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Reviewer: sunnyfara (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 17
Great chapter. I love this story.
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 17
Thinking that they'll have to split soon makes me sad.
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 16
His 'I love you' was so real and so sweet. Can't wait for Bella to say it back. There is something with Edward, makes me upset. I'm afraid, he may think 'I'm unworthy of (her) love.'
Reviewer: Rachell (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 1
I have to check the calander when you update to make sure it's not Christmas OR my birthday. I love this story.
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 15
The way Edward thinks is interesting to me, very much. Cannot get enough of it/him/hisPOV.
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 14
Umm.. No words!
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 13
They have the strenght you know. To be able to stop right there was... something hard to manage. :)
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 12
with every single chapter I'm saying "this is the last one I'm reading. Ten I'm gonna sleep" but here I am reviewing ch 12. *sigh* that's all your brilliancy, you know.
Reviewer: rosmarinastar (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 17
You did a fantastic job writing the convo with Charlie. I'm curious what's up with Rose... The ILY you very real and very tender. Great chapter. :)
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh Good God. That was.... worth to wait. :)
Reviewer: hippietrixi (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 10
They make me smile. :) Sweet sweet progress...
Reviewer: mllebojangles (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 17
I feel like each update to this story is a huge gift just for me in my inbox. This is one of my FAVORITE stories ... and I always cannot wait for the next chapter. Love this story!
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 9
I feel happy when they are around each other. :)
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 8
Why are these two breaking my heart so bad?
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 7
They are so sweet. I like how you described uncomfortable moments along with comfortable ones. Cannot wait for Saturday. Oh ho.. I don't have to wait. I'll go and read it right now. :)
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 6
It was hard to read the part where Edward share something from his past. It cleared the picture for me and made me see how fucked up he actually is.
Reviewer: LadyMC (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 17
Poor E :( He really got dumped on this chapter! I guess Charlie's reaction is understandable to a degree, however I think some of the things he said were out of line. Edward has been doing really well and he deserves some credit for that. Charlie saying 'he will' relapse was really unfair, he could have got his point across to Bella a different way. Like maybe saying 'there is a strong possibility he will relpase'. But to just write him off like that was just wrong. Then there's Rosalie...now granted I don't know for sure what her deal is, but it obviously has to do with Edward. I could be way off but I'm gonna take a guess and say it has to do with his past and him being an addict. You would think she would be more understanding given her brothers circumstances. Further she doesn't even know Bella and her snap judgements about her and her relationship make it all the worse.
Anyway I just feel really sorry for Edward. It's like no one can look past his mistakes and see that he's really trying. He's at a delicate point in his recovery and could use all the support he can get. I really hope he doesn't relapse now more than ever. I SO want him to prove them all wrong! I can just imagine the I told you so's if he does. Thank God for Bella and her faith in Edward. I'm scared about what will happen when she goes to Seattle but I'm so happy she told him she loves him. I'll be rooting for these two, there so sweet together.
Awesome, amazing chapter! I'm always left thinking after every update! Your writing is so realistic, it makes me feel like this is happening to friends of mine. Thanks for the update, hope to see you again soon :)
Reviewer: CaterinaM (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 7
Wow, nice job. You write lovely, believable dialogue. And that was a spot-on depiction of a first quasi-date between two people who don't know each other. The cringe-inducing silences, the awkwardness, the saying of things you wish you hadn't said, ugh, who can't relate to that?
Your EPOV is great. Really captivating.
I'm really looking forward to seeing their relationship progress.
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 5
It breaks my heart when Edward tries/wishes to be invisible.
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 4
thanks for making them speak with each other. :)
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 3
this building anticipation is killing me.
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 17
As much as I hate how Charlie is behaving, as a parent I completely understand. He is just being protective of his daughter.
I wonder how Edward is going to handle Bella being in Seattle going to school and having Mike visit? I wonder how he will handle meeting Charlie? And when will Edward take Bella to meet his Aunt/Uncle?
Love the way they wrap themselves around one another and that they say ILY.
Great chapter.
Reviewer: Veeisme (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 17
I really like the tone of this story. It feels very real. Unfortunately, it also feels like the angst is on the way. Great writing, can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: crooked smile (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 2
I'm glad to meet with Bella. Can't wait to see how Edward and Bella will start to communicate.
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