Really enjoying this story. Your writing is just terrific. 

If you were a painter, you'd be Picasso (blue period).  Your prose is elegant and beautiful and this one made me cry.

What in the world can i say, your writing is amazing.

You are a good writer.

Having said that, this story is gut-wrenching.  Reading it is difficult but writing it must have been 10 times more so.  Thank you for making the effort.

So well done.  I am speechless. 

The BEST kissing scene I have ever read. Like two 15 year olds making out. I could feel the heat all the way over the pacific to here in Australia. Hot Hot Hot!! Oh to be kissed that way again...........THUD!!!!

Sometimes Bella's reactions are frustrating to me because I feel like she should react in a more positive way. But at the same time, the strange (to me) ways she reacts are absolutely perfect and realistic for her character. I also think you did a great job of portraying Edward's addictions and how he's helping himself.

I really love this fic because it's so different and REAL, you know? Not everything is all sewn up neatly about halfway through; Edward and Bella actually have to grow together and deal with how the relationship affects their lives. I'm sorry if this is kind of jumbled, I just REALLY like your style and how you let US figure our whose POV the chapter is in. Great, great fic, and so true to things that a pair like them could actually experience. :)

 

PS: I really loved the line, "fellating under duress." I'm pretty sure I snorted.

You are cracking me up with their conversations. I am turly in love with these two. Enough awkwardness and angst to keep going along with the slow fire building of something truly special between them both.

Hang in there Edward! Just exsist at the moment it gets better and clearer and all of a sudden life begins again. I am so loving this Edward!! Excellent writing and real life observations.

OMG!!! The first half could be any given day in my life. I so love how you wrote that. That it so eloquently said so much about the mundane and coping, just getting by, surviving and hanging on by a thread. So true of reformed addicts just do and it will come. Just do and it will get easier. Loving this story and where it may go. I am in and hooked along for the ride.

YAY seth & anti-Prudella returns ;-).... Oh i like reading E/B progression and them getting to know each other gradually. I also like the simple gestures & mannerisms you write for E&B

I'm really trying to review...won;t let me.

I love this

Aaawww, Seth <3     The Bella/Seth part was actually very sweet!!