thoroughly thought out has kept me hooked on it. As well as my fic friend. In fact she recommended this to me and I am flamin' grateful. Cheers! Keep up the good work :)
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 7
Loved their first non-date date. Looks like the beginning of a beautiful friendship and love. I am really enjoying your story.
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 6
Edward is definitely coming back to life. Unfortunately the reality is very harsh and at times lonely. Your writing is excellent.
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 5
You are developing this story very well. The characters, the plot and dialogue are all very good and have captured my interest.
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 4
You wrote this chapter so well. From the monotony of life, to the temptation of his past and then to finally reconnect with living and interacting with another human, even if it is just jerking off.
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 16
This was so good and real. You could totally imagine all of this happening in real life. What got me was from the time Edward said he missed fucking her and didn't mind licking her pussy. lol I could just put myself there in that situation and into everything that followed. You've done a great job making this story real and alive. This isn't just another piece of fanfiction but something that touches people. I've praised you from ch.1 and you totally deserve it. I hope you will win some awards soon. And I have to check out your playlist again to see what other great gems you've found for us to hear.
~Shani
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 3
Just started reading your story. Very interesting and well written. Your Bella is very interesting with a nice flair of independence.
Reviewer: susyq (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 16
So, are we tying Bella up now? With this Edward, it should be interesting. I'm curious...was Bella really not thinking of love when she thinks of Edward? I mean she wanted to tell him he had to meet her dad one day, so that implies that she wants him to be around long term. Love wasn't an option for her feelings? Or is she just scared cause she's never been in love before?
Thank you for writing this :)
~Susan
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