UGH!! Such a sad event in which to run into Edward who is apparently now drinking (?)  and maybe a mess again.  It's hard to see her become so vulnerable to him all over again & be willing to be with him so easily.  Where is her strength? didn't she learn anything?  Well written!

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Wow is all I can say!  He has become so very dependent on her and I could see that it would blow up in his face when she left for college. Totally unhealthy for both of them.

And the pieces keep falling into place.  I'm getting anxious about Bella going to Seattle.  But I suppose that's all part of your grand plan.  And I'm okay with that.  I like Edward's willingness to listen to Bella's recommendations, and their interaction was a perfect combination of awkward-adorable.  It made me smile. 

The Jasper tug was an unexpected one, though.  I like it.  I love it when Jasper and Edward run deep.

There's a love-hate relationship between fics and the readers.  The love of long chapters, because we get immersed in the characters, and the story can often swallow us whole.  The hate that when the little white box shows up, singifying the end, we forget details that pulled us from our rooted spaces.  I love that you have a seemlessness to your writing.  It flows beautifully, and the transitions from one space in time to another is really well done.  But it makes me forget little things that make me want more.  I'm a sucker for details...

Bella's perception of Ben and Angela at the bar, her relationship with Seth, and both of them understanding the casualness of it....Alice's gestures toward Jasper at the bar...

But I truly loved this: I continue shelving books, avoiding the space he's occupied as if he were still there.  I think I read it three or four times.  It's heavy and heady and true.  I've had that feeling, I've done that.  It was lovely.

Unf!  OOC, indeed!  I loved the temperature changes.  For whatever reason...They seemed really important to me.  Little notes about his surroundings, and his awareness.  I loved it.  I've been meaning to read this fic for a long, long time now, and I have time.  So let's do this thing, shall we?

Ah so sweet, so tender, so hawt.  The slow build up has been sweet but frustrating. And the point of stopping before going further is understandable in their situation but difficult as well.

Well written & love the humor and teasing within the dialogue.

I'm so happy he's finally ready!

I have often wondered about what a drug addict or alcholic has to go through to hit rock bottom & want to change the situation. You've painted quite a picture of it.  Well written. I look forward to his upcoming changes.

The two of them are just beautiful together, even when they are just being friends. I want them to jump into each other's arms and reunite, but I think the delayed satisfaction is so much better. Their relationship is so much more than them being able to just reunite as soon as they start hanging out again.

I'm glad they got to talk and that it wasn't all rainbows and sunshine. I'm still saddened by the distance between them but I know it's necessary. I hope he doesn't bring a date to the wedding!

You have DEFINATELY had a bladder infection before!  You're description was spot on, and made me cringe AND LOL!

Not sure I agree with what Edward shared at the meeting but I understand how you would want to show Edwards past and progress.  I really appreciate your story.

Edward's daily routine and intellectual struggles with addiction are well written. I don't know where you got the insight but I must say it is dead on.  Really...great job.  I know now why each chapter to this story was highly anticipated.  Thank you for writing.